By Jeconais
Reviews
Kortir posted a comment on Monday 29th November 2010 8:36am
After my discovery that I didn't have Naruto-related alerts activated from your stories and rectifying that, I decided to spend my night reading the entire thing. Well worth it indeed! I was in tears laughing at some of the best parts- Gatou's death aftermath in particular, but a number of others and many of the Hanabi-glomp scenes. Will there be lemons coming up- whether it be here or in a separate posting? I'd love to see the Anko lemon in particular, but I tend towards the underused girls above all. Hanabi, Hana, Ayame, Tsunami, etc... rare to see many of them.
I love your particular take on the shadow clones as well. I know there's elements taken from other stories, but that doesn't stop it from having its own uniqueness and being all sorts of awesome in general. Looking forward to seeing what you'll come up with next! Thanks as always for the amazing story to read.
moon_pup posted a comment on Sunday 28th November 2010 6:43am
Wow this is just great. I can not wait till you post more, I want to see what happenes in the exams
Seth Blade posted a comment on Sunday 21st November 2010 12:14pm
I was holding my ribs, I laughed so much.
Anyway, keep it up and hope you update soon,
Seth Blade.
Cynrom posted a comment on Thursday 18th November 2010 1:31am
I've got to say, this is one of the best stories I've read in a while. I only wish my own stories flowed as well.
Chris :)
delrusant posted a comment on Wednesday 17th November 2010 2:25am
Great fun, pleasant use of the naruto sandbox in a dumb down and even more crazy version
DAMNED posted a comment on Wednesday 10th November 2010 6:02pm
KEEP IT COMING PLZ VERY FUNNY
LKK posted a comment on Monday 8th November 2010 6:17am
I love this, it's so fun! I absolutely adore how Naruto always comes to Hanabi's glare. The flow of the fic is really good and it seems like it's starting to get some plot too, *laughs.*
Thomas posted a comment on Saturday 6th November 2010 1:46pm
The LOL is strong in this one. When you say ends at the Sound invasion, do you mean it ends at the beginning of the invasion or will the fic end after the invasion is done with a epilogue tacked on for good measure?
The other thing i'm wondering about is if Naruto will participate in the Chunin exames (for all i know you'll get the old man to promote him before the thing takes place) and if so which team he'll join so that he can do the exame.
Anthony Penny posted a comment on Saturday 23rd October 2010 10:48am
I just stayed up till 5:00 a.m. reading this. Great work!!!
Richard Robinson posted a comment on Thursday 14th October 2010 3:19am
LOL I laughed till I cried Then laughed some more!
Katsuhito posted a comment on Monday 11th October 2010 9:30pm
Nice! I'm actually kinda sad that you're going to end this at/after the invasion. Maybe a sequal? nudge nudge wink wink. I'd love to see the Akatsuki/Pein arc in this setting.
And there's so many little things I like about this story. First taking Naruto's lightning affinity and turning that into a neo-Raiden, and Haku into a Lin Kuei-type cyromancer had my inner MK geek cheering. Then the interactions between Naruto, Anko, and Kurenai kept me wondering what'll happen next. (Hmm.. would that make this a NAKship story?) Of course, the humor element is very enjoyable as well. I was at least chuckling 80% of the time I was reading. Chaos indeed. :)
All in all, this is definitely up to your normal standards imho. That "other" fanfic site you mentioned in the first a/n may be more successful in a volumetric way, but this one has all others beat when it comes to the quality of the authors. 8-D
Peace!
Netta posted a comment on Monday 4th October 2010 5:34am
Awww, such an awesome story lol
Tammin posted a comment on Monday 4th October 2010 1:35am
I also truly love this story. Ero-sennin was probably sent for to check on the Naruto's Seal and for a new Hyuga bloodline protection Seal. I would like to see what Naruto make from the Rasengan or the Needle Guardian.
Tammin posted a comment on Monday 4th October 2010 12:23am
Great chapter. I just found the new additions and I am looking forward to reading them greatly. Thank you for sharing this with us.
PJ posted a comment on Sunday 3rd October 2010 3:50am
If Naruto teaches Haku the sexy form, and it is possible for someone in it to get pregnant... Haku could have Sasuke's child.
Andrius posted a comment on Sunday 26th September 2010 2:20am
Hehe, this looks like a fun story so far. Looks like Naruto has a crazy thing going there with all the clones. He'll be able to monitor whole Konoha like that.
potterfrkintx posted a comment on Sunday 26th September 2010 12:23am
HECK YEAH!! Totally awesome! I apologize for not having reviewed before, but I wanted to the the 4 chapters you do have posted read before I did! I love it! While I'm a guy, I admit that I'm somewhat biased in regards to female/female/male action in the fact that I love it to death, but I didn't find the fact that Sasuke and Haku were together, knowing that they're both male, disturbing. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to future installments!
See you in the funny papers!
brlarson posted a comment on Saturday 25th September 2010 8:21am
fun as always. hope you keep up the good work.
Michael10 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th September 2010 6:31pm
Again you are the best. ignore those who say otherwise. I speak for myself and my girlfriend when I say we alway read what you write when we get the notice. Heck, sometimes we read it at the same time (wink, wink)
Anyways, again great job and keep up the awesome work.
Mike
Ancalador posted a comment on Wednesday 1st December 2010 5:20am