Zach posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 4:27pm for 6 - Tintagel

I really like this story and can't wait till the next part comes out.

margaret1 posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 4:18pm for 6 - Tintagel

Absolutely beautiful chapter — I honestly can’t think of the words to describe how truly magnificent this chapter was. The kiss was perfect, Harry is perfect, and Gabby explaining why she loves Harry was perfect — and falling asleep together was, you guessed it — perfect.

I know I’m gushing like an idiot, I’ll try and make sense now ;)

I liked that you explained more about the bond and its affects on Gabby, showing that it hasn’t been easy on her either, Harry may have just found out about the bond, but Gabby has lived with this for 8 years — suffering each time Harry made love to another woman, I think that is enough punishment for a mistake made at the age of eight.

I can’t wait for Malfoy to try and take Gabby from Harry — the idiot really won’t know what has hit him (when both Harry and Gabby finish with him). Taking Beauxbatons to England should be very interesting — especially with Fred and George involved.

Margaret

ichtys posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 4:00pm for 6 - Tintagel

Great chapter. I'll write more later (when I'm awake)
Ichtys

Nick5 posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:56pm for 6 - Tintagel

Somehow I don't see Draco ... well, LIVING very long after this plan of his happens, nor do I see Hogwarts standing for very long if those three somehow manage to get away with it. More, soon, please.

Chomas posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:53pm for 6 - Tintagel

You get a midnight review from Germany.

At first I want to say that summoning the golden egg is a great idea. I read it and I believe I looked like a gold-fish :)

Your Arthurian'S history session have made me realising that I should try and read them!

HArry/Gabb(y)riele: I don' know what to say. Great! Gabby the wild. Gabby the Healer.
You should have describted Harry's face/emotions while Gabby is dressing for bed!

A good sleep to you and Harry/Gabby and me to!;)

Unnecassary to say: Keep Going and take your time!

Anastasia posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:46pm for 6 - Tintagel

Just when I thought that it couldn't get any better, it does.

I think that you developed the characters and their personalities very well in this story.

Just out of curiosity how many chapters will this story end up being? The more the better

There was one sentence which I thought had a mistake in it but I'm not sure

Dumbledore dumped you like a piece of trash and ignored you were useful to him again.

Shouldn't it be: Dumbledore dumped you like a piece of trash and ignored you until you were useful to him again.

But anyways, other than that it's pretty darn good.

Keep up your fantastic work

Update soon

Anastasia

Exarikun posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:30pm for 6 - Tintagel

nice. say, are you do you have psy powers? i went to watch the movie of hp4 and you're the first person i know of those that went to watch the movie that asked the same question as i did: why didn't he summon the egg? everyone seems to find it completely natural to summon his broom, but not the egg...

anyway, nice chapter. this story is starting to grow on me. heh, can't wait to see malfoy crash and burn when he tries something with gabby. and snape and apparently, the old bat too. in my opinion, you can turn the dumbledore hatred a notch higher. that man needs to learn he's not god, nor are his meddlings wanted.

love the suggestion of moving the entire beaubatons castle. that'll shock the shit out of the old meddling fool.

hope to see another update soon, and from your other stories as well. (hint, hint)

Janara posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:29pm for 6 - Tintagel

I find that I actually like this story. Normally I don't like Het HP stories, but this one is emotional, exciting, frustrating and romantic. A good mix and Harry's feelings are well written out. All the Dumbledore bashing is an added bonus, lol. If there is one man I don't like it's Albus Dumbledore. Please update soon.

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:26pm for 6 - Tintagel

Excellent believable intimacy without overdoing it too badly. The Arthurian legend bit, the fish & chips & golfing, the mild asides involving Hogwarts staff and the Gryffindor crew... very fun. Wonderful chapter. Thank you for updating on a holiday!

Ron posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:22pm for 6 - Tintagel

Actually, your changes to the legend make it much closer to the truth, except for the era.