BAFan posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2015 12:56pm for Chapter 3

Wow, so much going on in this chapter, it's hard to recall all the wonderful details. Sidney, Janice and Christopher were a touching bit, reminiscent of Tom Hank creating Wilson in the movie "Castaway." Glad Harry realized he was spending too much time in the FoR. I love Gabrielle and her parents (wonder if Harry and Michael ever get together?). Too bad Fleur is such a brat in this.

Anyway, on to the next chapter!

OriksGaming posted a comment on Wednesday 24th June 2015 11:29am for Chapter 3

I was a little nervous when you said more adult themes(I am a teenage boy, I'm not entirely nervous about reading them, but I like to share good fanfics, and since most of my friends online know that I'm only a teenager, "extreme adult themes" might be a bit embaressing to share. But reading the story is more than enough for me. I enjoyed this chapter immensely. Not quite as humorous, but it showed a powerful, confident, older Harry(please make him date Fleur now that he's older(again, I'm treating this as if you haven't written the next chapters, maybe I can change the past with my wishing if you haven't made him date Fleur :D), and someone realizing he's powerful, older, and more confident, with knowledge of things far beyond his age, rather than the stories with OP Harry where everyone knows and he acts like a piece of s*** to everyone he meet. I mean, he's not overly welcoming in this, but he's willing to judge people based on their actions, and give them a chance and I like that. Again, great work, I'm loving it, and keep it up!

Violet posted a comment on Wednesday 25th February 2015 1:44am for Chapter 3

His only One True Love is Gabrielle :D (and I don't mean love in a sexual or even romantic sense, perverts)

sylvelle posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 1:10am for Chapter 3

I loved it. It bothers me not a mooch that a 14 year old boy seduced a woman 8 years older than him. Or did she seduce him?

Good chapter

Tricia

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 12:51am for Chapter 3

Excellent chapte, really liked how you had Harry manage not only his outing with the Delacours but how you put a limit to how much playing with time would help him.

kewllewk posted a comment on Saturday 21st December 2013 7:05pm for Chapter 3

I can honestly say I haven't seen that one done before. there are plenty of stories in this fandom where veela are all female, and many more where the male ones are just barely mentioned, but I'd not even imagined Fleur's father being the veela in the marriage. excelent departure from the norm, one of the reasons I like you as an author.

myrthe1203 posted a comment on Friday 6th September 2013 4:27pm for Chapter 3

I still can't help but laugh at the "I asked for the '63, not the '96" part, no matter how often I read it. But it's brilliant - it is, after all, 1994 in this story.

PJ posted a comment on Friday 16th August 2013 5:47pm for Chapter 3

"She was with a group of friends heading toward a table, she had long dark blonde hair, and when she smiled, had perfect teeth. "

This is where I fell out of the story for a moment... perfect teeth in London? Now I know I'm in a fairy tale. :)

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2013 12:30am for Chapter 3

Hmmm . . . I wonder if Harry's going to sleep on the stone floor now, even in the dorm.

Great story so far: creative and well-written.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2012 3:17am for Chapter 3

The scene with Harry and Michael is so outrageous. Thanks for sharing!

jules3677 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th March 2012 7:19am for Chapter 3

Another brilliant chapter. Impressed how you handled all Harry's intimate moments, very sensitivitely done. The explanation of Fleur's behaviour solved some questions I had. Appreciated the time condensing. Adored Sidney, Janice & little Christopher. Those little details make the story for me.

BioHazard82 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 4:47pm for Chapter 3

Great chapter.

Celebrithil posted a comment on Sunday 19th February 2012 9:25pm for Chapter 3

Ha ha! Sidney was great! Little Christophers a bit creepy, though. And the training is crazy and dangerous (but it's got Hogwarts stamp of approval, and that's enough for the story). Nice business date for the Yule Ball. And I quite like Kate - and her "I guess it doesn’t matter, as long as it works" philosophy. The whole meeting with the Delacours was hilarious. Gabrielle's announce that he smelled of girl the next morning as well. And the reprimand for the lack of intel that just happen to lead to the possible need of a spell to find him at some point? Yeah, good idea. Poor Fleur. Her upbringing isn't exactly her fault, even if she could make an effort.

Halimede posted a comment on Friday 21st October 2011 5:29am for Chapter 3

Can I just say that I absolutely ADORE this story. I'm chatting with some friends on skype and every few minutes I'm posting a new excerpt that I like and going on and on about how much I LOVE this fic. It's so brilliant! Of course, it helps that I love your writing anyway. Please keep writing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2011 3:00pm for Chapter 3

I like how Harry is developing into a very self award and confident person. Thanks for sharing!

Allisan posted a comment on Saturday 16th July 2011 6:01pm for Chapter 3

i absolutely love this! i've laughted out loud several time. thanks for sharing!

NuitTombee posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2011 3:57am for Chapter 3

I don't remember if I've reviewed this one yet but I'll write another just in case.

I love the sibling love that Harry spreads around and the scenes between Harry and Gabrielle are especially adorable.

I hope to read more later and I wish you the best of luck with RL and the rest of your stories.

Sincerely,
James

dpwheels57 posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd June 2011 4:44pm for Chapter 3

Will there be more? I hope so. I like the way Harry has "grown". The stuff with Gabrielle is cute but not in a really sugar sweet kind of way. Hope to see more

LanceFan2001 posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd June 2011 8:52am for Chapter 3

Hello...


I love your stories, and in particular this one. I know it's been a few years, but I was hoping that you could continue this story. I really enjoyed it.... or, perhaps you could point me in the direction of similar stories.

Thanks!
FortNaks@gmail.com

Silo posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2011 5:32am for Chapter 3

i hope u update soon