Karenelaine posted a comment on Tuesday 15th July 2008 4:16pm

Loved the ending. Really a very good story.

ginnysohma posted a comment on Tuesday 15th July 2008 3:28pm

YAAY!!
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*claps enthusiastically* bring on the next!!!

Heather_Sinclair posted a comment on Tuesday 15th July 2008 12:13pm

Nice little fairy tale. Over-the-top, and a little cliched, but what the heck, it was fun and that's what a good fic entails. Points for Gabrielle usuage.

kutekess posted a comment on Tuesday 15th July 2008 3:08am

Harry nodded. "I was trying to be fair, but I don’t want to lose control either. I’ve given away five percent of the shares so far, two percent each to Fred and George, and half a percent each to Padma and Su, which leaves me another thirteen to play with."

"You are keeping eighty for yourselves?"


I think your maths might be slightly out, because i get that as 2% missing.

I love the story, and I really like the way gabriella woke harry up

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 7:02pm

absolutely WONDERFUL!!!! I've always loved fairy tales and this was no exception. Granny crone aka Minerva was quite a nice touch, as was bringing in the Artherian legend too. Thank you so much for another entrancing story!
Tara

marchsnowchic posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 2:58pm

I'm so excited to hear of a sequel. I loved this story. I'm not usually a Harry/Gabrielle fan, but this one was just fun! I can't wait for part 2!

GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 11:00am

Truly brilliant, I was a bit skeptical when I first saw the name Camelot mentioned but you pulled it off very well.

Kudos

Can't wait for the sequel.

GuardianOfLight

tashriia posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 8:22am

Brilliant! Love your writing style. Big thanks for this "hug yourself silly" story.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2008 3:00am

Loved the line "Damn it's good to be me". The logical thinking into the personalities of Harry and Gabrielle were brilliant. I liked Harry yelling about the sociopath diagnosis. Fleur is so fun. The Red Riding Hood section, especially the bogey man's bogey man, was absolutely fantastic.

The McGonagall twist was brilliant. I love the idea of the others all perceiving Harry to be a true and legendary Hero (fully warranting capitalisation). The mirror rhyme was superb. Constant vigilance? LOL! Nice to see even the mirror knows about Moody. Loved the dragon section. Can't wait to see this continued. I somehow doubt that Harry is going to be the next King of England - our Queen has only ceremonial power these days and the paparazzi are, frankly, horrendous when it comes to chasing our princes. Imagine if they could chase Gabrielle! Great story. More please.

Rexnos posted a comment on Sunday 13th July 2008 8:28pm

That was freakin' epic. I have read a LOT of Harry Potter fan fiction, but NEVER have I seen Harry single handedly take down a dragon with a sword. That was quite possibly the coolest thing I have ever read.

I can't wait for Castles in the Sky. This story was an excellent opener, but there was a distinct lack of Harry/Gabrielle fluff after the first six or so chapters.

Anyway, extremely awesome feel-good fan fiction there. As much as conflict and strife add to a story, a good happily-ever-after fairy tale is always fun now and again.

Later,
Rex

darthloki posted a comment on Sunday 13th July 2008 4:03am

"Indeed," Minerva agreed. "And he is growing up as well. He could have taken any Gryffindor with him to invade France today, but he turned them down gently."
"Excuse me," Neville interrupted. "Exactly why is Harry invading France?"
"What he said," Bill agreed.

"I do love you," Ron said. "But Mum’s pie…"
"Did I ever mention that I kept my old school uniform?" Hermione asked him in a sultry voice.
"…is secondary to how much I love you," Ron finished.

"All right!" Zach cheered. "You know what this means?"
"What?" one of the seventh year prefects demanded.
"That Harry and Gabrielle are in there — Harry rescued his Princess, and they even found themselves a castle!"

*laughs and laughs and laughs*
A brilliant conclusion. I especially love the way none of the students in the least doubt that Harry is a Prince.

Jiapa posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 8:52pm

Yay! Lovely story, a delightful read. Not serious, of course, but lots of fun to wallow in.

I'm looking forward eagerly to Castles in the Sky.

in-kinsfire posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 4:33pm

Great story! I thought the whole red-riding-hood and convenient broom not flying was bizarre at first, but it all came together in the end.

Petunia Uphill posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 11:53am

*big grin* I very much liked this whole story and absolutely loved this last chapter. I can't wait to see what you have concocted for the sequel!

enigmatic_cat posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 10:17am

Gabrielle seems to have some serious problems. I think I preferred Hope to this story, mainly because the Harry in Hope is much more realistic (aside from the insane power and such). This Harry isn't pissed off at all (irrationally, but anyone would be) and automatically decides he wants to be dating with a really fucked up girl. Seems kinda screwed up, planning out her life around him. Either I'm missing something, some bit of information, like a compulsion someone placed on him, or Harry is just weird enough to like a sociopath....

frankocsic posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 3:40am

wow, very well done with this story! the highlights for this chapter for me are: the twins (hilarious), minerva and excalibur (you've taken it to the next level with first the sword, and then the castle), harry rescuing gabrielle (from little red to camelot, everything was an adventure worthy of a prince). gabrielle wondering how best to 'position' herself was also a riot.

loved this story. a grand, enjoyable read. again, great job. thanks for sharing this with us. i can't wait for 'castles in the sky,' or really, any other story you happen to dream up.

Mordre posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 1:30am

This is another story that I have truly liked. The whole prince/princess thing fits incredibly well with Harry and Gabrielle. The fairytale part more-so.

waywardson9577 posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 1:09am

Oh man I really do have to say that out of all the fanfic authors I have had the pleasure of reading, you and one of your other authors on this site are by FAR my favorites. Between you and that crazy duo known as bobmin I don't have to worry about being entertained by well writtne stories set in the wonderful world that JKR created for our enjoyment. And with the crazy ideas and fantastical twist that you all can come up with I know that Castles will be another truly enjoyable story. Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to your next story.

LDA posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2008 12:29am

well done with the fic, I was laughing out loud in loads of places I can't wait to see what you will come up with in your sequel.

msgupy posted a comment on Friday 11th July 2008 9:34pm

As to be expected with your writing - Wonderful, Marvellous, excellent editing and with this one FUN.
Thank you for your efforts. I don't review each chapter, because I don't believe I have anything constructive to say, but I check daily to see if there are updates.
I now look forward to CITS.
Regards
Yvonne Gupwell