noylj posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 11:04pm for 12 - London(2)

Love the story but was hoping for Dumbles to be under Snape's control, but dementia works. Especially if it explains all the screwed up things that Dumbles did to get the Potters killed and Harry marked and abused.
Ireally wish that we could have more Harry/Gabby...Maybe a chapter a year just to keep up with their life.

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 10:50pm for 12 - London(2)

Once again, a masterful work. Don't know that I can say anything more rofound than that. I'm glad that there is still an eilogue, as you could have just said, "the end" and left us hanging.

Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

sbrighton posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 10:07pm for 12 - London(2)

Astounding. I have read everything you have written and all I can do is hope for more!

Matt Bergink posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 9:49pm for 12 - London(2)

Thank you for this, and all of your other, stories. More importantly, thank you for finishing your stories. It takes a lot of sifting through garbage to come across a decent fanfiction author (let alone a great one)and far too often the stories wind up abandoned. I would like to suggest an author to you. I know that you 'dislike' Fanfiction.net, but that is the only site that I know of where his work is published. His name on that site is Nonjon. His work makes me think of what you would wright if you got considerably more perverted. I mean that in a good way. Nonjon's work is mature rated for a reason, but it's very well written, and more importantly, it's hilarious.

I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Sincerely,
Mattmbergink@bearmountain.ca

pyrodaemon posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 9:48pm for 12 - London(2)

All most over? *crushed* That's horrible! I really enjoy reading this story! lol.

But onto the really reason you're reading this...

I really do love this story. Its very well written, you hashed out all your details, I didn't see any major conflicts in plot details and only one very minor one early in the story that wasn't worth mentioning. The entire story's descriptions in the story were well written and extensive without being overly flowery or excessive. There were a few words that were confused like (but not actually) how people flip their and there. It wasn't glaringly obvious but it was there a little (it impossible to hash it all out of a story, isn't it, when the chapters are all this *big*).

I really loved the interactions between Harry and those around him. The way his friends stopped everyone from truly bothering him without him even being aware of it. All the interactions in the story (and not just those between Harry/ex.) were beautifully written.

The only regret I have about the story ending here (or in the eppy, anyways) is that we didn't get to see what Merlin was truly like. We got a little background on him but nothing to extensive. I'd have really loved to see 'A Day in the Life of' type thing with him. What you have written about him and his wife just makes me what to see it all the more, lol.

This is a beautiful, lovely story there really just aren't words to describe it and I wish it didn't have to end.

Cheers.

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 9:01pm for 12 - London(2)

kool so is tasht it my dear friend

Aaron posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 8:25pm for 12 - London(2)

p.s. I mean 'unbeleivable' to mean 'incredible' and 'awesome', not 'I didn't beleive you'.

Hehe.

Aaron posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 8:24pm for 12 - London(2)

Oh man, this has got to be one of your most impressive chapters to date in any story. One minute we're in a quidditch match, and then out of the blue people are throwing killing curses around. Unbeleivable!

The Dumbledore Plot, finally unveiled, was just masterfully done... hehe, it's hard for me to get really really pissed at Dumb-As-A-Door. I guess to me he'll always be the guy the who eats children's candy and spouts off "Alas, Earwax!" afterwards. But I think you've finally done it for me with this story... the 2nd Task was such a long time ago! And he was already an interfering bastard! Lord V wasn't even ressurrected yet! Just unbelievable.

Incredible work, thanks for all your time and talent!

Jason9 posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 8:21pm for 12 - London(2)

All in all, a fantastic story. Yet another instance in where you change my opinion of you as an Author. Enjoyed Hope immensely, and hope you continue to pick original pairings, if for no other reason than to keep me open-minded. Also, I would love to see some more of your drabbles developed further, but as always, will read anything you post. Thanks for another great story.

redjacobson posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 8:14pm for 12 - London(2)

wow! That's intense stuff! I actually just read the entire story; and I'll admit; I'm impressed. I still think that the veela is a poor idea; I just don't care for the idea; but you did a good job with it. Now; I'll be waiting for the epilogue and see what happens to the rest of the characters. I am curious though; Ginny only gets a couple of mentions; and Luna one mention? I figured they would at least have one or two lines of dialogue.

So; what's next? Any possibility of the WK,GQ wrap up; or; please; please please; More of Wild Horses or The Warrior and the Witch?

Red

djbe posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 8:00pm for 12 - London(2)

Fantastic! Thanks for all the great work!

T.Zukumori posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 7:55pm for 12 - London(2)

Thank you once again for a beautifully crafted work; you've created a beautiful world where one can spend time without regret. Though I am sad that this is ending, I do look forward to your epilogue and future works; and, as others have already said, now I can revisit your opus at my leisure on the road.

Once again, beautiful writing. Superb story.

Kindest regards,
-T.Zukumori

GknightS posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 7:48pm for 12 - London(2)

aww man.. after a few hours i feel so sad.. that this beautiful story has ended.. sigh.. i can't believe this is over.. are you going to write another Harry Gabrielle story? she really is a wonderful girl.

uberwald posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 7:41pm for 12 - London(2)

well done, mate :)

maritza posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 7:38pm for 12 - London(2)

So no asking about the night-club outfit?
*sounds of gigiling in the background*

Hey and it is only 11:32 pm so I manage to read this with out showing up at work tomorrow
like a zombie and laugh when people ask me
Way are so sleepy?
Err...nothing,
yeah like I'm going to tell them
I just coulden't sleep reading and uptdate of my favorites stories

So my review *yes I'm to chatty today*
I'm so happy that you continue with this story,
aldo you seem more mature
in your writing style,
I have enjoy it all
you have being very creative,
romantic a bit naughty wich I like,
and I was surprise to see so much happen
in one chapter,
but that might have being by you
spoling us roten,
giving us very long stories with
no end in sight,
So yes I'm a bit sad to see it go,
but happy there is one more coming,
and I love the fact that I we had a pick in to your brain with the none night club outfit,
that I wont mention at all.

Thank you for lettting us in to your
personal fic world.

bigzj51 posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 7:34pm for 12 - London(2)

Dude Grade A awesome

patsh posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 7:03pm for 12 - London(2)

This was amazing and has left a smile on my face that I doubt will go away all evening. Thank you.

Maria3 posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 6:44pm for 12 - London(2)

I love it! Beautiful, absolutely beautiful...

morriganscrow posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 6:43pm for 12 - London(2)

That was really excellent!
Draco got a most fitting end, as did the Merpeople. Dumbles has a brain like swiss cheese and yet will have to face the music. Viktor got himself a cute Chaser.
All in all, a very happy ending.
I look forward to the epilogue.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 6:38pm for 12 - London(2)

Just so many fine touches and well crafted details. Too many to mention, but I must say having Neville capture Snape, and beat him twice in a minute or so, was very satisfying.

Great all around!