ficbob posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 3:14pm

Thanks for more of this fic and two things that I want to mention, 'millions of gallons of water' I have no idea how to measure a lake but it just seems millions is a bit low.

and why did Harry not just stun the kid nd let him die peacefully? My first thought to some one dying and I can not help them is heavy medication for the pain.

Thanks for your time and I hope you have a good week and a Happy Thanksgiving from an American

Nosferatum posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 1:36pm

Good chapter of great story.

I don't know if I should interfere with what is not essentially my business, but you've got some slight inaccuracies in your russian words and names. Tell me, if you are interested, or just ignore me altogether, - it's not like they matter to english-speaking readers :)

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 12:04pm

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

HP-DG-SB posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 11:04am

Well, that was a darker end to the chapter than I was expecting to see. I feel horrified on Harry's behalf, that he had to use that damn curse. I understand why he did it, but it's not going to make it any easier on Harry in the long run. It's going to bug him for a while. The thing that pisses me off in this chapter is Russia's interference in Harry's life. I really hope nothing happens to Kate and I hope that Natalia is going to get destroyed as soon as she tries to make a move on Harry. Russia is one of those countries that loves sticking their damn noses where they don't belong and I hate them. No, I'm still cheering for Kate and Harry so I'm really hoping that it isn't prevented for very long. Really, if Natalia manages to sneak into Harry's life now, after everything he's managed to do and is going to be doing in the future; she's going to wreck the story for me. I hope this story doesn't take a turn in the direction I think I'm seeing it go, I really hope so. Beyond that, it was another good chapter as usual. Keep up the great work and I hope that you'll update again soon.

HP-DG-SB

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 10:21am

I cant wait for your next chapter. I hope the spies dont last too long!!

M. Scott Eiland posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 10:00am

Unless he turns himself in, it will be hard to pin anything on him: no forensic evidence connecting him to the crime for the muggle authorities (and the evidence relating to the dead or crippled thugs will support self defense for what he did to them), and he used his necklace (which no one except his intimates know exists or what it can do) to cast the AK, so checking his wand will point to his innocence.

Presumably, Natalia is going to be caught--she seems to be a decent sort looking out for her country, and even Magical Russia's motives don't seem particularly reprehensible. Unfortunately, Harry is primed right now to react *very* badly to betrayal. Hopefully, there will be a result that leaves Harry out of the influence of those who would manipulate him without harming someone who isn't per se evil like an active Death Eater would be.

runnerup437 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 8:04am

Hey man, I just wanted to thank you for not abandoning this story. It's definitely one of my favorite fanfics (actually I've enjoyed most all of your works - this one and Konaha's Legion being my favorites), and I just wanted to encourage you to keep writing! You are quite talented and your fans appreciate your creativity and hard work.

deltanumber4 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 7:36am

Amazingly done, I was so worried that Dawn had joined the all too large group of abandoned fanfics. However, you have delivered another wonderful addition to this story. You really do you the cliffhangers though, I hope you don't leave us in suspense for as long as the last time. I'm going to be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 6:55am

Dirty Dancing on steroids meets From Russia with Love, very interesting yarn. Can't help thinking that Harry will be meeting M soon. Hopefully Kate isn't going to suffer. Good read. Cheers.

Z

musketau posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 6:49am

I'd been hoping for the next chapter of Dawn, and wow did you deliver. Thanks.

I'd been worried for a minute you'd brought the Black Widow into the story, but thankfully you didn't. That World would not mesh with what you have created so far, and would almost force you to move away from Hogwarts and England. The idea of several agents trying to 'turn' him is interesting and i'm wondering what will happen with Kate. Are you removing her entirely, will Harry fight it, will she return later? And what happens when Harry does not fall for Natalia (assuming he doesn't). Spy agencies are known to 'remove' powerful things they cannot control or influence. This could make Harry mad, especially if it effects his friends.

Looking forward to what's next, whenever it comes out.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 6:27am

Again, a very captivating chapter and those 14,000 words just seemed to fly by. I thank you for all the hard work and I really enjoy reading your fiction.

joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:48am

Oops! Now Harry's soul is tainted forever by the AK. Dawn will have to turn him into a pillar of salt. ;)

Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:48am

Excellent chapter please, continue again soon, can ´t wait to read the next one to see how that new mess he is in turn out, as well as to see more of Natalia and where you will go with her and the others you have said will come after. Although I will admit I ´m not looking forward to Kate ´s apparent been taken form the story for the foresable future.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:29am

Fine chapter. That is quite a twist at the end. Thanks for writing. W.

Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:11am

Ok, definitely taking some turns I wasn't expecting.

Good part, even with the evil cliffie.

Silo posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 4:05am

good to see a n update finaly

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 2:51am

Nicely done.

Thanks so much for writing :D

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 2:44am

once again thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put in to this story please continue to update as life allows

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 2:38am

Now that's a most itneresting cliffie and 'twill be most fascinating to see what evolves from it. Meanwhile, 'twill be most fascinating to see the various on-going reactions as he becomes more exposed. Poor Megan is going to feel all sorts of pressure and if his bosses come down on her father, it could become exceedingly educational for her (exceedingly painful, but equally educational in the way the world really works).

Michael10 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 1:59am

cool.

enjoy the break and thanks for the hard work. looking forward to when you resume