By Jeconais
Reviews
joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 7:04am
Entertaining chapter, thanks for the update.
sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 7:01am
Excellent chapter like always please continue again soon can ´t wait for the next chapter.
rusty32539 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:47am
Post it all, even the stuff you call crap is better then 97% of the other stories I read. That being said great chapter, just wished you would have gotten to the Harry/Aurora meet up scene.
HP-DG-SB posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:23am
I think this was a great chapter. I was actually hoping that Hogwarts' personality manifested but didn't get along perfectly with Harry, right off the bat. That was really important. I think it would have taken something away from the story. I liked that Harry went and took out Dudley like he did, that was an important point that need to be resolved, at least on Harry's part, it would have probably eaten at him for a long time otherwise. I think it's also going to be hilarious to watch that girl utterly fail at trying to catch Harry's attention in the way she is trying; especially with Aurora showing up, that is going to be especially entertaining to watch unfold. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
HP-DG-SB
Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:21am
yay an update! :)
great chapter and am so looking forward to Aurora causing havoc at smeltings.
red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:44am
Enjoyable chapter, and I'm really looking forward to seeing Harry's reaction to Aurora's outfit. I'm sure that the Head Girl of SLAG will be eating her heart out, and try something stupid to get slapped down.
Wonder what's going to happen when Dudley whines to his parents about getting beat up by Harry?
Hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter
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TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:39am
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Lordamnesia posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:29am
Awesome chapter! I love this story, and to see you work something that seemed to be a random pull for martial arts into something so far from where it was introduced just shows that you are that good of an author! Keep up the awesome work!
I would love to see ALL your stuff posted, but maybe that's just me :)!
Lia1 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:00am
I've yet to read something of yours that I didn't immediatey love. I'm up three hours after I ought to have gone to bed and I blame you entirely! :) In the best way, thank you for writing - it gets me out of my own head and lets me relax. Great chapter and looking forward to more from you! Thanks!
ladysavay posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:52am
SOOOOOOO glad you updated this. It was like going off cigarettes not to have an update. Thank you.
Have to say Harry is almost too mature. Just laying out Dinky Dudley with a well placed shot to the chin doesn't quite seem like enough payback to call it 'closure', more like the beginning of closure. I know, I'm vengefull and nasty.
Anyway, great bit with Dawn and all. Loved the Malfoy disposition. Looking forward to more of this great story.
Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:50am
I love this story thank you for sharing another wonderful chapter please continue to update as life allows
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:47am
Well, Megan Charters certainly lives up (or down, depending on your PoV) to the acronym for her school and I suspect she literally embodies her title, too (not that any guy would trust her any more). It's certainly once more an interesting time to be Harry potter or part of his entourage. I daresay that Aurora Sinistra is going to upset a lot of folk as Ms. Charters finds out that Harry is well beyond her and anything she can offer; I suspect Harry's dispatch of Dudley Dusley as well as his shooting Ms. Charters down completely is going to make him exceedingly popular with the students of Smeltings (I can just imagine Vernon going spare when he finds out, especially since none of it was done with magic). I'll be looking forward to seeing where this goes from here.
Chessicfayth posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:34am
Yes! Been waiting on this update for so long. Great work, I love this story.
Thanks for the time and effort, Jeconais.
Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:51am
Very good part. Duds is a lucky guy Harry is nice.
motherjenjen posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:25am
Omg I loved this chapter. Cant wait for more. This would have to be one of my favorite stories ever.
Robert1 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 1:57am
Between the comics, the rumors of a reboot movie, and the steady stream of stories and updates on Twisting the Hellmouth and FF.net, I'd say the audience for Buffy fics is still going strong. Buffy and Harry Potter fanfics make up 90% of my total reading material. I'm still patiently waiting for an update of Wild Horses, my absolute favorite Xander/Dawn story. That said, I love everything you've written so far and I do a little happy dance whenever I get an email alert. I'm now going to have to start watching Naruto, about which I know absolutely nothing, just so I can properly enjoy your story when you post it.
MrHolbyta posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 1:08am
Great to have HD back. A minor quibble with this chapter: straight kickboxers tend to use the same closed gloves boxers do, even Muay Thai boxers which allows far more grappling than Taekwon Do. It's only MMA and true vale tudo fighters who use the open gloves because they need their fingers for wrestling and jiu jitsu. The open fingers are a huge downside, because they lead to numerous eye pokes when fighters extend their hands to keep their opponent at distance. As a side note, in your kickboxing sequences, don't neglect shots to the liver and solar plexus. Both have the ability to end a fight just as soundly as a strike on the jaw or behind the ear. Search for "Bas Rutten liver" and watch some examples. For the blow to the solar plexus, watch Anderson Silva's fights with Chael Sonnen and Stefan Bonner. I love the tale you're telling. Keep being awesome.
Wolff posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 12:45am
Once again, fantastic. This one'll put a smile on my face for the rest of the day. Thank you!
Orion posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 12:31am
Great! I like the setup here for the Dudly/Harry confrontation, and Dawn's introduction here.
Also I do look foward to your Xander/Faith story. I admit that while I do read a lot of Buffy fiction, the vast majority of it is crossover fiction.
Thanks for taking the time to write and share this with us. I usually enjoy your writing, and this has been a lot of fun.
Zooxle posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 7:18am