By Jeconais
Reviews
rejndzer87 posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2013 9:40pm
interesting. as you stated in the opening remarks, rather over the top, but very conscious of the fact, and thus impressively executed. most kids seem a bit too mature at one point or another, but if i can read through a story of an 11 year old harry as a very successful headmaster of hogwarts, i can damn well read this without complaint. looking forward to reading more of this story.
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2013 10:57am
I really like this story. Harry is really a mover and shaker in this story. He sets people up in their dreams. He offers them training in what they want to do in life. He makes the things they want to do affordable and supports them up front but expects to see a profit down the line. I love the way Hogwarts is catering to him. He doesn't ask but she gives. It is great that Dumbledore is trying to repay Harry for all the mistakes in made in Harry's life. The talk with McGonagal was great. I love the way Dumbledore shot down her wish to control Harry and make him follw rules. The relationship with Fleur and Gabrielle is complicated but because they are Veela it makes sense. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
cjonbloodletter posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2013 5:35am
You know, at the end of all this it would be hilarious to find out that Harry really is the decendent of Mum-Ra.
Children-of-Bodom posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2013 1:16am
Thanks for the new chapter. I loved it!
But your last AN had me scared. I hope your cynicism does not cause you to abandon writing any romance or definite couples in the future. Because that has always been one of the things to count on in a Jeconais fic ;)
WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Wednesday 6th February 2013 2:14am
I have to say that if Hogwarts can manifest a body, or possess an existing body, Harry would find himself unable to get out of bed for a very long time. The school also seems kind of stalker-ish with Harry by the comment that it has a longer memory of Harry than Harry has of her. It would figure that Harry and Hogwarts created a new "house", in the actual sense more than the figurative. If the school was not jealous of him before, it will be when they figure things out on who all is in the new house and whom the head of house is.
Brad1 posted a comment on Wednesday 6th February 2013 12:13am
love the new chapter!
Brad
selonianth posted a comment on Tuesday 5th February 2013 10:51pm
Sometimes it's best to think of Harry as the Wizarding Tony Stark. Rules, regulations, timetables, etc etc are all well and good... except when they get in his way. Then they have to suspend themselves and let him do whatever he wants.
Man of Kent - Railwayman posted a comment on Tuesday 5th February 2013 6:05pm
A relly excellent chapter of an excellent story
Zooxle posted a comment on Tuesday 5th February 2013 6:29am
You did it again. You did the same last year, the day before university starts up again you update my favourite story. No i'm not just saying that. Of the thousands of fics i've read, Hogwarts' Dawn is by far my favourite and the one i wait for the most. I don't even know what to say. I love the plot, the characters, the settings. Mostly I love the interctions between characters.
Anyway i'll wait patiently for the next installment and go read perfect slytherins now.
Huge Fan,
Zooxle
LooneySlytherin posted a comment on Tuesday 5th February 2013 3:07am
Harry should totally be with Aurora!!!!!!!!!
Macsr711 posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 11:56pm
Love it, thank you for (again) sharing your talents with us all - most excellent story, one that I cannot see where it is going - and you know, I'm just fine with that....
Crys posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 6:36pm
*laugh* good ending to the chapter
Okay, the chapter overall simply progressed lots of threads. The "house" that Hogwarts provided is a different twist on something occassionally seen, but isn't overused as of yet.
Fleur as a cook? That's new. That dinner sounded WAY over the top. Which is, of course, the point.
Harry doesn't give things away, he provides opportunities. A theme you've used before to great effect.
My commisserations on your RL issues. If there's anything I can do, let me know.
Quite enjoying the story.
Nytefyre posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 3:42am
Very nice chapter. I like the realism of the relationships.. and am waiting to see the outcome of Hogwarts' crush on Harry.. what happens when he doesn't return the next year?
Thanks for posting.
wackey posted a comment on Monday 4th February 2013 1:45am
I have enjoyed this story since you started it. I like the way that you have Harry being much more confident with what is happening. I see several possibilities where you are going and just want to hold on for the ride. Please keep up the good work. Waiting for a new chapter is sweat torture. Thanks.
delrusant posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 9:11pm
light to serious, quick and slow paces, humorous and thougt provoking
you manage to surprise me as you blend all of this together and make a really entertaining story
I hope despite a cynism check you'll continue to work for you goals as this chapter "preaches"
thanks for what you offers to us readers
ThunderGod posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 8:13pm
once again a great chapter, and I am sad to see another cynic arise (as I am one myself) BUT your writing is always excellent
Pennywise posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 8:04pm
Awesome chapter.
The Seeker posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 7:51pm
As usual, this chapter is littered with bon mots, interesting twists and turns, and wonderful exchanges between the various characters in this story, all of them wonderfully wrought. Harry weaving magic through the school, with Hogwarts help, was probably the highlight.
The last sentence in your ending AN was disconcerting. Without meaning to overstep, I hope all is well with you.
TheGrimmChaos posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 7:37pm
Loved it! XD
Update AsAp
keichan2 posted a comment on Friday 8th February 2013 6:34pm