Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:23pm

Never really been a fan of this anime beyond a few fanfic, but you have definitely written a winner, thanks.

Stuunad posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 8:37pm

Brilliantly funny.

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 7:12pm

Whoohoo!
Glad to see something from you. And a new branch in subjects to boot. awesome and hilarious first chapter. Hope to see more soon.
You are one of my favorite authors. Hope to see you with more...and hopefully something of "Wild Horses". its too good of a story to leave unfinished.
Michael

Marius DeJordan posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 7:09pm

Congratulations Tim.

Another great and unique story. I love your Naruto. He is sly as a fox. Kawaii No Jutsu! snicker. Thanks for sharing and I wait for the next chapter.

Marius

ikestorm posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 6:25pm

The sheer amount of times you used the word kawaii made my brain bleed.

Randy Mickle posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 6:12pm

Great start and its funny as hell.

grey_shadow_horse posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 4:44pm

nice chapter :) I like those new jutsu. I liked how all those jounin cliche behavior are fake. It seems logical to fake a weakness.
Good luck with the next chapter.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 1:43pm

LOL! More indepth and a slower buildup might have been more fun, but I giggled like a lunatic while reading this.

zagan posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 11:56am

Okay, just no. I admit it's your style but I stop at the Kawai no jutsu. They're funny ridiculous and just ridiculous, this fic is the later.
The uter dismissal of Hinata in one phrase was low too, that you don't want a Naru/Hina I can accept but that's just mean for no reason.
It's great to see you try your hand at Naruto and I'm all for that, I might even go back to this fic later. But at the moment no.

Nuit Tombee posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:24am

LMFAO...That's one of the silliest stories that I've ever read and yes Pudgypudge is really good. Waiting patiently for Second Year Slytherins ~ Update! Ja Ne (Goodbye/Farewell)

Daenin posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:16am

I love it! *is laughing and giggling* It's awesome, wonderful, cute, sad, and... very, very funny!

h_p4eva posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:12am

Hi nice to see a new story from you, I loved this chapter very well written and sooo funny keep up the good work. Ive read lots of naruto and seen lots of techniques and ive never seen one as good as the kawaii jutsu rofl.

Rob Roy Baars posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:00am

This is great, I haven't had as much fun reading in a while.
I really hope you update this regularly

Chris1 posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 8:55am

I can't really take this fic seriously. But I loved every minute of it :D Thank you for sharing!

Chris

seekertlk posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 7:51am

Oh hell yes! I love it!

One of the advantages of a super-powered Naruto (mostly unlike a fully buffed H.P.) is that he can use his powers for insane and preposterous humor.

I very much think that's where you're likely to go with this, and I hope so; your brand of humor and the Narutoverse should work very well together.

If a request is not too audacious, may I ask that you have some fun with Gai & Lee? I'd love to see what you do with 'em.

Eewec posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 7:25am

...

I laughed. I laughed some more. I did a spit take or three. I laughed again and every now and then, just to throw me, there was a serious section so my jaw muscles could recover and the next spit take could be lined up.

Brilliant, utterly completely brilliant.

Question though; is this a one-shot, or chapter one of what promises to be an utterly legendary story of epic proportions?

Eewec.

Pointer posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 7:11am

"He’d always thought the demon boy an idiot,"

Naruto, like some other characters,<cough, Harry, Xander> is very much an idiot. Thus, the fun of fanfiction. Turning dummies into heroes...

I'm only somewhat familiar with Naruto as compared to Harry Potter or BtVS, but as usual, your story's great. It kept me laughing most of the way through.

Enjoyed it.

Anthony Penny posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 5:08am

This was a great read. I think that this was the most unusual partnership between Naruto and Kyūbi that I have ever seen.

Killedbykarma posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 4:57am

I have the sudden urge to say this after reading this:
This is Madness!
This is KONOHA!
And wrap it up with: This is great! Glad to see you writing again. Also a very humorous and interesting way to at least start him out not too powerfully. Though with your stories the main mostly ends up god-like and just takes a while to learn to control it.

Kruen posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 4:13am

Oh, this is great. I love your stories.