bshaw0000 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 9:48am

This is an amazing story. you've gone in a direction that i've never read before and this is quickly becoming one of my all time favorite reads. Keep up the good work mate.
Ben

coronal posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 4:05am

so he gets to keep his own pirate ship?

hell, *I* love this Naruto!
btw, homo no jutsu? that is both so wrong and so incredibly funny

dan26 posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 11:48pm

," Naruto exclaimed, "this is a perfect time to try out my new Jutsu, and break this weird atmosphere." He made some hand signs, "Homo No Jutsu!" he cried.

In the middle of the table, five Narutos appeared. The first was dressed in leather chaps, and had a moustache that matched his long hair. The second had a bare chest that glistened with oil, and was wearing tight jeans. The third was in a tight fitting sailors uniform, complete with a formal shirt. The fourth was in a ninja uniform that was at least two sizes too small for him, and the final was just wearing a swimming costume

This is more like Y.M.C.A no jutsu to me

Oh oh," Neji muttered
Don't you mean uh oh for this part

OdinMage posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 10:59pm

Ok, as always I love your work, my comment is more on your authors note from the beginning. Just the thought of a 25 hour shift made me contemplate shooting myself in the head; what the hell do you do that you could live through that?

ThunderGod posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 9:12pm

love this story, its entertaining and enjoyable...you are a great writer

jgkitarel posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 8:50pm

This is fun to read, probably almost as much fun as you have writing it. Light, amusing, occasionally serious and moody; it has all of your trademarks thrown in.

Kaji posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 7:54pm

Pure awesomeness plain and simple. Can't wait for the next chapters.

switchhammerhit posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 3:56pm

Dear Jeconais,

Thank you for a very entertaining start to a new story. It's always nice to enjoy a few laughs.

I thought the way that you portrayed the characters was very well done even though other reviewers seem to think otherwise. I have enjoyed Naruto for years and could see that each character was done well.

I have enjoyed some of your other stories very much, "Hope", "This Means War", "White Knight, Gray Queen" and if this is as good as those then we are in for a treat to be sure.

I am looking forward to your next update. How often do you plan to update and how long do you plan to make the story?

Naruto and Hinata, that's how it should be (my opinion).

Chris15 posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 2:51pm

This is truly a great story. You are managing to twist a number of cliches on their head and making the story fun and entertaining. Do wonder how much training time he had with the other teams before Sasuke got out of his padded room? Really enjoy the interest he is showing in the older kunoichi and their return interest, though I can kind of see the point Anko made in this chapter about being able to live with some of the quirks that ninja develop.

More soon please.

darthloki posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 12:38pm

Fantastic!

Part of maturity is experience, and Naruto, through massive over-use of clones, is certainly getting that.

You know, i don't think anyone's ever considered that before?

joeBob posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 12:37pm

Kick-butt, awesome chapter, thanks!

I'd be puking my breakfast at that "Homo No Jutsu" if it wasn't so damn funny. :)

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 11:25am

Freaking awesome chapter. "3? Oh right, I lied earlier." That was just classic and awesome. I'm absolutely enjoying this story, and haven't found many if any mistakes, not that I would point them out if I did :). Keep up the fantastic work!

Pointer posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 11:02am

Now that was a fun read.

Darkon posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 6:44am

Don't mind that this has no real direction. Can't remember how many stories I've read that had direction and got abandoned because the author could no longer keep it at that direction. I can honestly say that stories like this one are a good change of pace to the serious do this do that drama drama action of other stories. Sometimes I look at those stories and want to ask "Why so SERIOUS?!" in other words I highly approve of this fic!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 6:03am

Very fun chapter. I was a bit surprised you still sent him to Wave, though.

Dakaath@TTH posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 3:48am

Oh, I love the idea of a ninja owning a pirate ship.

The line about helping the local shark economy was great as well.

I've seen ninjas play at being civilians before to try and sneak around, but never in a situationn like this, your idea of him playing a son to the client was completely original, unqie, and fun to read.

Cant wait to see more.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 12:58am

Very amusing. Some good jokes and some over the top scenes. All in all a great chapter!

Dragonmage182 posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 12:42am

Awesome...simply awesome. Always love a story where Naruto is a little out of his mind.

ralob posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 12:30am

Seriously, one of the best fics I have read in the Naruto fandom. I love it.

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 12:04am

I can so see Naruto with a hearm in this.