PandaWings posted a comment on Sunday 23rd April 2017 7:41pm for Chapter 10

Yay! More screen time of Harry's interactions with Aurora. Reading it always makes it seem like an amusing scene to me that I can just picture.

Also, just like in your Authors Notes, I can see the shift of from a Harry/Fleur pairing to something else. I like that you didn't try to force that pairing to occur, and rather adapted to how your story changed

noylj posted a comment on Monday 20th October 2014 11:24am for Chapter 10

>"Dubmledore is teh utilmate evil!" fics. Is this your normal typing or were you upset? Please finish this fic someday...SOON.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Saturday 11th January 2014 4:14am for Chapter 10

great chapter

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Monday 1st July 2013 12:30am for Chapter 10

I just love how Harry's life flows at the moment. We all know there is a dark cloud, but it seems to be pushed back more and more each day.

Starman800 posted a comment on Sunday 16th June 2013 2:32am for Chapter 10

WOW!!!. This is a GREAT STORY. PLease please please, update soon. This was a very enjoyable read.

silvereagle posted a comment on Friday 7th June 2013 6:56pm for Chapter 10

Hey great story. I really like it so far. Please update again soon. I want to read more of this.

Timdraco posted a comment on Friday 31st May 2013 11:11pm for Chapter 10

ok awesome story! i can't wait to read the next chapter! keep up the good work!

Addlcove posted a comment on Friday 31st May 2013 12:51am for Chapter 10

having just re-read this in its entirety again I can only hope that your muse will agree to have you continue it at some point.

This is easily the best "harry grows up during GoF" story I have ever read.

abhi0191 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th May 2013 8:21pm for Chapter 10

Amazing story! Can't wait for more!!!

Rabidwallaby posted a comment on Sunday 12th May 2013 5:48pm for Chapter 10

After reading this story through... again. I realized that I have done the unthinkable and left more requests for updates than positive feedback and for that, I'm sorry! I have read every one of your fics multiple times through the years and will keep reading whatever you put forth the effort to produce.

Keep working your magics and I'll keep requesting updates! Rabid

ohh and some updates for Dawn and Slytherins would be incredible. :)

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2013 4:36am for Chapter 10

A fifth house!? Here I thought there would be a third task, then the story would be over!

I'm eagerly anticipating events to follow. Thanks for a great story.

Tracy0652 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2013 4:15pm for Chapter 10

Hi Tim,

Sorry about your recent personal issues - I can somewhat empathize (somewhat because everyone's situation is really unique). Anyway, your stories are always well-written and thoughtful, and go in such unexpected, yet logical directions. I always enjoy when you update, and hope (mmm, yes, selfishly too) that writing fanfic, particularly dawn and perfect slytherins, helps you to feel better.

As always, thank you, and best of luck!!

Tracy

fsponholz posted a comment on Friday 3rd May 2013 8:59pm for Chapter 10

Great story.

Mmend15 posted a comment on Friday 3rd May 2013 2:10am for Chapter 10

cool. i like this harry, one who has a flare for making the outrageous seem commonplace. its like he makes things absurdly simple that would never actually be that simple in the real world.

its awesome. hope to see more soon

20cent posted a comment on Thursday 25th April 2013 4:02pm for Chapter 10

That's a hell of a story. Congratulation for writing this !

It's funny to see how a fic, which was originally centered around a way over the top big Gred and Forge mess, leads to a adult and mature Harry.

My favorite part is the "meeting of the Weasley Twins" in chp 5. It is really well written and perfectly captures the essence of Fred and George. The part about how they don't really know their name is just the best F&G piece ever (well, with Harry and Daphne's marriage in the Matryoshka Vignettes). The flirts with Michael are also hilarious.

I admire your good ideas (new house in Hogwarts, male and female vela, the giant squid aquatical funland, no pairing but a lot of love/sex tension, ...). Moreover, I'm delighted by your choice regarding characters, those you ignore (the eternal Ron, Giny, Malefoy focus is boring), those you change (convincing Dumbledore and Hermione) and those you created (Michael, Kate, {Crush/Squish/Smash/Nash/Trash}-er and Melissa are just wonderful). I'm just wondering about a few person you didn't mention : what about Hagrid (wha does he think about Harry growing up), what about Neville (I can't believe he agrees with Ron's bulls*t) and what about Moody (or whoever he actually is) ?

If I may, a few critiques : a) a few tiny errors in the french words (not a big deal, but well, I'm French, I'm supposed to be arrogant, so I'm pointing it out ... I can detail if you're interested) ; b) Harry is somewhat perfect and overpowerd : not a single flaw ... well, the whole story is over the top so It's not a big problem, but if you really want to make him mature, he'll have to make a few mistakes and learn from them ; c) Kick-Boxing better than Quidditch ? Come on ...

I can't wait to read about the third task !

Vincent

noylj posted a comment on Thursday 18th April 2013 6:05am for Chapter 10

May real life be better and may you return to this story

Sweetdoggie posted a comment on Monday 25th March 2013 6:53pm for Chapter 10

Great story so far. I feel a litte sorry for Snape to tell you the truth. Sure, he was mean, cruel, and more than a little stupid to bait Harry like that, but his murder was very cold-blooded and I feel that it was out of character for Harry to do that. On the other hand, it seems to work for the story so I'm not going to worry about it. Hogwarts sure went to a lot of trouble for Harry, esp. if he isn't even going to stay. I feel a bit sorry for the castle too. Anyway, really enjoying this. Thanks for sharing your work.

sekmarc posted a comment on Monday 18th March 2013 2:08pm for Chapter 10

Wonderful story! I'm curious to see how fourth year ends and if Harry's plans for himself manage to go off correctly. I eagerly await your next post; Happy Writing!

yako posted a comment on Wednesday 13th March 2013 1:42pm for Chapter 10

Oh God!

I LOL with that!

Exepcional! like always!

Full_Pensieve posted a comment on Tuesday 12th March 2013 12:04am for Chapter 10

Just making sure I'm reading this correctly - do you have Fleur as 5 feet, 8 inches tall and 148 pounds? (ten stone eight) Just curious, as that's definitely not the usual portrayal of Fleur -- more World Cup downhill skier than fashion model. Works for me, personally, just surprising.