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TKB17 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 9:07pm

Nicely done! Congrats on turning 40 and having a good time!

Really enjoyed this. A few issues though: 1) is it's fairly scant on the details. Victoria being short, for example, didn't really hit home until the last few paragraphs. Considering its nature as a 'short', one chapter work though that's the nature of the beast, which also ties into 2) I felt that the Malfoys and other Death Eaters switched sides a little too easily.

Still really enjoyed it, especially how you portrayed Astoria and Ron. The plot was well done, the characters memorable, and the conclusion well put together.

Thanks for posting,

TKB17

GinnyLover posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 8:52pm

Great story! Love the pairing! Do not get to see that very often.

Streteched the limit of length? It stretched so far it snapped! We dont mind though!

BJH posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 7:49pm

Easily up to your typical high standards.

Although I am a bit surprised that Hestia never made a "Just goin' with the Flo" pun.

Thabnks for writing and posting.

BJH

diagonalpumpkin posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 4:49pm

Glad to hear from you. I really loved the story. I've been trying to find good Harry/Astoria stories since you wrote Blue Steel (as well as Harry/Romilda, but that is a bit tougher to find), so I was really happy to have this one fill that gap. It seemd to have a bit of El Roche in the background which was fun, and I loved the reference to Astoria's cap from Blue Steel. That got me laughing, which really confused my wife. I apprecaited the Slytherin tendencies of everyone involved, and the fact that they weren't all goody-goody characters. As you said, they lied and did things that weren't nice, but they didn't really do anything evil (well, the kids didn't...the Legilimency to adjust memories was a bit evil, at least on Draco). Also, great job with James talking to Harry when he was at the inbetween. It's not something that I've seen often, and I think you did a great job with it. And it was nice to see you give James a chance rather than having Lily talk to him (again like you did in BS). Altogether a wonderful short(ish) story. Thank you for sharing :)

sunsethill8 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 1:49pm

I greatly enjoyed this story and the way you used and tweaked some common tropes to make quite an enjoyable and unique story. I especially want to point out that I cried at Isabelle's and Lucius' reactions to realizing that they did not need to send her away. That whole section was quite beautiful.

GBTtown posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 1:00pm

You have written some awesome stories in the past. This effort stands now among them.

Well written, well thought out and blows canon out of the water. All pluses in my book.

ficbob posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 12:43pm

I was very happy to see a new idea from you turned into a story.

And it is a good story. I will admit to it not being my favorite(Blue Steel, Wild Horses) but a darn good fic.

The school club idea was good and not getting bogged down in every little thing really helped make this s good read. The best part though was Lucius and Narcissa being real people that made a mistake when younger and love their children. Actually, keeping the 'adult' involvement to a minimum was a good idea.

Thanks and I am looking forward to your next addition.

Happy Birthday -ain't no way I am jumping out of a perfectly good plane and paying money fro it.

theshadow603 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 10:30am

Stunning. Another exellently executed and elegantly cute character exploration. Jeconais, I salute you!

Skylar_Croft posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 10:14am

This was absolutely fantastic. Thank you for sharing!!

Jimbocous posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 8:33am

Thanks for a great read. Glad to see you back in HP - verse. Always appreciated!

HarnGin posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 6:52am

I enjoyed reading this so much that I read it instead of going to bed. I'm going to blame you when the boss asks about my lack of focus.:D

immortal7 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 5:44am

It took me all day, but I enjoyed the world you created here. And while not a fan of Hermione bashing this came off as needed in a way. Also that being said so glad Ron still stayed Harry's friend and a normal teenager. I hate Ron bashing and this Ron came across as a decent bloke. Till next time.

Lisagrace posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 5:44am

Loved the story. Loved how harry's friends in the club changed his focus. Victoria was cool, Astoria gave Harry what he needed and all the pure bloods realized what idiots they had for offspring.

Toby860 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 4:58am

A well done story. Your style was very fitting for this one. Some of this seams more realistic than some of the canon books

joeBob posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 4:48am

Thanks for posting.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 4:41am

I admit I like this story more then I thought I would, I like Harry is paired with Astoria. For that pairing I would keep on reading

mwinter posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 4:40am

Love the one shot and glad your still writing. I started early last night to read it. 40 minutes into the next day and I'm done. Well done in deed on the story.

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 3:13am

Great story! Thanks for writing. I was just little disappointed that Luna wasn't more prominent. The club would have been so god for her. Perhaps another short one about Luna in the club?

Jonn_Wolfe posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 3:07am

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. Vastly different, yet still compelling.

Normally, I've seen bad Malfoys, good Malfoys and misunderstood Malfoys. Having them actually be believable and familiy oriented, along with their opportunistic ways, was a brilliant move. Yes, they're still snobs, but they love each other.

It was a surprise, seeing Tori as she was in this. The cunning little Slytherin who actually gave a damn. Excellent work.

And honestly, I love the ending. Draco so deserved that.

I say again, Brilliant!

Orion posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2016 2:55am

This was excelent. You've done a number stories about Harry befriending a different group of students in the last couple years (Blue Steel and Hogwarts Dawn come imidiately to mind) this was another great one.

Your take on the Malfoys in this was interesting here. I've seen versions of them before as more family oriented and willing to switch sides, but this may be the first one I've seen where Lucius and Narcissa were honestly surprised and unhappy with Draco's real personality.

Once again, thank you for writing and sharing it with us.