paintduckky posted a comment on Thursday 12th February 2009 8:42pm

I love this story so much, and cannot wait for the sequal, but I do have one question. How come Greyback was in wolf form, but Remus was not?

Oh well, I still loved every moment of this story. It's amazing when I recall that he's doing all this over the course of a few days.

Aberbadger posted a comment on Tuesday 10th February 2009 7:39am

are you a well known practitioner of divination or a herald of doom? Less than a year after publishing this...

Kaerion posted a comment on Monday 2nd February 2009 12:49am

I've always felt that the first re-read of a completed story provides the most accurate basis for judging just how good it is, and I honestly couldn't be less surprised that I still think this one deserves a perfect 10. I think the only reason it doesn't easily dethrone 'Hope' as my favorite Tim-story of all time, is the subconscious knowledge that 'Castles' is still waiting, and that the tale is still unfinished.

Anyway, since I can't think of any complaints at all, and I could go on praising this story forever if I wanted to, I'll cut this short, and just thank you for sharing your amazing stories with us. As far as I'm concerned, you're still the undisputed champion of feel-good stories (or should that be anti-angst?), and the pure and unapologetic nature of this one (not to mention its pure awesomeness!), makes it one of your very best.

I hope that life treats you well, and that it'll allow you to share more of your stories soon. :) Keep up the great work!

Sean Brown posted a comment on Thursday 22nd January 2009 6:18am

I can't think of much to say, usualy I find myself verbose, words flowing from my mouth like so much over-ripe manure, yet, for this, I find myself strangly silent.

It was truly amazing. A pleasure to read. Thank you for creating it, and allowing me that pleasure, along with the countless others who have read this.

tmctflyboy posted a comment on Sunday 18th January 2009 5:12am

oh my god that was amazing!!!! i so hope you continue this story and have more of their adventures told. i just love the way this was written and look forward to more

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 5th January 2009 10:40pm

A true fairy tale it was. I absolutely adored it. You managed to make this not tacky, which is incredible. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I especially liked how it became more of a fairy tale with each chapter, instead of having that intensity the whole time. Overall, I'm quite impressed

Joel Fischoff posted a comment on Friday 2nd January 2009 1:54am

I truly loved this story. I can think of no other words that I can say.

Thank you.

Starlitwarrior posted a comment on Thursday 1st January 2009 7:44am

Jeeze, wow that's kewl! i like it a lot! Are you making a sequel, or have you made one? good luck if you do/did, and God Bless!! And really, you need to finish the school year! Lol.

Malaika Pyralis posted a comment on Wednesday 10th December 2008 8:06am

Just a grammer issue
"Bloody Hell," Harry swore again. "Have you heard of independent thought? I can accept listening to an expert, but I can accept accept not following it up with finding things out for your selves. I suggest that while I’m rescuing her you start reading up, because I will not have my Princess constantly disappointed by you." He turned and stormed out, far too irritated to let anything stop him.
- shouldn't that be can not

bobman posted a comment on Wednesday 10th December 2008 12:27am

"I’ve given away five percent of the shares so far, [...] which leaves me another thirteen to play with." "You are keeping eighty for yourselves?" Harry nodded. "Forty each for Gabrielle and me."

5 + 13 +80 = 98, what happened to the other two percent?

Other than that miscalculation, this is a great story, and I really hope you release some more of your writings soon.

bunny posted a comment on Monday 8th December 2008 3:17pm

I'm not sure I've reviewed this story before, but I love it. I've read it so many times, and although I don't like Harry Potter, I still love your stories. This one in particular! It always makes me cry. You are a brilliant writer, and never thought that Gabrielle would be my favorite character, but after reading your stories, she's the best!!!

Neil Glover posted a comment on Wednesday 26th November 2008 3:27am

Great story, i look forward to reading the sequel.

Micah posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2008 6:28pm

brilliance

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Wednesday 5th November 2008 7:10am

A wonderful story. You've done a great job in creating a new fairytale. The emotions in this story will take you from one end of the spectrum to the other and you'll enjoy every minute of it. Thanks for sharing your work and I look forward to other great stories from you.

Bethany posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd October 2008 10:18pm

I know I am months late in reading this, but I wanted to wait for a time when I would be able to give it all the attention it deserved. You were one of the first authors to turn me on to fanfiction, about 5 years ago I stumbled onto fanfiction.net (back when the site was good) and you have been my favorite ever since.
I want to say a big "thank you" for once again sharing your amazing talent with us nobodies. I enjoyed this story so much, it was the perfect fairytale.
I cannot wait to read Castles In The Sky. I truly do believe that you are one of the most talented writers I have ever had the privilage to read. If you ever do decide to publish something, I'll be there in line waiting for the release.
Congratulations on a job well done. It was amazing.

ed king posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 7:30pm

I just re-read all chapters. It's a GREAT read! I hope you find the time to continue the thread because I really enjoy reading your work. This in particular but Buggs, White Knight, Grey Queen, Hope, TMW & the others are so good I'll pick one of them in a month or so and re-read them again. Just because....

Thankssss
Ed.

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Wednesday 1st October 2008 9:57am

Great story! I really enjoyed the pace of it and the integration of the fairy tales. I hope to see more of this series soon.

Rob

dstar posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 9:23pm

Good writers borrow. Great writers steal -- and while I'm not arrogant enough to call myself a great writer, I'll put myself in the first camp without hesitation or blush.

The key, of course, is who you borrow or steal from -- and I think you're more than worthy. So consider the idea of a mate who's almost unhealthily devoted to Harry stolen; I needed a way to keep Ginny from turning into a Ginny Sue in Whore of Slytherin, and that will do nicely. Consider yourself borrowed from, at a minimum.

dennis1 posted a comment on Friday 12th September 2008 8:02am

Awesome
Read this again; thanks

sleep when your dead posted a comment on Saturday 6th September 2008 3:22pm

good story best harry gabrielle story so far