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Anand posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 7:21am for Chapter 1

Sweet! A new epic from you! You can't imagine how longly I've been anticpating your stories. Great start, sounds like this will be a wild, fun, and romantic romp. Perfect.

Danny K posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 7:02am for Chapter 1

Yay! What a great start for a story! Thanks for this.

Alex2877 posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 6:51am for Chapter 1

Ok Now I HAVE to read more I will be following this stroy till it's completion. This as usual is a fine piece of work so far and I cant wait for the rest of the story.

Treck posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 6:19am for Chapter 1

Snip: Harry laughed and saluted Percy casually. "Still working at the Ministry?"

Percy nodded. "Fudge’s assistant."

"That tosser is still in charge?" Harry asked in disbelief.

"That is a longer discussion for another day," Dumbledore said quietly.

Hmm... I can see the headlines now.

Harry Potter Awake After Eight Years!

Thats right Fo....

In other news the ministry was evacuated after Minister Fudge filled his pants upon hearing that our savior was awake. We are told that it will take 14 hours to get the stench cleaned out of the ministry.


Damn that was good Tim.

impatientuser posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 6:06am for Chapter 1

!!! I got off work this morning and found this waiting for me. I'm soooo happy. I've been looking forward to this for month and months, ever since I found this site.

It looks like it is going to live up to its promise. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. =)

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 5:11am for Chapter 1

Have you noticed that so very many stories go back to GoF and use it as a starting point to "Fix" things?

I first thought of this and decided it was mostly because people want Sirius to live, but as I've pondered it, I've come to believe it's more than that. Somewhere many of us feel canon itself needs fixing.

Cedric may or may not die, but Harry takes a turn in OotP that many of us want changed. He becomes less than he was heading to be, and it's not just the Boy-Who-Lives version of teenaged angst we don't really like.

Toss or keep horcruxes, toss or keep the hallows for that matter, we want our hero to be more than was delivered. He can and should be flawed, deeply even it needed for a good plot, but we want him going in a different direction that canon went.

Great start of a clever and different tale.

In my opinion, clever and different are the only reasons to write HP fanfiction anymore.

Cheers!

Jeconais replied:

I think that GoF is also the most fun of all the books. The Tri-Wizard Tournament etc gives people a lot of space for creativity.

I think that Sirius might be a byproduct. Halfway through reading HBP was when I stopped - so going back to the book before that makes more sense.

I chose this starting point because it was the cleanest for the story line - It had a valid reason for Gabrielle to be there, and the right set up for a nap :)

Thanks,

T.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 5:09am for Chapter 1

- Wow, very nice start to a very interesting take on the 'after the fall' story.

Lighhtwhispers posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 4:55am for Chapter 1

Shiny! I can feel my teeth rotting already. (This is a good thing.) This story looks like it will contain large amounts of awesome.

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 4:42am for Chapter 1

Now this is an interesting story! very nice play of the Princes and the Princess and Sleep beauty all wrapped uo in one story.....Sheeps

KenF posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 4:20am for Chapter 1

I've been looking forward to this one. Looks like a nice start.

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 3:25am for Chapter 1

Oh Man, talk about a cliff hanger! WoW great story by the way! started reading and couldnt stop, but hell most of your stories are like that to me anyway!

Amamama posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 3:14am for Chapter 1

Second time through - and now I noticed that Dumbledore was the second one at Harry's side. The first one was Gabrielle?

Forgot to say, but I really like this story with both Sirius, Remus and Tonks. Whose hair is probably reflecting her elation at his awakening and not insecurity. Fred and George work for the ministry? Oh, I do look forward to these private talks... What is it Harry wants from Sirius? What other kinds of knowledge have they managed to pump into his head? And what's up with Fudge (apart from being fudgy)? *rubs hands with glee*

OK, 'nuff fanfic now. Time to get a life...

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:55am for Chapter 1

I am once again in feminist critique mode, but that was a great story, despite the little voice in my head. Thanks

Zicou posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:35am for Chapter 1

Wouaouh .... it's a very great beginning !
Continuuuuuue !
Z.

nostaw posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:31am for Chapter 1

Nice to see the long awaited chapter one.

It lived up to its expectations and more.

And a cliffhanger to boot (hopefully it won't be long before it it answered).

Keep up the good work.

-nostaw

Patches posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:12am for Chapter 1

This is a really good story. I look forward to more. Thank you for writing. pms

Maverick512000 posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:01am for Chapter 1

Wonderful story and may I say it's good to have you posting again. Welcome back.

Marvin posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 12:58am for Chapter 1

Nice... a bit fast at the beginning, but as usual a bunch of great ideas, nice writing style- very content with your work!
Thanks,
Marvin

perspicacity posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 12:46am for Chapter 1

I enjoyed this first chapter and I look forward to where you go with this story. But then again, I enjoy most anything you write.

I've a couple of minor quibbles: I think that at times the dialogue seemed a bit stilted, almost as if it were a screenplay and not an organic story. In this sense, it didn't seem as good as some other pieces you've done (White Knight, Grey Queen was, on the whole, smoother, at least at the start).

Harry's cheering Snape's death was a little disturbing. Also, Harry's insta-love of Gabrielle was also slightly disappointing, as I like to enjoy the chase a bit more. The bet with the twins was slightly cliche.

Despite these little things, as I said, I foresee this being another outstanding story to add to the fandom. I'm looking forward to looking forward to the next installments. Thanks so much for writing!

Jeconais replied:

I actually thought it was the other way around - that WK,GQ was a bit more forced - although, I may be looking at this from the wrong perspective.

What I was thinking about Snape's death, is that Harry goes to bed, and when he wakes up, Snape's gone - no more sneering, no more anything and that the death is a little abstract. Harry has no emotional attachment to what happened.

The lack of chase was one of things I was a bit nervous about in this story - it is a bit of a backward step for me. Sadly, I seem to have gone from this, to an even deeper relationship in the next one. It's not until my last story that you'll get a more realistic relationship mess.

Thanks for your thoughts :)

Tim

mjc posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 12:42am for Chapter 1

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I suppose Hermione is responsible for the OED and Hogwarts: A History being dumped into Harry's head...

What I'm waiting for is when Harry goes of reciting Beowulf, in the original Saxon...that would be Remus's fault, right?

Over all, a fantastic start, with just enough detail to fill in the gaps without overwhelming the reader. I know that more details will emerge as the story unfolds, but I am impatient...:D I want it now...

There, with that off my chest, I guess I can wait a bit...good job. (Oh, if this is what we have to look forward to when you start original work, you'll be looking for a large house in Scotland in no time...just find a different studio than WB to handle the movie rights, they can be such idiots).

Jeconais replied:

A remote house in Scotland would be nice - although I'd prefer Cornwall ;)

Glad you enjoyed it :)