By Jeconais
Reviews
dennisud posted a comment on Monday 13th September 2010 3:16am
Other than downgrading Hinata which I don't agree with this sure is a very entertaining story! Please continue and lets see how this Naruto handles the upcoming conflicts and their players!
dennisud
dennisud posted a comment on Monday 13th September 2010 3:15am
Other than downgrading Hinata which i don't agree with this sure is a very entertaining story! Please continue and lets see how this Naruto handles the upcoming conflicts and their players!
dennisud
Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 2:57pm
And we've got another quality addition to one of the more enjoyable Naruto fanfics I've read in a while. In a way, I think that you had Naruto let Kakashi off easy once he found out just where Hanabi got her ideas for repaying a favor from, but considering that after he was done, the Hokage stepped in, I'll allow it as a properly measured response. Thanks for continuing to put out a quality product, and I'll be looking forward to the next installment.
Nementh
hordac85 posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 11:47am
Excellent. Keep it up!
kyuubilordofthe9 posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 7:58am
Epic. Laughed more than I have in months.
blackmage18 posted a comment on Saturday 11th September 2010 5:31pm
After getting over the fact that everyone is completely OOC (for the most part, seeing as we don't really know anything about Anko) I retract my former review. I quite like this story. It's funny, entertaining, and I can tell you're just writing to have fun.
Keep it up.
theM posted a comment on Saturday 11th September 2010 10:23am
It occurs to me that Naruto - without meaning to - just used the Shadow Clone technique, infamous for transferring memories from the clones to the original, to get intimately acquainted with the bodies of Anko and Kurenai both... And his own. Henging into clothes, indeed :) I wonder if he'll figure that out before those clones dispel.
marcelhm posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 7:48am
somebody is having way too much fun using fatalities in naruto verse :P
now about your first remark in the author notes, AGREED, though I do say that quite often :).
the Hanabi Naruto parts where especially adorable. the part in the spa especially disturbing ;).
till next time
zoroz posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 4:07am
awesome chapter, too bad there's no chapter update email alert like fanfiction.net as i would have known that u updated this awesome fic with 2 chapters :P
goddessa39 posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 12:36am
hi again. I love Naru/Hina so plz let her be with him! Go Naruko Go! (also, I'm looking for a NaruHina timetravel w/ AnkKur in it. I don't know where it went.)
Your only part in the fic that bothers me is that every time u mention Gato, it comes out "Gat."
How r u gonna introduce Naruro into the Chunnin Exams since he is not in a team: teamless or early promotion?
How dis the Hokage get swindled and why is Naruro building a complex- is he plannin his clones to live there?
I hope there is more Sensai!Naruto pieces, and maybe an side piece of what soke passing girls thought when hearing Naruko in the baths.
Too bad there is not a 4-person squad for the KCorps+Hanabi. Also, I votw for more chibi!Naru around or maybe chibi!NarutoNaruko!twins?
michirusan posted a comment on Thursday 9th September 2010 9:53pm
"No scars, no moustache, nothing bad, just a good looking man."
He DOES have a scar, the one that vertially bisects his sharingan eye.
switchhammerhit posted a comment on Thursday 9th September 2010 3:01am
Hello Jeconais,
I was pleased to see a new update so soon, which is great. Thanks.
I loved the part with Hanabi using her "Glare No Jutsu", that was great.
Bar scene was assume.
I would hope that Naruto would still choose Hinata but alas it is your story.
Bath house was very entertaning. Split a gut there.
Thanks for sharing Tim,
switchhammerhit.
Ancalador posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 11:00pm
Damn that was brilliant. You're not just an author, you're an artist!
Hope you keep the good stuff coming; and why hasn't foxy-Chan been allowed to inhabit a shadow clone yet?
Duraiken posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 7:17pm
I've been divided on this story for a little while now. I started out not thinking I could like it, but like almost everything else Jeconais writes, I'm starting to grow fond of it. I'm still a little uncertain on some things, like how short a time it's taking for Naruto to turn people to side, like Neji, even if Neji was indirect and something that likely couldn't be achieved by mortal ken. I understand it's a crackfic, just something about the style of writing was throwing me off. On the other hand, the kind of sheer insanity coming out of Naruto's noggin really helps me overlook little things like that that bother me, probably because he reminds me of me. WHich is itself a scary thought.
One thing I myself at least would like to see is an epilogue to wrap things up post Sound invasion, like Akatsuki and any other (potential) loose ends. Other than that, I really can't think of any other ways this could be improved.
keichan2 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 6:44pm
I saw it coming! She would use her glare to summon Naruto (on a side note and because I just re-read a cross-over Naruto D&D: could it be a "Summon Monster level 44 spell"? ;-p)
Everybody (or at least her parents...) knows that a little girl's frown is a weapon of mass destruction!
"a thirty-sixth of my power" I wonder how would people react when learning what he did with so little of his potential :-D
"the Pituitary gland" COOL! This is an educative fanfic too! There is no reason anymore to prevent me from reading! ;-p
"Good enough to be yelled at?" Bwahahahaha! Thanks :-)
"No, the telling off I just received." I knew he wasn't worried over the attempt on his life getting out :-)
Ooh... I do wonder what book she used as learning material, and whether or not she will be scolded for having even read it...
(EDIT: wrote that too soon... Though I think that Kakashi will soon have a visit from Naruto... And maybe a behavioral adjustment applied... (EDIT2: was right!))
As for NARUTO giving HANABI the Talk... I really though he would run for the first female adult he could find!
"Do men really want to put their thing up a girl’s bum?" I was eating and nearly sprayed my screen: I'll just finish eating and continue reading later... It's safer that way!
"The bouncer suddenly appeared to remember a pressing appointment in another country"... or is it an appointment to the bathroom?
"Anko flew out of her chair, propelled by the blood from her nose." Is Naruto playing a game with Anko? (which one will cause the most faintings)
"needed a clean pair of underwear." I swear I wrote the comment above BEFORE reading this part! (I'm just that good ;-p)
I'm wondering if Hanabi helping her sister find another boy is not just clearing the path for herself...
You know what, Naruto and his henged clones beats a plan, 3D animations and even models every time! (I kind of like 3D architecture pics, and this idea made me drool)
Did Naruto think about the Ranma dilemma? (I don't wear no stinkin' lingerie in my girl form because when I get hot water, I'm a guy in lingerie!)
He was able to create a pair of panties for his "lesbian no jutsu", so he should be able to do the same for himself, no?
"They looked around, to find the Hokage and the Pervert on the floor, unconscious." I thought so :-D
"You-you-you’re a boy!" I wonder... Will it cause traumatic choc? :-D
I hope to read more soon!
K Ward posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 12:22pm
I am Really loving this, keep up the good work!!
goddessa39 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 9:49am
I love this, and while I say that about just about all of your work, I will say it again.
I find myself really into this and when I saw the alert in my inbox I was so happy that I had myself psyched out that it was some other fic just so I wouldn't pee my panties all happy-like.
Naruko is also fun. I know a lot of people just use her like a henge, and some not at all, but here she is a her in place of Naruto and that really is fun. I'm a little sad that Kurenei won't get her eventually Asuma-baby but then again you said it does not go that far in the canon. Pity.
Darkon posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 9:00am
As always great work loved the attack. The "talk" well it went as expected. For all that I can honestly say that this story is better than forty percent of the Naruto stuff that I read at ffnet. While I'm a Naru/Hina shipper Naru/Kure Naru/Anko and Naru/Older!Hanabi are also ones I'd read. Harems are always fun but killer hard to write and I only like well written ones the others are like badly written porn bleh. Love flirty happy Anko so keep up the great work can't wait to read the next one. Before I forget FATALITY NARU-ZERO WINS! BWAHAHHAHAHAHHAH. Should have had him henge for that move snicker snicker. Spine-rip Spine-rip in the announcer's way of saying Friendship Friendship. GWAHAHAHAHAH.
frankocsic posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 7:16am
so cool that you've updated again so soon. great great read. kiba as a poor man's naruto was sad, but true. lol. i like that naruto's managing to help out everyone else, but doesn't come off as an all-knowing arse, because he himself isn't perfect. great job, and thanks for updating!
ficbob posted a comment on Monday 13th September 2010 12:15pm