By Jeconais
Reviews
TheGrum posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:38am
Kawaii no Jutsu rules. I do not care about cliches, or whether something has been done once, twice, or a thousand times before, so long as it is well written and entertaining. Everything I've read of yours qualifies. Beta or no beta, I am thrilled every time I see that there is something new by Jeconais. Most of my writing is done entirely for my own pleasure, so I sympathize with your recent postings. Ignore the whiners, write to please your own fancy, and if every now and then you give us a peek at your work, know that there are those of us out here happy for each glimpse.
Also, thanks for creating such an excellent site and collecting such great writers in to it; almost any update on this site is devoured as soon as I notice it.
Howard, the Grum
Sml posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 4:34pm
This looks real fun and funny, please keep it up.
Anthony May posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 5:40am
Love Naruto, love your version of it and wish there was more. Very imaginative and very enjoyable. I consider you one of the best and expect nothing less from you. - Anthony
dan26 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 1:10am
Kurenai shook her head, an amused smile on her face. "So, what the hell is going on with Kakashi?"
The part up here should replace the word Kakashi with naruto
"Huh?" Anko asked.
"Naruto, he was polite to us, to Hiashi, but not to Sakura, Sasuke or Kakashi. Something is going on there, because he clearly doesn’t have respect for them."
"Hmm," the Hokage agreed. "Hayate, if you
Time Shifter posted a comment on Wednesday 28th April 2010 10:52pm
Sorry, but I couldn't even finish reading this. I enjoy your HP stories, but everyone's ridiculously out of character here, and I couldn't cope with it. It felt like the only thing you were using were character names; I certainly couldn't have identified a single character from their actions. This isn't a flame; I'm trying to be constructive here. The writing is so-so; you just need to have your characters be more, well, in character. Have you actually read any of Naruto? As one reviewer wrote, this felt a lot like your Harry from This Means War.
Katsuhito posted a comment on Wednesday 28th April 2010 12:43am
love it!!! Very humorous and engaging. I have a question though: in the beginning of the chapter, the Kyūbi said it's beyond the idea of sex, but at the end, Naruto said that the Kyūbi liked boys while implying it was female. Did something change, or was Naruto just taking the mickey out?
Entilzah posted a comment on Tuesday 27th April 2010 2:48pm
Never thought you would take a stroll into the Naruto-verse, but glad you did. Well done piece, and had me laughing in quite a few places!
LOVE Kawaii-no-jutsu!
kagomefetish posted a comment on Tuesday 27th April 2010 1:43pm
it was funny. original and highly entertaining, i look forward to a new chapter.
Flamefoxrose posted a comment on Monday 26th April 2010 7:55pm
Those poor foolish teachers are in so much trouble. Now Sasuke in go to get the medical care he truly needs. Wonderful chapter I eagerly await the next part.
Breila posted a comment on Monday 26th April 2010 7:36pm
*howls with laughter* That bit about the prank was ingenious my good sir. May I dare hope we'll see quality laughs like that again hopefully soon?
tastin posted a comment on Monday 26th April 2010 7:03pm
I have to start out by saying... bwahahahahaha! You made me laugh till it hurt at times with this one. :) Thanks for sharing it with us.
Chorenth posted a comment on Monday 26th April 2010 12:35am
BWAHAHHAHAHA that's bloody awesome! definitely not a serious Naruto fic but i've been laughing too much to care! thoroughly enjoyable loved the response to Sasuke's demand..ahh it's been too long since i've indulged in your works time to hit the archives!
Chorenth
p.s. hmmm i seem to be in a ! mood tonight ah well, looking forward to more!
dan26 posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 11:24pm
Lee," a female voice said. "For the first time ever, I agree with you. Where are my parents, I want a long talk with you!"
I want a long talk with them sounds better
King Pin posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 11:03pm
That has got to be the most random story you have ever written.
Pyrgus posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 10:25pm
Man that was an awesome first chapter. Hope you continue it. ^^
bshaw0000 posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 9:02pm
This is awesome lol. I read this and to be honest i do belive this one of the more unique stories I've read in a long time. I dont remember reading anything like it.
liquidfyre posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 8:50pm
DAMN good story man and good to see you posting again. I love most of the writers here and even the ones that i don't enjoy as much are damn good, but I do think your stories are some of the Best i have ever read. Keep em coming man.
CeriK posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 4:37pm
I like Hiashi's personality here. And the village's reaction. It probably is what they would do.
ultima_03 posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 2:48pm
Interesting, I can't wait to see how this turns out. Your take on Naruto should be just as fascinating as your work on Harry Potter.
Davideg posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:04am