hallie posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 6:17pm for Chapter 1

I thought it was good and can't wait for the next chapter. Good Work!!!

FireFairy posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 5:46pm for Chapter 1

that was an awesome chapter! I am so glad you finally posted this, and I love it! Nice job, but I'm afraid I don't get the intro, ah well! I can just read on and hope my mind finally figures it out! Nice job!

sunrisesunset posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 3:56pm for Chapter 1

An interesting start. To be honest, it's a bit jarring to transition from GoF canon directly to something this crazy. Still, I know that if anybody can pull it off, it's you. I look forward to seeing how this gallivanting fairy tale turns out. ^^

Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:58pm for Chapter 1

Oh this first chapter was very much worth the wait, i loved every word and laughed alot, i adore how Harry is acting with Gabby, can't wait to see what happens next.

CJ Whittaker posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:31pm for Chapter 1

Interesting, I look forward to seeing how this one pans out. As usual I love your comedy, and it's always good to see a Harry story that isn't an angst filled wrist slasher.

Lu

Lilredwitch posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 1:13pm for Chapter 1

OMG I love this. More please!!

Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 12:02pm for Chapter 1

This story is great. I am looking forward to more. I love Harry Gabrielle stories. Keep up the good work.

Silo posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 11:58am for Chapter 1

come on tim update agen we love it

stmurashige posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 11:33am for Chapter 1

Yahoo! It's always a pleasure to read your stories, and I'm looking forward to reading one that's unabashedly fairytale-like. If anyone deserves to be a handsome prince with a beautiful princess at their side it's definitely Harry.

The scene in the graveyard was very well done, especially the interaction between Harry and his parents. It will be very interesting to hear why Fudge is still in power, among other things, and I thank you for Percy's "recto-cranial inversion" line. Loved it.

haroon hameed posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 11:28am for Chapter 1

Nice Plot and Nicely Written please continue and update soon.

GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 11:25am for Chapter 1

I love it, more more

GuardianOfLight

kendra1 posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 11:09am for Chapter 1

Woohoo! Well worth the wait! That was excellent.

I do have one question though.

"The Weasleys, all of them, along with Dumbledore, McGonagall, Cedric, Cho, Fleur and her sister, kept vigil and waited for the Boy-Who-Lived to wake up from his coma."

Where was Hermione?

I'm looking forward to next week and thank you for what looks to be the start of a great story.

sblackfan posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 10:47am for Chapter 1

Fantastic story!! I love Harry and Gabrielle together and I can't wait to find out what promise she made.

Mrs.TiffanyPotter posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 10:30am for Chapter 1

A new story Woot! Can't wait for more. keep up the good work.

Alexis posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 10:04am for Chapter 1

Awesome beginning to this story. I'm glad that Cedric was okay and I love everything that you managed to cram in here. The coma, the learning, the pranking, all excellent. Great job!

Poirot posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 8:56am for Chapter 1

Absolutely wacky and I totally LOVE it! Please update quickly!

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 8:07am for Chapter 1

Lovely story so far. Thank you so much.

Loved Harry's prank on the school.

Looking forward to more.

Tom A.

Rettet181 posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 8:03am for Chapter 1

Finally another story from you! I can't wait to see the rest of it.

Overall, I enjoyed it so far. You really weren't lying when you said in a post a long time ago that this story was pretty much about Harry just wanting to "sneak away and snog with his sexy Veela girlfriend" instead of being responsible as the other people in his life want him to be. This should be great fun, if nothing else.

Harry's instant trust and downright love for Gabrielle is somewhat strange. I'm hoping that you have an explanation for it later, because if I woke up from a coma to an unknown girl having her way with me I’d be more than a little freaked out. Although, if she was as hot as Gabrielle likely is perhaps I’d be a bit more receptive… ;)

At any rate, I’m excited that we finally get to see Happily Ever After. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 7:45am for Chapter 1

YA A new story and I like it!!

UdderPD posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 7:25am for Chapter 1

Absolutly brilliant.

TTFN UdderPD