By Jeconais
Reviews
DrT posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 1:05pm
So, will the story be retitled "Hogwarts' Dawn" or "Dawn Hogwarts"?
Frederick Herriot posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 12:26pm
Wow! Creating one's own magical AI?! What else can Harry do now?
Galen Salvatore posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 12:08pm
Very nice, as always and as expected of you - though of your current works-in-progress, I still prefer "The Perfect Slytherins," myself. :)
joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 11:26am
Alas, this story is losing it's charm for me. Harry now seems like a cross between a Mary Sue and one of those deluded, "High D", dot-com executives from 1999.
But, on the other hand, he was just raped by a Scottish castle, so all hope is not lost. ;)
Thanks for the update.
Lufio posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 11:09am
--'{@ Huh. An avatar. Was not expecting this route In this storyline. -[ Harry and friends forming a multimedia company that uses magic for the next generation of video made me think of Horst Pollman's series of HP fanfics. Teacher and students were involved in the venture as well. I was bemused by this similarity. Got thrown for an extra loop by the manifestation of Hogwarts because of that connection. One of the later stories had an "avatar of magic" come into play. My mind then started looking for other similarities. Recognizing story patterns was ruining my immersion in the fic. ]-
DJPotter posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 10:40am
Hogwarts become human and to do that she possess Harry wow. when first I started to read this story I never think that Dawn as a being as Hogwarts being . I take Dawn as a litreture meaning "Dawn of a new era" Now the think is this child put in there 1000 years ago by Founders or become aware by the time?
I cannot wait to next chap
DJP
red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 10:29am
Well, it's nowhere near as convoluted an origin as Dawn Summers got *GRIN* Thanks for the update, although I'm a bit annoyed at the cliffhanger. I am curious though, what are Voldemort and the others up to? I'm sure that Tom is more than a bit annoyed at his Death Eaters being taken out.
Red
Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 7:59am
Great chapter. Thanks for writing. W.
Dervish posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 7:53am
Okay thats a curveball i never saw coming. Brilliant though Thank you for sharing it wiht us
4rm36uy posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 7:43am
OOOOHHH! there better be another chapter following this one really soon. I loved it and the ending was a great surprise and also a cliffie to end all cliffies! I hope the next chapter comes soon so that us readers can learn what is going to happen next.
Sincerely,
Matt
Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 6:59am
Now we know who/what Dawn is now we need to know the Dawn of what. Excellent and enjoyable read. Cheers.
Z
TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 6:46am
Great chapter, loved the ending, can't wait for more.
gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 5:46am
Thank you. The occasional twisting of a plot is something i'm used to as an avid reader of everything, but your ability to twist it apart, having your plot drawn and quartered and still come out better and seamlessly intact is indeed a thing of beauty. This chapter warped everything except for his romantic situation (which i still feel might have taken on a life of its own), and improved everything. The poor guy ´s love life is wonderfully complex, in a spoilt-for-choce kind of way. It will be as much fun to see where that theme takes you as it will be to see where you take the rest of the story. It remains one of my absolute favourites.
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Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 5:33am
I think that the Aurors involved in the Second Task got off easy with just being suspended, The suspension is useless if Auror believe they did nothing wrong
scribbler posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 4:02am
WOW. I definitely did not expect that ending to this chapter. You've gone and created something new again :) I look forward to more and am ecstatic that you're writing again! Regards, the_scribbler
Orion posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 4:01am
This was amazing. I really didn't see the end comming, though in retrospect there were some clues.
Thank you very much for writing, and sharing your writing with us.
Druid posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 3:59am
Well, that was a rather shocking conclusion to the chapter. You sure know how to keep a reader's interest.
Silo posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 3:46am
sweet update man hope to see more soon as watting 6 months is hard
Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 3:37am
Very good chapter and excellent twit at the end.
DJPotter posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 1:12pm