Zannahipbane posted a comment on Friday 15th December 2017 4:03am for Chapter 1
Must have more... seriously I love your writing, and am on a re reading kick... but , wait that doesn’t sound right, no butts, your a great
author... is this story still being written, or did it die a writers block death?
tavin93 posted a comment on Friday 3rd May 2013 11:13pm for Chapter 1
This story is great I was laughing through most of it. At first I thought is wouldn't turn out so well because of how Naruto pranked the villagers but you did a remarkable job. I cant wait to read
gara5289 posted a comment on Tuesday 12th June 2012 5:14am for Chapter 1
One of my absolute favorite fanfics as i am now rereading after a week. But seriously, it's the most amusing Naruto fic i've ever read and yet it's not a crack fic.
gara5289 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2012 4:12pm for Chapter 1
Single most amusing chapter of fanfiction i've ever read, made even better by subtly using some cliches to have a lot of fun. Great story. Also amused at how you are using the fox.
xardoth posted a comment on Monday 1st August 2011 3:24am for Chapter 1
Hey, I decided to read this again in its entirety because I somehow missed your two updates this last month, and I noticed your last AN describing that the current generation of kids are a bit older, 16/17. I was just wondering where exactly that time was injected story-wise. I assume it was after the Kyuubi attacked? Did Itachi get 3 more years of living with his family before he went psycho on his family? that sort of thing. If it wasn't that thought out, thats fine with me too, I was just curious if you had planned where those extra years were put in.
iTz_RAVEN posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 5:57pm for Chapter 1
*snicker* Kawaii no Jutsu is so beast.
michaelsuave posted a comment on Friday 8th July 2011 4:38am for Chapter 1
Funny! So very very funny and well thought out. Good job on this first chapter; I loved it. Cheers!
EDelta88 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 8:01pm for Chapter 1
dan26 posted a comment on Saturday 8th January 2011 5:29am for Chapter 1
Kurenai shook her head, an amused smile on her face. “So, what the hell is going on with Kakashi?”
“Huh?” Anko asked.
“Naruto, he was polite to us, to Hiashi, but not to Sakura, Sasuke or Kakashi. Something is going on there, because he clearly doesn’t have respect for them.”
Replace the Kakashi with Naruto
katrinadax posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 2:56pm for Chapter 1
This story is freakin awesome! I love how you have Sasuke finally showing his insanity and getting thrown in the loony bin. 2 thumbs up!!
LordSia posted a comment on Thursday 9th December 2010 4:29am for Chapter 1
One chapter down, three more to go - and I'm already annoyed you haven't written more.
Rivan posted a comment on Wednesday 1st December 2010 1:50pm for Chapter 1
Pure insanity and yummy tummy madness!
A hillarious tale that has my complete respect.
Richard Robinson posted a comment on Thursday 14th October 2010 3:19am for Chapter 1
LOL I laughed till I cried Then laughed some more!
Jewelle posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 3:58am for Chapter 1
rofl... Loved this chapter. Naruto has started to use his brain, Sasuke will hopefully gets some psychological help, and Sakura will, also hopefully, learn that there is more in life than a pretty face and romantic figures.
slickrcbd posted a comment on Friday 30th July 2010 7:24pm for Chapter 1
The one flaw I see in this is the line about Hanabi never having seen a male before. Hanabi has X-Ray vision like superman thanks to her bloodline, and has been getting training on using it from her father. I can't believe that she hasn't seen her father's genitals and those of the other Hyuga males at the very least using the byakugan.
dan26 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th May 2010 4:22am for Chapter 1
Hanabi looked up and glared at him.
Naruto tried, he really did. The talk about decorum from Foxy-chan last night went through his mind. He tried to resist. But he couldn’t.
“Kawaii!” he yelled, and pounced from his sitting position, glomping the girl.
What an unusual thing to find cute. How old is Hanabi in this?
BrotherBludgeon posted a comment on Sunday 23rd May 2010 4:16am for Chapter 1
I always knew if Sakura hit him enough she'd eventually knock something loose.
Pai posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 4:28am for Chapter 1
Well this is one hell of an entertaining and interesting fic. Im rather interested in where your going to take it.
switchhammerhit posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 3:56pm for Chapter 1
Thank you for a very entertaining start to a new story. It's always nice to enjoy a few laughs.
I thought the way that you portrayed the characters was very well done even though other reviewers seem to think otherwise. I have enjoyed Naruto for years and could see that each character was done well.
I have enjoyed some of your other stories very much, "Hope", "This Means War", "White Knight, Gray Queen" and if this is as good as those then we are in for a treat to be sure.
I am looking forward to your next update. How often do you plan to update and how long do you plan to make the story?
Naruto and Hinata, that's how it should be (my opinion).
tanmay2 posted a comment on Thursday 6th May 2010 4:25am for Chapter 1
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE the story, its frekin hilarious. kawaii no jutsu.. hahaha. i liked the prank idea to fool the village, would you mind if i used it for a story i might write? please.. thanks