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koppe posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2008 7:13am for Chapter 1

Great start, can't wait for more!
There's just too few stories with Gabrielle out there, so I hope this will be as good as "Hope".
Loved the fight with Voldemort. So all the DE are dead? Will Draco seek revenge? Will Fudge try to arrest Harry for their (the DEs) murder?
One thing though... I was a bit surprised that Hermione wasn't mentioned among those keeping vigil around Harry's bed.

Waruiko posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 9:20pm for Chapter 1

Right mostly good with some bad mixed in, like how everything feels rushed and your explanation for Harry not spazing seems like a throw away. In other words if you used a number scale to mesure emotion and Panic is a -7, Terror a -15, hyperacive happyness a +7, and boundless joy a +15, why is Harry acting like a +9 to +12 after taking a "calming" potion. I'm not saying he should be without emotion, but if +-0 is pure serenity on that scale he shouldn't have been more than +-3.

DLDR: This feels rushed from start to finish, and shouldn't een be in the same class as Hope.

razor_M posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 4:48pm for Chapter 1

dude, this kicks ass!! holy shit, man. you gotta write more, cause school is getting out in two days for me, and i'll be spending a lot of time reading this, among others. i can't wait for more, man. it rules!

Godslayer221 posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 3:23pm for Chapter 1

You are without a doubt one my favorite Harry Potter fanfiction writers. This looks to be the start to another enjoyable read, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Meghan posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 3:00pm for Chapter 1

Sweet. I enjoyed this beginning very much. Can't wait to read more of this hilarious story. Got to hand it to you, you come up with amazing work repeatedly. I think my favorite part is the end with Harry asking who gave him kissing instructions.

GinnyLover posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 12:15pm for Chapter 1

Oh i LOVE this! Cant wait to see what happens!

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 9:41am for Chapter 1

love it!!!!!

Hoss posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 6:49am for Chapter 1

This look's like the start of a fun ride. Thanks

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 4:55am for Chapter 1

Augh you evil B@#$%@! You threw kenny of a cliff!

Excellent start on the story so far, some very interesting stuff. Great dialogue!

Tav posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 4:48am for Chapter 1

good to see this, always brightens my day to see a new story. I'm enjoying it so far, and waiting to see where it will go. Only minor nitpick I have with what I've read so far is the Polyjuice wearing off on Barty Jr. after he died, as Cannon indicates that if you die in the shape you're locked into that form.But as I said, a minor nitpick. looking forward to the next installment

rune1806 posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 4:44am for Chapter 1

Very very good you answered the questions I had with Hermione very neatly. So I will get more wine and wait.

darthloki posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 4:06am for Chapter 1

Ooh!

Christie posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 1:57am for Chapter 1

Written in such a way that reading it makes me want more and more :)

In short, Outstanding, if a bit short. It's a refreshing change from angsty!Harry fics I've been reading.

But anyways, one thing has bugged me ever since I started reading your fics....








How do I pronounce "Jeconais"?

Belal posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 9:46pm for Chapter 1

... until the very end of GoF, which does not take place in this story, Fudge is considered by Harry to be a little bumbly, but overall a good person. He has no reason to think of him as a "tosser."

Other than that, decent beginning, if you ignore the rampant OOCness without explanation.

TheHard posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 9:26pm for Chapter 1

Nice story!!! but, how convenient that the put him on stasis for the right number of years in order to match Gabrielle's age... mmm... suspicious! :-D

Nice, nice... I'm really looking for the next chapter! was a really long wait for another of your stories :)

unperfectwolf posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 8:48pm for Chapter 1

YAY. I'm excited about this! Nice boost for me, as we lag into finals. Cant wait for more.

fallingmonkey3 posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 8:18pm for Chapter 1

Ooh. I'm intrigued. Big time. I'm liking this fic already. Light-hearted Harry? THE BEST KIND! And Voldy is gone, at least for now, which is another bonus. :D Great job Jeconais!

Chi Vayne posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 7:24pm for Chapter 1

Very nice.

hallie posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 6:26pm for Chapter 1

I thought it was good and can't wait for the next chapter. Good Work!!!

I enjoy your stories and can't wait until you write more. I do like the Harry/Gabby stories -but, I really like Harry/Ginny - will you write more about them too?

Hurry up with the next chapter as I am sure it will be as good as the first one. I think this is going to be a great story - keep up the good writing!

Lady_Hope posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 6:24pm for Chapter 1

ok so judgement is now here...I LOVE IT!! SQUEEEALLL!! perfect thing to take my mind of the impending finals i know nothing for. thus far, its not my fav of ur stories, but the tone of it amuses me and while its light, theres a plot and stuff. so i officially am addicted to another story.
cant wait for more!!!