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OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 2:16am

Well, I think Harry's got the perfect girlfriend. She wants him, they've saved each other's lives, she'll never hurt him, she's smart, she helped him become smart(or at least give him a whole lot of knowledge), they're both now sneaky, ambitious, and brave. Salazar and Godric had babies(Don't ask me how two males made babies, I'd say with some kind of special potion or spell, it's a world of magic after all), and they're perfect! Plus, she's beautiful, is now his same age and in his year, they will be playing the same quidditch position, they both now love pranking, seriously, what could be more perfect?! Anyways, one thing I've been enjoying from your Dawn Hogwarts(I think that's what it's called, sorry, I'm too lazy to check) story and this one is that it's mainly just good things happening, but they're all plausible, and the story is written really well, so I can just completely enjoy it.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 1:48am

I'm only a third of the way through the chapter, and I'm writing this little correction to stop myself from writing a long review when I reach the end of the chapter, so I can just move on to the next one quickly. Charlie said Norbert was starting to show interest in lady dragons. If I'm remembering wrong, sorry, but I seem to recall that sometime during the series(I'm thinking sixth or seventh book(Harry's bday?)), Charlie told Hagrid that Norbert was actually a girl and they were calling her Norberta. Just something I noticed, it's only a minor detail.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 1:36am

I don't know if I'm overrating you(in your opinion, since I obviously don't think I'm overrating you) but you're the best FF author whose work I've read(that sentence came out sounding horrible. Your next challenge as a write is to figure out a way I coud have phrased that :P). I've enjoyed all of your work immensely so far, and you have a decent number of HarryxGabriel, all of which I will be reading as soon as I'm done with this story. I'm sure I'll enjoy those too, though. I wanted to commend you on your writing before I forgot to(I have a TERRIBLE short term memory(but I have a quite good long term one), which is why it's at the end of a chapter instead of the end of one of your stories, though I think I commended you a tiny bit at the end of the last of your fanfics that I read. Yeah, well, this caused me to forget about half of what I wanted to comment on in this chapter specifically, so I'll just move on. P.S. I only really read Harry Potter, Fire Emblem(PoR and RD mostly), Spiderman, and the occasional Percy Jackson(whenever I get bored of the other ones, not THAT often). I'm just telling you that to forestall any comments you have about authors(of fanfiction) who you consider to be better than you, because if there are, I probably won't read any of their stuff ever. Anyways, I love your work, and thank you for your wonderful stories. I'm gushing a bit, but it's so rare that I come upon any good/great writing. I am a voracious reader, and my standards are pretty high.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 12:53am

A very satisfying change to the graveyard scene at the beginning. So, you kept all of the canon pairings(except for Ginny and Harry, for obvious reasons. I much prefer Gabriel anyways)? I guess that's all fine, though I'm really against Ron/Hermione, cause they just don't match. I can definitely live with it however. I always like it when Harry starts to become more Sirius about his life ;)

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 12:32am

The first time I stumbled upon this story while googling Harry and Gabriel Fanfiction, I stopped reading after the introduction, because I thought it was HarryxHermione, which I'm not that big on. After a couple weeks I actually just checked out your Harry Potter page and realized that this is a Harry and Gabriel FF. Now I feel really stupid :P

Bulldogmo posted a comment on Monday 8th June 2015 12:21am

first..... I love your writing, and I don't know how in the hell I missed this one, but I did. Second, Castle in the sky? is it up any where?

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Tuesday 16th December 2014 9:49pm

Did you ever post 'Castles in the Sky' anywhere?!

The Seeker posted a comment on Sunday 30th November 2014 12:40am

Wow!!! I've read your HP fairy tale, with a nod toward the Brothers Grimm, several times now without leaving a review. This, then, is for the entire story, not just this last chapter. Loved how you kept the appropriate voice throughout the story and doubled it for the last chapter, with all of the needed stops to honor the various fairy tale icons. This story seemed to distill your love for doing things BIG. Even for you, this was huge, and entirely appropriate and fun and such a wonderful feel good fable that I'm still smiling. The brilliance of this story is that it holds its appeal, even the fourth or fifth time through.

On of the thoughts that came to me on this read through was that this story would provide a wonderful course in positive thinking for younger students, maybe 8 to 11 or 12. Yes, Harry is Harry Potter and Garbrielle is one the most beautiful teens in the world, but it's their mindset, positive attitude, and willingness to work hard to reach their goals that would make this a wonderful subject for kids. It's a very empowering life philosophy and approach, because it's couched in terms of working hard, being honest, telling the truth, and being open to all sorts of people.

I'm sure you've been asked a thousand times if Castles in the Sky will ever see the light of day, so forgive me for adding my request to the many before it. This incredible fable of yours warrants a follow up story. I truly hope you have the time and energy to create it. As always, though, thanks for everything you do for your readers and know how much your efforts are appreciated. - The Seeker

red jacobson posted a comment on Monday 1st September 2014 12:19am

Hey Tim;

Just finished re-reading this story, and I'm wondering, has there been any movement at all on Castles in the Sky?


santiln posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2014 6:46am

This ff gets me every time. Come on dude!! Don't forget that we're waiting for Castles in the sky!


Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2014 12:11am


Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Tuesday 10th June 2014 9:50pm

"What promise?" Good Q. Moving swiftly on to Ch. 2.

kewllewk posted a comment on Monday 23rd December 2013 3:54am

I definitely love the whole fairy tale theme, and how you stuck with it. I agree, this gabrielle looks incredibly fun to write. this is a great story, and it will definitely go in my folder of bookmarks.

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 11:24pm

Are you still planing to do "Castles In The Sky" the sequel to this story?

gtgrouch posted a comment on Thursday 3rd October 2013 1:16am

I really like the new Hogwarts song!

Haven't laughed that hard in a long time.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd October 2013 2:44pm

Title really fits the story!

Sasha Botak posted a comment on Friday 16th August 2013 8:05am

An absolutely brilliant story, leaves a warm fuzzy feeling. Are you still working on or intending to post the sequel "Castles In The Sky"? Would love to see more.

Tim Sullivan posted a comment on Friday 2nd August 2013 3:30am

You know, I just re-read this and I realized that you never wrote "Castles In The Sky." Not trying to bug you, but whatever happened to that idea?

wolfey posted a comment on Monday 1st July 2013 12:25am

are you ever going to actually write this sequel? i mean i love your other stories but and waiting for castles in the sky

santiln posted a comment on Monday 15th April 2013 3:45pm

I think this is my third or fourth re read and still gets me as the first time.I usually end on tears and reviewing you. I love fairy tales and this is a great modern take on one.

I'm still waiting since the first time I read it for Castles in the Sky. I hope you will get around to write it some day.

Till my next re read (cause I'm sure it's going to happen before your sequel)