gara5289 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2012 4:43pm

AWESOME. Everyone has kage bunshins as the way to beat paperwork, enslaving the civilians to do it is just plain awesome. if you couldn't tell, i like your story.

gara5289 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2012 4:26pm

Again, your fox is awesome. Though i am confused, first chapter Kyuubi said it was an it and then later it's all about vixens and now it seems to be a woman. I will admit it's possible i missed something when laughing but yeah. Seemed weird.

gara5289 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2012 4:12pm

Single most amusing chapter of fanfiction i've ever read, made even better by subtly using some cliches to have a lot of fun. Great story. Also amused at how you are using the fox.

XxXlexxibabeXxX posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2012 5:20am

"I like women who don’t play stupid games, who demand that I act like an adult, and are sure in themselves. I find it as sexy as hell."

Oh my gawd, Naruto is this complete idiot with this vein of fucking genius multiplyed my 12,000,000 and it's wonderful.

XxXlexxibabeXxX posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2012 4:21am

And I don't even mind you kissing my mum!!!

Best. Thing, Ever.

phnxfyr posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2012 7:31am

great story can't wait for more

Ashley Reveur posted a comment on Saturday 31st March 2012 2:57pm

ZOMG <3 If you don't know, I'm kinda fangirl squealing right now. This is AWESOME. :D Granted it's the first Naruto fanfic I've ever read, but your style is just... perfect.:D Me loves!! :D You're soo evil ya know?? Now I'll look at every other Naruto fic I come across and find them somehow lacking even if they're awesome in their own way... :p ZOMG I CAN'T WAIT for the next chappies XDDD THANK YOU!! XDDD

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 25th March 2012 11:35am

thank you for sharing this fantastic story please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

Tenchifew posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2012 10:47am

Just reread the whole thing.

Great, great story. Love it. A unique approach, great characterisation, Well written action. And Four. Everything is better with Four in it.

Thank you for writing this great story, looking forward to more of it.

Michael10 posted a comment on Sunday 18th March 2012 1:24am

Awesome.

Getting a major kick out of the clones and their quirks. keep up the good work and give us more as life allows.

ficbob posted a comment on Saturday 17th March 2012 10:09pm

Jiraiya should not have ordered the ANBU off to a distance without at least a nod or handsign from the Hokage . . . just my thought on the chain of command in an interesting chapter.

Looking forward to more

Thanks

HopelessDreamer posted a comment on Saturday 17th March 2012 9:55am

Y'know, the fic's really changed from the first chapter, which is really bashy. Now it seems more trying to uplift those characters, which is an improvement.

joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 17th March 2012 8:07am

Entertaining. Thanks for the update.

But why, the Hell, do you have spellcheck="false" set here?!?! >:-(

keichan2 posted a comment on Friday 16th March 2012 8:08pm

Thanks for the new chapter!

I have to confess that I REALLY like Four ;-)

I hope to read more soon!

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 16th March 2012 7:27pm

Great fun here, even as Naruto got hurt and fixed, and then hurt right again, but will be hopeful that things continue on their nice pace, even as Anko is likely plotting big time to get some loving with the whirlpool.

dan26 posted a comment on Friday 16th March 2012 1:06am

Four walked back in to the waiting room. "He’s going to be fine," she said. "Chakra exhaustion and blood lost. Hard headed idiot."

No one commented on the irony of a clone of Naruto calling someone else hard headed

Actually I believe that it takes a hard-headed person to know somebody trying to be 1 as well

Xuck007 posted a comment on Tuesday 13th March 2012 8:54am

awesome chapter mate

update soon now

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Tuesday 13th March 2012 3:55am

You had a permanent female clone of Naruto quote Ace Rimmer before going on an assassination mission...

Awesome

GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Monday 12th March 2012 9:24pm

You sure like putting Naruto in the hospital! :D How long was he out after curse seal before he got back in for the stabbing? :)

alec_potter posted a comment on Monday 12th March 2012 5:02am

Nice chapter, quite power packed. Can't wait to know what you plan to do with the impeding war.