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amulder posted a comment on Monday 24th July 2017 8:34pm

Hey Tim!

Lazy monday and I felt like rereading this. Thanks for the enjoyment! Love this little fair tail.

Did you ever make any progress on Castles in the Sky?

best,

...art

ichaos posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2017 12:06am

This is the story I came to this site to see, and was not disappointed. I really enjoyed your portrayal of Gabrielle and the evolution of her relationship with Harry. The psychological aspects of Gabrielle's personality described throughout the story were a delightfully fascinating factor in the plot which was completely unexpected.

rhidragon posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2017 7:00pm

Brill story. Helped me to procrastinate :-)

Look forward to the next part.

Pennywise posted a comment on Wednesday 1st March 2017 4:18pm

Amazing story. It`s nice to see a Fairy tale story sometimes.

RHJunior posted a comment on Thursday 26th January 2017 9:54pm

This is a story. It is made of WIN and AWESOME.

Probably one of the best, if not THE best Harry Potter fic I've read in ages.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Saturday 27th August 2016 5:46am

Is "Castles in the Sky" ever going to be written?

kanazak posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2016 12:51am

Absolutely beautiful.

I've loved reading this today. This story was gripping, it was fluffy, it was funny, it was just all-around excellent. A masterpiece of fiction, in my opinion.

noylj posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2016 1:00am

I don't see castles in the sky any whete

where are you hiding it?

red jacobson posted a comment on Monday 27th June 2016 3:25pm

I know you are probably sick of this question, but is Castles In The Sky ever going to be written? I'm sure I'm not alone in wanting to know the rest of the story.

Red

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Thursday 14th April 2016 8:23pm

I happen to like all of your Harry/Gabrielle stories, so thank you again. Will you be writing "Castles in the Sky", or has real life changed that plan?

Wanderer posted a comment on Sunday 1st November 2015 8:21pm

What a fun story!

The last chapter felt a tad rushed, but really it was just sewing up all of the myriad threads you'd been so wonderfully weaving the first seven chapters so I'll not hold it against you.

If the end itself seemed trite and over-the-top all I need do is look at the title, and I grin when I do so I assure you!

Bookmarking this in my "Keepers" folder, with my great thanks for your generosity in sharing your skills as an artist.

M

Wanderer posted a comment on Sunday 1st November 2015 6:34pm

Simply fantastic, one of the best chapters of any story I've read.

You've somehow distilled an amazing array of complex and deep concepts, actions and motivations to their actors and presented them as logical and - most astoundingly - entertaining.

This has been a true pleasure to read and I just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and obvious talent.

M

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Monday 28th September 2015 4:39pm

Bloody hell, that was weird!! Next time there's a cute, young Veela scheming about things, I don't know if I'm going to join her, or run very far away very fast!!'

Imonwashere posted a comment on Sunday 2nd August 2015 5:06am

Cant wait for the sequel!

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 5:16am

I enjoyed this story so much, I love your writing, and thank you much for writing it. You combined Harry Potter with Arthurian legends, and I loved it. I can't wait to read the sequel. You're awesome. Keep up the great work.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 4:42am

I was crying when Hedwig died here, just like in the books, but even more so, because of the perching near him for years, and her intense loyalty, it was very touching. I've always been sad that Hedwig died and I had forgotten about her until then. It was a good way to have her go. I applaud you, recognizing(also, adding in the detail) that Owls do not have lifespans as long as humans(though you could have made the case of her being a magical owl, I'm glad you didn't), and writing such a touching epitaph. Immediately after that, you had that song, which was great. You do have a flair for poetry as I noticed a bit in Hogwarts Dawn(sorry if I'm still getting the name wrong, but I'm still too lazy and too into the story to check), at least I think so, I hope I'm not confusing that with another author's story, but probably not. As I said in a past review though, I do happen to have a terrible short term memory. I was guffawing when you had the song, as I didn't think the prank was going to be quite so amusing as that, as I thought(before that) there was only so much that you could put into writing. You proved me wrong though, because unlike most FF authors, you put an extraordinary amount of detail in it, and wrote your own song(By the way, I only just read your author's notes, right after writing the review, and I'm leaving my gushing over the song just so you can see how silly it sounds, with the author's notes being right above... LOL). Also, I forgot to say it last chapter, but it also applies to this one. You've developed Fawkes a bit more, which is great, as I always have loved the idea of a Phoenix(It's my favorite magical creature, and that might be because of the Harry Potter series, though I don't really remember, so it may have more subconciously affected my decision) being at least a supporting character, and, as they are depicted in myth as intellegent creatures, I'm happy to see that you're showing that he has a brain and feelings, rather than just having a scene with him molting, and then have him used for a couple notes sent, along with Dumbledore's escaping trick, before having him leave forever with Dumbledore's death in HBP. Anyways, great job, sorry I had more than usual to comment on this chapter(unless you enjoy long reviews, in which case change the 'sorry' to a 'you're welcome.' Great job, and keep it up.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 4:00am

I'd like to see them! Wait, no, I wanna see Gabrielle's more! -The mind of a teenage male, or in other words, me

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 2:57am

"Entered it is only by thems with a real need," Dobby and Yoda have combined to create Yobby!

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 2:52am

Ah, RIP Draco, mon dieu(Yay French, all hail the holy(and may I add cunning, ambitious, brave, smart, and beautiful) Gabrielle Potter(My favorite pairing)). Honestly, I just write these reviews as they pop into my head, which should explain a lot to you. Anyways, after the first couple chapters of a story, my reviews do start to get shorter, as I get interested more and more in the story. I'm still loving it, keep doing what you're doing(That is, writing great stuff at a decent pace, if you're slacking off or quitting, don't continue that).

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 2:16am

Well, I think Harry's got the perfect girlfriend. She wants him, they've saved each other's lives, she'll never hurt him, she's smart, she helped him become smart(or at least give him a whole lot of knowledge), they're both now sneaky, ambitious, and brave. Salazar and Godric had babies(Don't ask me how two males made babies, I'd say with some kind of special potion or spell, it's a world of magic after all), and they're perfect! Plus, she's beautiful, is now his same age and in his year, they will be playing the same quidditch position, they both now love pranking, seriously, what could be more perfect?! Anyways, one thing I've been enjoying from your Dawn Hogwarts(I think that's what it's called, sorry, I'm too lazy to check) story and this one is that it's mainly just good things happening, but they're all plausible, and the story is written really well, so I can just completely enjoy it.