Kortir posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 5:46am

Gotta hand it to you, this rates at least in my top five Naruto fics that I can recall at this point. I've spent more time laughing than is even close to normal, and I absolutely love what you're doing with the entire Narutoverse. I'm very much looking forward to seeing where you'll go from here. The separate personalities of the clones is excellent as well, it's a lot of fun to see them interact with each other and other people. Nice thoughts with Kyuubi translating dog speech, and the jinchuuriki sensing ability- those are particularly awesome additions. So, Tsume is now getting involved, huh? Sweet. I hope Hana will show up as a result? I've always liked seeing Hana when she gets characterized properly, and she has tons of potential as a character and as a romantic pairing with Naruto.

Thanks so much for posting again! I hope things in your personal life are resolving well. I just found out about your twitter updates when browsing the site, so naturally I'll be watching there to see how things are going as well. Same name as mine here. Looking eagerly forward to the next chapter!

whitefish066 posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 5:41am

This story is absolutely hilarious, and you've made a Naruto that I like immensely. I've read some of your other works from this site and have found then all to be brilliant. I haven't noticed any of those spelling errors you mentioned in the beginning, but I could have just been too engrossed in the story to notice. You give aspiring writers, like me, something to shoot for. Thanks for the quality entertainment.

darkelf12 posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 5:01pm

I love this fic. I really do. Can't wait for more of it.

firetown posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 8:15am

you are such a great author, i love you stories!!!

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 7:39am

Fun. Thanks for the update.

switchhammerhit posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 6:27am

Hello Jeconais,
many, many thanks for the update. I must admit that I am still smirking as I respond to this update. This was a lot of fun, I especially enjoyed Naruto's revenge on Jiraiya, very well thought out. It's something that I would not have thought of, hence the reason that I am not an author but a reader. Keep up the great work. I look forward to the next update!

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 6:04am

Hmmm. I must have missed the notice of this chapter when it came out.

Naruto's a bit of a Gary Stu, but the chapter's still entertaining.

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Random typo note:
Is it busboy or bellhop? Does Naruto travel with a bunch of china? :)

David Thacker posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 5:21am

That was great and very funny.Keep up the great work.

loiosh posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 5:01am

Love this story! Ive probably re-read it like 5 times now and every time gets laughs! keep up the good work!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 3:20am

Fun chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

thehoboking posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 3:11am

Great chapter...love the interactions between Naruto and the sennin...please if possible keep the Naruto/harem to the end of the story Naruto defiantly deserves to marry a harem of girls...thnx for posting and please keep. Up the great work

Quincy posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 2:57am

Hahaha, thats one way make a point.
It's good to see that Naruto isn't going to manwhore his way through every female ninja who's passed through puberty.

zoroz posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 2:53am

this chapter was full of awesomeness and im glad you updated this story as its one of the best on the web. I really hope you decide to continue it and have regular updates :)

selonianth posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 1:36am

It's about time mate. Can't wait for more.

Zaxxon posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 12:09am

This is a great story and a very lovable and interesting Naruto. I am greatly enjoying this story and version of Naruto.

Looking forward to more, whether it comes out.

Zachattack868 posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 11:51pm

Nicely done. I'm looking forward to the next one :)

jayjons posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 10:59pm

love this story. wish you'd update more often.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 10:46pm

The personalities that the clones are developing are great and Naruto's growing maturity is equally entertaining, well done and thanks.

OdinMage posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 10:42pm

YAY! Anytime I see a new chapter of... ANYTHING from you, it's a time to rejoice. But I'm especially liking this story; likely because I've become addicted to Naruto fanfic. Anyway, another great chapter and I can't wait for more... literally, I can't wait... so get writing!

Templar24 posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 9:46pm

Even if it takes time as long as the chapters keep this quality they are worth the wait. I think I enjoy this most for the more lighthearted almost parody without being a parody tone. At the same time you manage to sneak in some interesting questions on behavior and life in general. It does not seem to be an easy mix to pull off but you have done so quite well. I look forward to future chapters and fics.