Nytefyre posted a comment on Monday 1st July 2013 3:32am

It's been a while since the last update, and this was a doozy. Harry's vision and the arrival of Dawn are both interesting twists and I look forward to seeing where this goes. Hopefully the next installment will be soon!!

Thanks for posting.

ED PLATT posted a comment on Monday 1st July 2013 3:16am

Great chapter did not see that one coming with you making hogwarts a living person nicely done looking forward to reading the next chapter.Thanks for updating.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Monday 1st July 2013 1:27am

This is scary that something took control of Harry like that. I am making the presumption on the safe side that it was the intellect of Magic and it wanted Dawn to be made reality, otherwise everything becomes scary to think about. Wil the "birth" of Dawn cause Harry's freedome to be less so and all the fun he has been having to start to dry up? I worry that this is going to cause Harry to backslide from what he has become and has the potential to increase.

jilumasam posted a comment on Monday 1st July 2013 12:31am

Fun, fun, fun....Thanks for writing such a great story. I look forward to the next great chapter!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Monday 1st July 2013 12:30am

I just love how Harry's life flows at the moment. We all know there is a dark cloud, but it seems to be pushed back more and more each day.

LooneySlytherin posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 11:33pm

AHHHHH!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS WITH DAWN AND HARRY!!!!!!!!!

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 10:07pm

Very unexpected, but exciting to say the least. You certainly have a way for making us readers want more, then torture us with the knowledge that it takes you a very long time to update. So cruel!

I'm just wondering one thing, will there be ANY conflict at all in this fic? Its been a while since Harry and group actually had to persevere against something or someone like a villain or a plot. I thought when the last scene happened that you were introducing a new villain but then.... Just wondering, you know.

dan26 posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 8:41pm

hence the story title

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 6:31pm

Wow, now THAT is a nice chapter end! Seriously, what a twist! Keep up the awesome work!

KingDark posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 5:18pm

You really know how to end a chapter in a way that leaves you wanting for more. Especially considering the time it takes between updates. Don't misunderstand me, I'm happy that you update at all, and if the long time between means that it's a decent sized chapter then I'm all for it. Especially considering its usual quality. And the name thing was something that took me completely by surprise even though the title itself was a bit obvious.

Talk about something being in your face and not seeing it at all!!!!!

I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!

Kingdark

Peregrine829 posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 4:44pm

Glad to see you're still writing! I hope things in your life have settled a bit.

NavnUkjent posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 4:04pm

Another nice update, with an unexpected twist.

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 3:46pm

A very good chapter.

I like the colours of Harry’s new uniform. A nice gift for Hogwarts I am glad Gabrielle had a part to play too.

I liked the rant of the hat people tend to ignore or resent someone who says what the hat does but knowing magical UK people might listen to a magic hat. A great word to use loquacious.

Harry is a man of many skills Kate taught him well. A thoughtful gift for Fleur and I am pleased she is protected. It would be hard to deny Gabrielle something she wants I liked what Harry said to her and I do like the idea of Harry with a Veela.

A nice mother moment from Fleur, looking after or raising a Veela would be tricky.

Harry using his instincts is a wonderful as I think he is a being of instinct above all else. His business idea is a good one and with a fast fortune Harry can do as he likes or change the world. I liked the comparison Harry as dark as Batman and Ironman but also as gifted.

Dumbledore would enjoy himself at Alton Towers get him on a sugar rush and he won’t stop the whole day.

A marvellous quote "if I have seen a little further it is by standing on the shoulders of giants." Thanks for including it.

It was good to have the other professors point of view as they would be curious about Harry and his House. I wonder if the other staff will want a room like Aurora and visit Dumbledore often to make their requests.

A funny line "I’ll find out then if it was my personality and teaching style they liked, or if it was just my cleavage."

A good point about the senior students Hogwart’s keeps them rather immature and its not until the war or other big trouble hits home that they grow up and quickly because they have to. A load of people used to being treated like children might explain why the Ministry is the way it is and how Fudge became Minister.

I like the image of Harry sitting with Gabrielle and enjoying life the spare seats are a good idea. As book Harry was often miserable and isolated at Hogwarts. Gabrielle is a good spokesperson for Harry she could be his assistant in his new business that way she is always with Harry and he needs her.

The Gabrielle hug was nice addition to Harry’s soul search. A good name for Hogwarts and I liked the tie in with the story title.

I am glad Garry gets to cuddle Gabrielle while everybody else worthy gets a hug. Harry and Gabrielle are a well matched pair even if they are not a couple.

An unexpected twist to end the chapter. I look forward to the next and thanks for this one.

HopelessFan posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 3:19pm

huh. NOT what I expected with the title of the fic. Wow.

silvereagle posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 2:53pm

hey great chapter. i really like reading this story. it has a unique and exciting plot and characters who are not the normal static beings found in most fanfiction. please continue to update when you are able to. i am excited to find out what will occur next. thanks for creating a great story and please update soon.

Tai Lee posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 2:22pm

very nice chapter. totally didn't see the superhero thing coming, but you're right. can't Wait until the next chapter. thank you.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 2:20pm

The best thing about Pensieves are the ability to experience a memory as if you were there in person, I can't see making it into a standard TV will fair quite as well.

BtVS Dawn?

Darkon posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 2:17pm

also meant to say i wonder which of the others had an avengers/marvel analog. Hermione/Pepper Fred-George/Jarvis or who else could be.

Darkon posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 2:13pm

sqweee harry has a daughter!! loving this story. I know you outright stated harry with a stark personality but i have to admit in any story where he loses his hammered-into-him shyness i find him acting a bit like either a happy tony or CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow, well that or a spiderman type. congrats on the great portrayal. can't wait for the next chapter.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 1:47pm

This felt as though I was watching the birth of a new religiion or philosophy, or Steve Jobs conceiving the Macintosh, but with integrity and love for all his associates.

wonderful writing.

Our dear Dawn, despite bing 1000 years old, doesn't really understand human rules of social interaction very well - taking over someone's body against their will is a faux pas - always.

thanks so much for sharing - I hope all is well for you.