Hogwarts' Dawn
Chapter 3
By Jeconais
Reviews
Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 4:49pm for Chapter 3
Thanks for another holiday offering for us all. I'll agree that this chapter had some flow problems, but I really don't see any way you could have altered things to smooth it out any more than you did. Overall, I still think you did a great job filling in some more background for Harry with this chapter, and you have set up some really good character interactions that can be played with later on. I'll be looking forward to the next installment on this one as well.
In the mean time, here's hoping you and yours have a wonderful New Year ahead.
slayersfan01 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 3:48pm for Chapter 3
I absolutely LOVE this fic! Its...its...I just don't have the right words to describe it. Awesome comes close but not quite. I had no problems getting that a lot of time passed in the beginning of the chapter. Actually, I rather like the way you did it. Better this way than spending a lot of time to say "a lot of time has passed" as some fics do. As for One True Love please please Please put one in. Other relationships are nice, including the one with Annie, but I would really would like to see this more mature and morally balanced Harry actually get together with someone rather than just be a rich playboy. It would be...weird for one of your fics to not have a One True Love for Harry. It's just too strange!
Josh1 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 3:38pm for Chapter 3
Like always, i love your stories no matter where you take them and Im looking forward to what else you have in store for us. I just have one question though. Are the alerts slow or were they down or something? I read this a few days ago but just got the alert in my mail today. That's like a four day difference from when you put it up to when i got the alert. Not complaining, just wondering. Anyway, keep up the good work, and i hope you had a happy holiday.
BJH posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 6:26am for Chapter 3
Interesting chapter, I like how Harry is developing into an ordinary teenager in extraordinary circumstances. I am wondering how Annie will react to Harry's tale of Annie? Proud enought to bust her buttons I would assume.
I also like Harry's interactions with Hogwarts. He seems to be interacting directly with the castle. Could it be that Sidney, Janice, and Christopher are actually manifestations of this relationship? Could it be that Harry's "love of his life" will be Hogwarts?
BJH
Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 6:21am for Chapter 3
Very nice! I look forward with interest (as always) to see where you take it.
becca510 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 6:01am for Chapter 3
Love this story. It is hilarious. Hope to see more of it soon.
Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 5:17am for Chapter 3
Season's Greetings to you as well. And thank you for the excellent present. :-)
Davideg posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 5:01am for Chapter 3
thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter telling rather than showing time pass for harry turned out better than you mite realize do to it not being what you wanted so dont feel bad about this chapter it really is fantastic so please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
prongs307 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 3:32am for Chapter 3
I liked the new chapter and think u did good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Silo posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 3:31am for Chapter 3
nice to finally see more from u and i hope to see this and perfect slytherins updated agen soon
Tolotos2000 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 1:23am for Chapter 3
Well, dont expect some constructive critic from me , I ´m a German so your language is not really native but i ´m learning(trying).This said i ´m really really LOVE this story.
So, you ´r one of the bet wrighters out there , right in par with Jbern, clell??, Bobmin, and so on. THANKS for this entertainment
T
Hansi_Rahl posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 9:40pm for Chapter 3
This is a great chapter. I really like where this story is going. I really hope you update soon. Continue the good work! ;)
bmatsea posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 8:37pm for Chapter 3
excellent chapter as always. While the first part was just a bit dry in the way it was presented, the over all flow was perfect. I enjoyed the second part and the interaction of the characters was easy to follow and fit the story and direction.
Thank you, I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Bmat
Flamefoxrose posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 3:32pm for Chapter 3
Thank you for a wonderful well written chapter. It was very funny watching Harry flirt with Michael. When is Fleur going to stop being such a spoiled child?
Ekaterin posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 3:16pm for Chapter 3
Like it. Thank you
00_Knight posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 1:26pm for Chapter 3
OMG YOUR STILL ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HAPPY DAY!!!!!!!!!!
Great to hear from you Jeconais, I've missed your HP updates the most! (True even if a bit of brown-nosing)
Even if you don't like it, I do, because its one thousand times better than some of the drivel on FF.net!
Hope you had a Good Christmas, or other holiday if you don't celebrate Christmas.
Patiently waiting your next update, HP, update that is!
Sarah5 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 1:14pm for Chapter 3
You seem to be setting Harry up with social and appropriate behavior problems. While I believe conflict moves stories making someone well round with quirks seems better than bipolar swings of mood changes. Fleur seems to have some problems as well. As do most of the people you have written about in this story.
kartal posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 9:26am for Chapter 3
As lady gaga would say, "I love it!" The whole spending several months on his own kinda threw me for a loop for a sec, but his version of wilson from Castaway was priceless! You ARE the reason I still check this site! Thanks.
avidreaderbz posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 7:33am for Chapter 3
I really adored this story when you started it, and am so glad you decided to continue . It's turning out to be rally fantastic :)
Vukk posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 7:10pm for Chapter 3