By Jeconais
Reviews
Olafr posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 5:26am
Fun! I've seen a bit of Naruto anime but never read any fanfic - don't know why bit it didn't appeal. Still, I decided to give this one a try and I'm glad I did. Though... it is just me, or are we seeing echos of Harry from This Means War in here? (To be fair, you *did* acknowledge that you like to write your leading man like that, and I like reading it, so I suppose it's moot.)
Also, it's great to see you back, so to speak. Thanks for sharing.
Hammerd posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 4:01am
pretty cool story. Awesome beginning and I love the new jutsu's, that Kawaii no Jutsu is original, I think but I can't remember from all the fics I have read. I like this story! ;)
louisjventer posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 7:33pm
this is awesome hope to see more soon
alec_potter posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 7:14pm
Nice. Really liked the kawai no jutsu and the kiss from Kurenai and Anko was good too.
blackmage18 posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 7:03pm
HOLY OOC MADNESS BATMAN!!!
Being completely serious here, this story is just a little too much out of characteriness. Naruto suddenly maturing like that (it takes time, even if he does have a massive epiphany) and everyone else catering to his desires just... well I can't say it doesn't happen in the Narutoverse but it only happens in stories that crash and burn.
I really enjoy your Harry Potter OOC stories, but the differences from cannon to your story are enormous.
sephia posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 5:51pm
Genius! I could not stop giggling to myself the entire time i was reading.
I cannot wait for the next installment to this story. Have you thought about the song that never ends for the Irritating No Jutsu?
coronal posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 3:49pm
Kawaii no jutsu?
OK, that is just full of win and awesome
migele posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 11:53am
*snicker*
Kawaii no Jutsu indeed.
As usual with your storys it's great and, like most of your other ones, very amusing. I seriously doubt that I've seen smth like this before.
So I have to give a high humor rating, high on the unique scale and place it very high generally.
cheers
migi
David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 8:51am
I can see what Naruto did getting him laid.This is great.
darthloki posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 7:38am
*hysterical laughter the entire way through*
And Irritating no Jutsu is brilliant!
kyuubilordofthe9 posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 7:26am
Holy cow! I haven't laughed that hard in months. I laughed so hard I gave myself a headache. I look forward to future chatpers. Now, for that Advil...
Ezra'eil posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 3:31am
KAWAI NO JUTSU!
avatar99 posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 2:22am
I bleive the song goes "I know a song that gets on everybodies nerves everybodies nerves I know a song that gets on everybodies nerves and this is how it goes" repeat ad nauseum...
b sands posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 1:37am
great first chapter! you have the mannerisms down well and this is a refreshing take on Naruto. Keep it up!
Punster-Zero posted a comment on Saturday 24th April 2010 12:26am
Very nice, very very nice, I could tell you had fun writing this one... probably as much fun as I had reading it :)
I really like your recreation of Naruto's character, and love the original jutsus you've come up with - and can't wait to find out what else you're going to unleash upon our poor minds ;)
Will be waiting for your next chapter update with great anticipation.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 11:16pm
Fun story. Not sure about the 'category' though.
Comedy & Humor? Yes. (Not sure what the difference is.)
Fluff? (shrug) Sure, I'll buy that.
Action/Adventure, Angst & Drama? Not so much. :-)
Thanks for sharing this with us. It was fun to read, and I hope fun to write.
jariuth posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 10:22pm
haven't laughed so much in a long time!
BRILLIANT! can't wait for the next chap!
AK posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 10:17pm
Hey,
Nice seeing a post from you again. Good to know you're still around! As for the story, not your best work in my opinion. It tries to sell the silly and funny but for me it rates at a mere "meh". I find it strange that it lacks the one thing I'm most used to seeing in your stories, strong character and relationship development. Even if I don't disagree about wanting the twins...
ThunderGod posted a comment on Friday 23rd April 2010 9:44pm
Love this story..way funny....and I hope this means an entry into writing Naruto stories:}
jdekke posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 2:16pm