By Jeconais
Reviews
red jacobson posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd September 2014 1:05am
Still loving this story buddy, and panting for an update! I can't wait to see Aurora taking Smeltings by Storm!
Red
kubz11 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2014 3:15am
Great story! Update soon! I keep re-reading this story because it's so great and at the end, I find myself both incredibly pleased and regretably disappointed. Pleased because it's such a fun story to read over and over and disappointed because I wish there was more!
motherjenjen posted a comment on Wednesday 20th August 2014 1:55pm
I have to say this is still one of my favorite stories ever. I wait with bated breath for the next chapter.
jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 29th June 2014 11:43pm
Thank you for writing. I've been on holidays and left my password at home. The wait has been absolutely worth it. Keep up the fantastic work. Liz
Aran Linvail posted a comment on Saturday 28th June 2014 2:41pm
Awesome fic!!! i'm loving it so much, can't wait for the next chapter :). How does Harry deal with Aurora and the local bitch? what happens with Dawn?
Update soon!!!!
The Great Phoenix posted a comment on Saturday 28th June 2014 1:08am
There are still a bunch of typos, but it was great to read this again and have a new chapter to read to boot. I want to see the wonderful conclusion of this visit!
M4RKL4R posted a comment on Wednesday 25th June 2014 2:42am
Last time I read this there were only ten chapters I believe. I like the additions and I'm painfully waiting on the cliffhanger at the end of Ch.12. Keep up the good work.
bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Saturday 14th June 2014 2:41pm
Well, I can get why you put the fighting in, but it struck me as extraneous.
Aside from that... a lot of Mary Sue, but then most fanfiction is.
TheGrimmChaos posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2014 11:35am
I Love it, can't wait for more.
Please update soon.
Gunooner posted a comment on Friday 6th June 2014 11:05pm
Great chapter. Hope you update soon ;)
chrwain01 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2014 2:25pm
Loved the addition, really didn't want it to end. Am definitely looking forwards to the next installment.
The one glaring thing that hit me during this was that if Harry is supposed to be early twenties now... surely he's a great deal taller than a mid teen? I suppose that is easily explained with the early life malnutrition but ... (although again that would be an interesting conversation for his crew to have.. "If he's twenty why's he still a short arse"... "those Dursleys really need kicked" etc)
The introduction of Aurora to their little coven is fun and interesting, the appearance of Dawn a great take on the story (with lots of interesting implications for their next year.. does she get a sister.. can she simply be two buildings at once? Could Beaubaxtons be a love interest for our ancient Scottish lass?)
elmoryakhan posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2014 5:04pm
Nice chapter, but hate the cliffhanger! Please update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Lisagrace posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2014 7:50am
Great chapter. Loved meeting Dawn, looking forward to seeing how a 1000 year old girl does with having a moving body. Glad Harry was able to get a little back from Dudley. The school bike isn't going to know what hit her. ;)
Lohoydo posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2014 12:27am
This is a story I've come back to and re-read a couple times when I wanted a good fun story. I really hope you continue work on it, as it pains me to wait for the next chapter.
Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 1st June 2014 10:40am
Enjoyable intoduction of Dawn and nice how Gabriellehandled it all. Good to see Dudley get what he deserved. Cheers.
Z
adafrog posted a comment on Saturday 31st May 2014 3:54am
Good addition, thanks.
gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2014 3:40am
It's hard to tell if the story is approaching closure, or if it's expanding in scope. I hope the former. I think the story is interesting, creative, and well-written, and I'm glad the author is still active.
Thank you for taking the time to write this and to share it.
(I was one - of many I suspect - who missed the acronym.)
gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2014 2:20am
Oh my! You did give Hogwarts a personality enough chapters ago that I can't complain about it, but I think the plot was complex enough!
Lufio posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2014 12:45am
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Aww, you ended it | Before resolving the scene | With the SLAG Head Girl.
tcl7189 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 7:33am