By Jeconais
Reviews
Phoenix4life posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 11:28pm
All I can say is that you sre utterly brilliant. Please tell me that you'll be doing a sequel or something similar.
sunrisesunset posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:49pm
Wait - only one more chapter to go... as in, total? *blink blink* Please tell us it isn't so!
Anyway, interesting. I still don't see a villain, even if Gabrielle has been "kidnapped". Unless it's simply the inertia of the stagnant wizarding world?
noylj posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:40pm
Great chapter. Too bad you plan to wrap things up soon.
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:26pm
I worry about Dumbledore's poker face. Excellent chapter. Makes me wonder what kind of kidnapping this would be, or if it is just a setup by Gabbi.
I'm looking forward to the next installment. Thank you for writing.
Mike (MoA)
joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:19pm
That was good for several laughs, thank you.
Fine chapter and the story's got it all: comedy, drama, action, romance.
It's a little short on gratuitous nudity and car chases but that can be forgiven if there is a sequel. ;-)
ladysavay posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:59pm
BWAHA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!
I was ROTFLMAO for twenty minutes as soon as I read the first verse of the song.
BRILLIANT!!!!
I simply can't wait for more. The whole story has been breath-takingly clever!
More, please? As fast as you can.
Savay
Kaerion posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:57pm
Oh, I definitely loved this chapter! :D I'd have to say that the high point was, as so many times before, your characterizations. Everyone from Gred and Forge, to Su, to Natalie was absolutely wonderful. I have no idea how you do it, but you really have a Gift as far as that is concerned. It shouldn't be possible to love a new character after seeing as little of them as we have Natalie, but I really do!
Also, the discussion about your last chapter, on your forums, helped me figure out just why I felt there was something "off" about this fic, especially the pacing in the last couple of chapters: It's just too different from anything I've read before! So, because of that, I'll be saving any judgments on the "big picture"-stuff until next week, when I can read the whole fic from start to finish in one go.
-Kaerion
PS. The prank was absolutely genius, and I *really* hope we'll get to see at least a few more, even if we have to wait until you start posting Castles in the Sky! :D
Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:51pm
I think I see where you are going. Great chapter. I look forward to seeing Harry in action, not to mention Gabriel. The only problem with getting the next chapter is that it is the last one and it will likely be a while before you return to keep me so highly entertained, as is your wont. Thank you so much for writing. W.
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:36pm
Harry invades France. *snicker*
From his rather carefree attitude, I'd say he knows something is up.
frankocsic posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:21pm
great chapter. i was the slightest bit put off at the start of chap6, what with all the psych talk. it had me wondering what the heck all that had to do with the potterverse. but you more than made up for it with the latter part, namely harry's visit to the quibbler. classic lovegoodness. very nice. and with this chapter, i really start believing that harry can really do what he says he will and be the prince that gabrielle has made him out to be. and the prank! natalie is brilliant. it's gonna be an exciting time at hogwarts with her there. great job. can't wait for the next (last? aww) one.
Jeff Bernstein posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:16pm
This was great I get the felling that the kidnapping was not real, just a prank by Albus for fun and to let harry be harry
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:12pm
Outstanding chapter, I am really loving this story.
gunny
Bobboky posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:11pm
this story is great, so very great
Ezra'eil posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 8:42pm
Another great chapter!
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 7:55pm
Outstanding chapter. Gotta love Luna.
gunny
Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 7:23pm
Ah, it just gets better and better. I had forgotten about the 'wizard's staff' so I got to enjoy it all over again!
ridgeback77 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 6:59pm
Excellent work as always.
Deborahsu posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:45pm
Let me guess--the psycho shrink has her incarcerated ... um ... I mean hospitalized? I guess we'll see! What a fun story!!!
DrT posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:41pm
Just one more chapter? Can't wait. It was nice to see Harry operating on his own so well, and making a new friend
motherjenjen posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 11:59pm