Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 5:54pm

A nice chapter, keep it up.

solitare99 posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 9:25am

I love it! There are a lot of twists from the usual fanon such as no sympathy for Gaara.

keichan2 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th December 2012 9:03am

I had a lot of fun reading this chapter! Lots of laughs! Thanks :-) I wonder if Naruto only decided to emulate Raiden with some tricks, or if he had some really interesting new techniques... I wonder what is happening behind the scenes, with all the kamis... The other second round fights look promising! I hope to read more soon!

huskerfan posted a comment on Tuesday 25th December 2012 2:01am

Very good story so far, Im really looking forward to reading more.

Tammin posted a comment on Monday 24th December 2012 4:22am

This was a great chapter. I liked the small touches that you threw into it like meeting Raiden and Naruto's entrance to the Chuunin Exam's third phase. It was a bit smaller than normal, but in no way is that a complaint, I very much enjoyed it.i did like Kyuubi's response to getting a "Hey" from Lord Raiden.

Pai posted a comment on Monday 24th December 2012 2:00am

Great to see more of this. a well done naruto is so rare these days.

And Tsuande kissing Naruochan? epic

lydiakate98 posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2012 5:53am

Awesome chapter. I love that Naruto is unpredictable and priginal and Sasuke is right tha he is driving everyone to be better. Also, thank you for giving Shikamaru that kick in the gut. He was following a plan (or so I've always assumed), but his decision to do that in front of International guests was terrible decision making in action. Looking like a lazy, misogynistic asshole does not get your hidden village contracts. Loved Sasuke and his growth and Sakura and her growth. Thank you for not going the basher route, ever. I am tired of it and know I can always go to your stories for respite.

dan26 posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2012 7:30pm

to be honest I hope hanabi is part of the harem I don't base this on age but on how naruto treats her. My impression of hanabi is naturally shy around naruto despite being in a royal clan, not hair trigger shy like hinata usually is

T.Zukumori posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2012 5:26pm

Awesome new installment. Great reading during the holiday madness. Thanks for updating!

Tenchifew posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 4:28pm

Again, a great chapter.

Very interesting developments and fights.

Wish you the best in ordering your life.

Thank you very much for writing.

loiosh posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 2:08am

Damn love the new chapter!! Cant wait to read the final two chapters! Merry Christmas and ty for the update!

arapto1984 posted a comment on Monday 17th December 2012 9:42pm

Worth the wait. I guess the whole Kami thing was one of the last minute additions and that it will become an important plot point somehow. I eagerly await the next installment!

ficbob posted a comment on Monday 17th December 2012 2:24pm

Awesome chapter

The addition of Kami I liked but then you upped with Lord Raiden and Mortal Combat . . . that is an impressive turn in the story.

I realize that you can not fit everything into each chapter but I have having trouble with the idea that there are only two more chapters; especially with the possibility of Mortal Combat.

As ever, thank you for your time and words and I am looking forward to more

Thanks

Davideg posted a comment on Monday 17th December 2012 4:23am

I love this story thank you for sharing another fantastic chapte im a bit sad that ther are only two more chapters to go thou please keep up the fantastic writeing an update as life allows

csad posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 11:33pm

Fun chapter. That bit with Shikamaru was probably my favorite here. *g* And Four doesn't run out of chakra anymore? Oy vey. That sounds ominous.

Funny (or annoying, depending on your view) typo though: calling Sandaime the fourth a few times. And "Naru Shikaku".

kozinc posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 10:30pm

Nice chapter! I liked it.

ThunderGod posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 9:59pm

This still rocks:}

darthme1011 posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 8:52pm

awesome chapter love it so well written

Zaiman posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 7:16pm

Amazing story, I really enjoy reading it. Thanks!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2012 5:38pm

"Have you gone and got divine support?" Neji demanded, his hands on his hips.

"No," Naruto said. "Not support, I swear."

*snicker*

I liked the way Asuma handled Shika. He needed that wake up call.