K Gibbs Winters posted a comment on Thursday 27th March 2014 6:33pm

But, but, but... where's the rest of it.....?

Luna'sWrackspurt posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 1:17am

I love your story! I can't wait for the update

MrHolbyta posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 7:23am

I love this story. It's a different confident Harry than I'm used to. I was sad not to hear from you at all for so long. I was very pleased with Enslavement's first chapter, but I hope you haven't forsaken this story at such a key moment.

Hoping your muse returns,

MrHolbyta

Starman800 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th February 2014 2:43pm

Great story, Please update. :)

Katherine posted a comment on Thursday 13th February 2014 6:41am

Can you let me know if there is going to be an update to this story soon? Your coming up to the year mark of the last time you updated. How was Dawn Hogwarts made? Was it Harry's magic or Harry and Hogwarts magic together. Or Hogwarts magic through Harry as a focus? Is Dawn Hogwarts Harry's daughter biologicly? Where did Hogwarts get Dawns DNA from?

Katie

Parkergirl69@hotmail.com

grookill posted a comment on Wednesday 12th February 2014 8:17am

Wow.

I have no idea why I have not read this before, especially since I consider "Hope" and "WKGQ" as being two of the best examples of Harry Potter fanfiction.

I'm glad you are going to get more serious in future chapters as I think there has been a lack of conflict in the last few. (No, I don't consider the kick boxing championship to be a conflict - it was a plot point to put Harry into a particular state, to gain legitimacy for a future event.) Harry needs to have a few set backs, a nemisis, a challenge.

Two of the things that really work for me is how you are developing Harry's relationships with Fleur. I have no idea where it's going, and I have no idea of where I would want the relationship to go. The other thing I like are the "body guards" because they exist, but I do wish you would flesh them out a bit more as right now they are pretty much all interchangable. Perhaps you could have a few paragraphs of "a day in the life of *sher", it might be kind of fun to read how the day unfolds from their point of view.

Two requests though, first, please keep the humor; and second, don't go all out with angst.

I hope to see more of this soon! It's been an addicting read so far!

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Saturday 11th January 2014 5:23am

excellent story so far please continue again soon.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Saturday 11th January 2014 4:14am

great chapter

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Saturday 11th January 2014 3:25am

Excellent chapter, and it ´s good that you won ´t have them simply end up together just coz you can and are going to do it as realisticaly as you can.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 10:41pm

Excellent chapter, great surprice with the kickboxing competition, and is good to see you didn ´t leave Kate forgoten.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 5:04am

great chapter

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 4:13am

Great chapter, liked how you are doing the trial

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 3:16am

Great chapter and explanation on Magic and how it works it was simple, to the point and made sense in the HP-verse.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 1:57am

Excellent chapter really like those last scenes

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 12:51am

Excellent chapte, really liked how you had Harry manage not only his outing with the Delacours but how you put a limit to how much playing with time would help him.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Thursday 9th January 2014 11:56pm

great chapter

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Thursday 9th January 2014 4:35am

Excellent start.

kewllewk posted a comment on Sunday 22nd December 2013 3:16am

For some reason(possibly intentionally), this whole chapter seems to have a sense of finality to it. I think it's because of the sense of momentum combined with so many things wrapping up. I would be disapointed but understanding if you ended the whole thing right here. Understanding because this really does feel like an end point, and yet dissapointed because despite that I love watching/reading about this Harry shaking things up, as well as feeling that there are still things that could be done. I was in fact greatly looking forward to his meeting with the veela court. The fact that the tri-wizard still isn't resolved and the whole Dawn scene nearly assures me that there are still things you plan to do, so I'm not overly worried. I look forward to any continuation you decide to put towards this story, but I feel like I could be fairly content to find the finish was here.

kewllewk posted a comment on Sunday 22nd December 2013 1:31am

I absolutely love the insight to Gabrielle's character in this chapter. It conveys a message very well, and the message explains a lot.

kewllewk posted a comment on Saturday 21st December 2013 7:05pm

I can honestly say I haven't seen that one done before. there are plenty of stories in this fandom where veela are all female, and many more where the male ones are just barely mentioned, but I'd not even imagined Fleur's father being the veela in the marriage. excelent departure from the norm, one of the reasons I like you as an author.