b sands posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 1:37am for Chapter 1

great first chapter! you have the mannerisms down well and this is a refreshing take on Naruto. Keep it up!

Punster-Zero posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 12:26am for Chapter 1

Very nice, very very nice, I could tell you had fun writing this one... probably as much fun as I had reading it :)

I really like your recreation of Naruto's character, and love the original jutsus you've come up with - and can't wait to find out what else you're going to unleash upon our poor minds ;)

Will be waiting for your next chapter update with great anticipation.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 11:16pm for Chapter 1

Fun story. Not sure about the 'category' though.

Comedy & Humor? Yes. (Not sure what the difference is.)
Fluff? (shrug) Sure, I'll buy that.
Action/Adventure, Angst & Drama? Not so much. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us. It was fun to read, and I hope fun to write.

jariuth posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 10:22pm for Chapter 1

haven't laughed so much in a long time!
BRILLIANT! can't wait for the next chap!

AK posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 10:17pm for Chapter 1

Hey,

Nice seeing a post from you again. Good to know you're still around! As for the story, not your best work in my opinion. It tries to sell the silly and funny but for me it rates at a mere "meh". I find it strange that it lacks the one thing I'm most used to seeing in your stories, strong character and relationship development. Even if I don't disagree about wanting the twins...

ThunderGod posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:44pm for Chapter 1

Love this story..way funny....and I hope this means an entry into writing Naruto stories:}

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:23pm for Chapter 1

Never really been a fan of this anime beyond a few fanfic, but you have definitely written a winner, thanks.

Stuunad posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 8:37pm for Chapter 1

Brilliantly funny.

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 7:12pm for Chapter 1

Whoohoo!
Glad to see something from you. And a new branch in subjects to boot. awesome and hilarious first chapter. Hope to see more soon.
You are one of my favorite authors. Hope to see you with more...and hopefully something of "Wild Horses". its too good of a story to leave unfinished.
Michael

Marius DeJordan posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 7:09pm for Chapter 1

Congratulations Tim.

Another great and unique story. I love your Naruto. He is sly as a fox. Kawaii No Jutsu! snicker. Thanks for sharing and I wait for the next chapter.

Marius

ikestorm posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 6:25pm for Chapter 1

The sheer amount of times you used the word kawaii made my brain bleed.

Randy Mickle posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 6:12pm for Chapter 1

Great start and its funny as hell.

grey_shadow_horse posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 4:44pm for Chapter 1

nice chapter :) I like those new jutsu. I liked how all those jounin cliche behavior are fake. It seems logical to fake a weakness.
Good luck with the next chapter.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 1:43pm for Chapter 1

LOL! More indepth and a slower buildup might have been more fun, but I giggled like a lunatic while reading this.

zagan posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 11:56am for Chapter 1

Okay, just no. I admit it's your style but I stop at the Kawai no jutsu. They're funny ridiculous and just ridiculous, this fic is the later.
The uter dismissal of Hinata in one phrase was low too, that you don't want a Naru/Hina I can accept but that's just mean for no reason.
It's great to see you try your hand at Naruto and I'm all for that, I might even go back to this fic later. But at the moment no.

Nuit Tombee posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:24am for Chapter 1

LMFAO...That's one of the silliest stories that I've ever read and yes Pudgypudge is really good. Waiting patiently for Second Year Slytherins ~ Update! Ja Ne (Goodbye/Farewell)

Daenin posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:16am for Chapter 1

I love it! *is laughing and giggling* It's awesome, wonderful, cute, sad, and... very, very funny!

h_p4eva posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:12am for Chapter 1

Hi nice to see a new story from you, I loved this chapter very well written and sooo funny keep up the good work. Ive read lots of naruto and seen lots of techniques and ive never seen one as good as the kawaii jutsu rofl.

Rob Roy Baars posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:00am for Chapter 1

This is great, I haven't had as much fun reading in a while.
I really hope you update this regularly

Chris1 posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 8:55am for Chapter 1

I can't really take this fic seriously. But I loved every minute of it :D Thank you for sharing!

Chris