White Knight, Grey Queen
6 - Return
By Jeconais
Reviews
John Wilburn posted a comment on Friday 8th July 2005 3:22pm for 6 - Return
Dear Jeconais,
I've don't know when I've enjoyed another writer's stories as much as I haave yours.
I would like to say something that would help you to become a better writer, however except for a few typos I can't think of anything I would have done different.
Sincerely,
John
P.S. I'm very thank that you and your family were unharmed in the recent bombings.
John
Gawl posted a comment on Friday 8th July 2005 3:15pm for 6 - Return
I think it went a little too easily with Dumbledore, but other than that I love it!
t_gebhardt posted a comment on Friday 8th July 2005 3:00pm for 6 - Return
It was a great chapter and I liked it. But somehow I have the feeling that it went ... to smoth. I take the bumps come in the next chapter?
Christina posted a comment on Friday 8th July 2005 3:48pm for 6 - Return