Hubert posted a comment on Monday 13th June 2005 10:50pm

i quite enjoy this story and hope that it is contenued soon. is there any more storeys like this out there.

DF posted a comment on Monday 13th June 2005 11:52am

more :)

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 7:36am

Ooh, I see trouble a-brewin'!! Hehe. That doesn't seem like it'll be too good. Can't wait till you update. I loved it!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Saturday 11th June 2005 10:32pm

I think this is just fantastic. I had forgotten who Gabrielle was, so I was confused when I saw the ship, but I'm glad I started reading it. It's pretty awesome! I'll definetly read on. I'm planning on reading all of your stories so I'm caught up, that way when you update I won't be confused like I was before, because I'm good like that. Anyways, I love the story!!

len vandiveer posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2005 10:54am

I love this story. It is in he realm of the better stories, so far.

Kordolin posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2005 2:54pm

LOL! And of course Harry is to smart for his own good and starts to figure it out!:) Of course it wouldnt be a good fic if he didnt. So far this story is awesome and I am really looking forward to more! Update soon!
-kordolin

Ben Small posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2005 12:39am

Strangely enough, I've never read a Harry and Gabrielle story before. I was pleasantly surprised, although that's an understatement.

I enjoyed this story immensely. I enjoy most of your stories, true, but this one in particular stands out as a fantastically written yarn. I find myself drawn to Gabrielle, her calculated ambition and full understanding of the complex interests of Harry Potter. Wow. Just wow.

There were little instances, polished gems in my opinion, that made this story incredible. The few paragraphs last chapter illustrating Gabrielle's intense longing and fantasy was endearing. I felt no pity for her character, instead I felt the powerful urge to cheer her on. I love the way you've written Gabrielle.

I hope you update soon, I'll check every single day until you do. Even if it takes a month or two, no hard feelings on my part. Do your best, and if you don't feel like writing today then don't. I'm eager to find out what happens next chapter, of course, but it's your life. I hope nobody else is trying to convince you otherwise. Good luck, Jeconais.

~Ben

Sarah posted a comment on Friday 3rd June 2005 11:14pm

I Love it! Wow! This pairing is so rare and you write it so well. With all of the different things you bring into it, such as veela society, you just enrich the entire thing. Keep up the GREAT work. Update soon!

Haeton posted a comment on Tuesday 31st May 2005 4:44pm

All I can say is that this story is excellent as are most of your stories. I do find it frustrating that you have so many that I enjoy with no end in sight.

kensai posted a comment on Tuesday 31st May 2005 6:04am

As usual, your writing is wonderful, and leaves me feeling annoyed that I must wate for the next chapter. I disagree with one point of yours. I do not believe Gabrielle would need to use Veela charm to get Dobby to help Harry. Ok, I admit I am nit picking, but that point screamed OOC for Dobby.

jerry posted a comment on Monday 30th May 2005 9:04am

i think it would be better is it was harry fleur romance there not many out there and the ones that is are not to good.

Gabriel posted a comment on Sunday 29th May 2005 1:07am

Hello Tim:

Reading again the history something I call me the attention..

How Harry learn french? Hermione use to teach him some type of enchantment, a special pensieve or something like that...

Sorry for the bad english... i am spanish speaker

Brent posted a comment on Saturday 28th May 2005 10:55am

I'm not sure there's a story you've written that I haven't liked. Update this one soon; I like it.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 28th May 2005 2:08am

Well, as usual Harry is more astute than people give him credit for. At least he is checking into things. I like the fact that Gabrielle is trying to get to know Harry better. Also that she wants him to learn to love her for herself. That shows a lot of character on her part.

I like this story line and I want to see what you come up with next. As well as White Knight/Grey Queen and TMW!

Keep up the good work. Thanks

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 28th May 2005 1:11am

I like it. What a challenge. To try to have Harry love her while she is still at school and he is an instructor. I can't wait to see how this developes.

hasapi posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 10:13am

Awesome couple of chapters! I am very impressed with this story...and would definitely like to see more of it!

caraher posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 10:15am

Please continue with this storie. I wasw checing out this site when i saw it and ii like it wery much. PLEASE CONTINUE

Chorin posted a comment on Saturday 21st May 2005 1:12pm

I really like this story. I found it when I was going to read the tenth chapter of TMW, and I geuss I didn't really expect to like it, but I do. Normally, I'm only a H/G shipper, but this seems like a really good pairing the way that you write Gabrielle. I don't think that Harry will be to angry whenever he finds out that he was semi-manipulated, but what do I know, you're that author. Please, continue with this story, update soon please. And it wouldn't hurt if you updates TMW....

Karen175 posted a comment on Friday 20th May 2005 6:22pm

I love were you are going with this story. Its very rear to fine a Harry/Gabrielle fic, and a well written one at that. Please update soon!

Payne posted a comment on Thursday 19th May 2005 9:59pm

This is the first story I have read with this pair....Its great so far....hope to read alot of fluff....lol...