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ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 5:37am for Chapter 10

Another fun chapter and I always look forward to the email that says "A new chapter of Hogwarts' Dawn'. It is nice that Harry is actually using the money to do something to help others and himself. Thanks for sharing!

timbits200 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 5:17am for Chapter 10

Really enjoying this story. I like the way it flows, in terms of the narrative and the characters. As you touched on in your author's notes, you have been able to bring a high level of realistic believablility to the characters; take away the magic and they are normal people with strengths and faults which is something I've found is not always balanced. Can't wait until the next part. Cheers.

Orion posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 4:56am for Chapter 10

Great! I like Dumbledore here. I don't mind him being an evil/manipulator, but I'm still partial to grandfather/mentor Dumbledore as he was usually in fan fiction when I started reading these circa book four's publishing.

Thanks for writing and sharing your writing with us.

Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 4:35am for Chapter 10

I am seriously loving this story, it just keeps getting better and better!

Silo posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 4:32am for Chapter 10

i think u should turn this in to the happy harry harme fic

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 4:27am for Chapter 10

It's good to have you back.

Great chapter! It did seem to jump from place to place, but that just kept it moving.

Love the concept of a new house, but my question is how will this effect his moving to Beauxbatons next year? As well as the other students of the other school. It would almost appear as if now they are all coming to Hogwarts.

Love little Gabby! She's going to be ready for her NEWTS by the time she enters school thanks to Harry.

It will be interesting to see how things work out.

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

gara5289 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 4:22am for Chapter 10

Great chapter and I'm glad that you changed the pairing too, even if that was one of the original things i liked.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:55am for Chapter 10

*laughs* Quite a chapter as Harry again re-arranges everything to suit his needs. Things could get rather "interesting" for any government that endeavored to get in his way. I do like the way things are evolving and I have to admit that I love Hogwarts' expression of regard for him.

Luan Mao posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:54am for Chapter 10

What a pleasant surprise to come home from a very long Saturday at work, check FFA on a whim, and find two chapters of this wonderful story. (And one of _Perfect Slytherins_, but _Hogwarts Dawn_ is the jewel.) The kickboxing match went on longer than seemed necessary, but it was generally well done and I'll take you at your word that it was setup for later events. The evolving relationship between Harry and Fleur is well done and a joy to watch. I'm sure you could have written them hooking up after the initial dislike and everything would have been lovey-dovey. I'm sure that what you wrote would have been entertaining and worth reading but, y'know, this is better. A relationship has to be built with a lot of time and effort and respect, and sometimes it just doesn't work regardless. You may take that as coming from my own marriage, divorce, and remarriage, and you may take it as being directed at your story or at your life, as you wish. Related to that, a combination of "one day at a time", "do what you can", and "do what you have to" may help you get through the day. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:51am for Chapter 10

i love this story once again thank you for sharing a wonderful chapter please continue to update as life allows

thetaxzombie posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:47am for Chapter 10

Sorry about recent personal events, been there, still cynical myself.

Concerning this chapter. In honor of Fluer and her cooking training here are my comments.

This chapter was banquet. A most delicious one at that, savory and filling with a delightful suprise at the end for desert.

Most filling and quite satisifying. I thank you for sharing it.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:46am for Chapter 10

Fleur seem more likeable in this chapter, I still have the opinion that I hope that Harry end up with someone else.

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:40am for Chapter 10

Thanks for the update.

I am rather concerned with Harry. All his "love" interests seem to have severe emotionaly/psychological problems.

At the rate he is going, he'll end up with Gabby when she is 18 and he is an old man.

Is there any Voldie and his DEs that will upset things?

4rm36uy posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:23am for Chapter 10

A whole new house huh? very interesting.

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:15am for Chapter 10

It's interesting to hear you point out that your plan of it being a Harry/Fleur and have it not actually turn out that way. I like that, I like how you have written the story such that it can change direction and be the better for it. Just as an aside, I'm 'ship neutral, it's the quality of the story I am interested in, not the 'ship.

I appreciate the effort you put into this story, keep up the fantastic work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:05am for Chapter 10

Great stuff, I was wondering if Harry and the others would get their own house.

iamjmph01 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 3:00am for Chapter 10

Thank You for the update! While i am looking forward to time moving a bit faster(i.e. more than one day passing) i love this story. I was so excited to see an update from you. This Perfect Slytherins and Konoha's Legion are some of the only fics that i've found recently that are worth reading.

Thank You for taking the time out of your life to write your amazing stories... off to read PS.... i didnt get an update email about it, but just saw it updated as well :)

Darkcloud02 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 2:55am for Chapter 10

this is just as good as when you began, ^^ looking forwards to future chapter(s).

loiosh posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 2:50am for Chapter 10

Love the new chapter! Always happy to see any updated fics from you. Thank you again for sharing this fic with us!

Chaossama posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 2:47am for Chapter 10

While I'm sorry to hear that personal events have left you cynical, I will say that just in the context of the story, the pairing didn't seem to work out well.

As I mentioned in my last review, Harry was maturing and Fleur was not. In here, she admits her fears and works towards her goal. That is a good start.

We'll see how things go next (: