Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 10:26am for 5 - Barcelona

I really shouldn’t be laughing at drunkenness but the inebriated boys were so funny I couldn’t resist. Let's just hope no one saw him leaving her room. I really like this - Gabrielle comes across very well.

nancy in chicago posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 8:22pm for 5 - Barcelona

Just a note... One of the problems with Houses at Hogwarts (from my viewpoint) is that they are in the same one for all 7 years and get way too clicky. I mean, snakes vs lions, dark vs light, etc. If the houses (via the flames) were to rearrange them every year (although not everyone would be moving, since it's random). You could even have the same colors, but next year it would be 4 famous French wizards, then Muggles, then towns, etc... It could be a very good educational tool, actually.

Just a thought.

Nanio posted a comment on Wednesday 29th March 2006 1:17am for 5 - Barcelona

I've already reviewed further chapters, but I wanted to jump back to this one and say that you do a very good job of making Harry act like a mature adult, yet keep his character very close to character.

Also, I find it hilarious that Harry's a crap cook considering all of the years he cooked for the Dursleys.

Faith1 posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 7:04am for 5 - Barcelona

My Gabrielle... *happy sigh* finally it's happening!

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 11:51pm for 5 - Barcelona

Brilliant. That was very well done. I love the way you are doing Ron and Hermione. Great stoty.

gunny

phsname posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 8:31pm for 5 - Barcelona

hahahha...wow.

this story is amazing. ur writing is...well, odd.

normally, i despise any kind of super!harry stories, i dont see him as that kind of a character. most authors seem to do it as simply a way of making Harry that much more of a hero, yet you incorporate it into the story in such a core essential fashion, that it just seems right and natural.

i love the characters you've created in this story, harry and gabrielle are both very well written, as are ron, hermione, maxime, jean, and everyone else.

however, one thing i thought was kind of awkward is the dialogue at those crucial dramatic moments...it turned considerably...corny? i cant think of another word. the melodrama got to be a bit too much i think.

aside from that, this is a great work, and has become one of my favorite fanfics.

great job!!

noylj posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 5:06pm for 5 - Barcelona

Enjoy story but afraid ch. 6 may be the end. Please don't end it too soon. It is a great piece of fluff and this Harry is great

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 11:05pm for 5 - Barcelona

Wow, that was amazing. I cannot wait to read on, it's almost necesity. I'm so amazed at this story. It is of the highest quality in my eyes.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2005 2:26pm for 5 - Barcelona

Wow. That chapter rocked top to bottom, especially the whole date was amazing. Great job.

MysterioX posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 1:44pm for 5 - Barcelona

i say this is my fav out of all ur other fics. I hope u are gonna kill off draco after he hits on gabby? just an idea

ulkser posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 10:25am for 5 - Barcelona

another one of your miracles. i jsut want to say please do not make any appearances of any dark lords. there could be action, figths but please no wars. i want to see harry teaching other stuff like dada but not all the time.

very good so far. it will be nice to see some other female characters try to get harry and compete with gabrielle as much as they could.

it is been a week and you haven't updated. when will be the next update?

TimGold posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 1:52pm for 5 - Barcelona

I adore this fic! It's absolutely everything i wanted to read! love every second of reading it :>>

solar1 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 12:30pm for 5 - Barcelona

great story so far!

Juhi posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 1:27am for 5 - Barcelona

this is seriously one heck of a story. brilliant! keep it up. waiting eagerly for the next few chapters! :)

Ruskbyte posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 10:31am for 5 - Barcelona

I'm not usually one for the nightclub scene (never have been really) but you managed to pull it off with such aplomb that even I found it alluring. Nice.

Looking forward to the arrival of Ollie and the twins. I wonder if the Beauxbaton students will survive?

Brad Crawford posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 7:50am for 5 - Barcelona

wow and excellent chapter yet again tim. loved the little action with the aurors dealing with the drug dealers and the scum useing the daterape drugs! keep up the great writing. hope your block for tmw is gone soon!

Fate posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 12:11am for 5 - Barcelona

This was absolutely lovely!
Well done!
I just love the attention to detail, plot and character development that you put into your stories. :D

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 2:38pm for 5 - Barcelona

I like this Harry. He has more depth than other Harry's. That sounds wrong but basically I really like this story and i think incorporating veelas into the story is very intersting.
Thankyou for putting in the time and energy to write these stories for us.

(I know I say this in every review but where is Hagrid? Why does noone like him?!!)

cheryse posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 2:09pm for 5 - Barcelona

I just wanted you to know how much I am enjoying this story. I had never considered this pairing before, but I find myself addicted to the idea of Harry and Gabrielle.

While I am anxiously waiting more chapters for this, I was wondering if there were any other fics of this genre that you would recommend.

Humbley grateful for sharing your story,
Cheryse

rmcclain124 posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 3:41am for 5 - Barcelona

Wow! How am I supposed to be blown away by the next chapter if this one's already done the job.

'Tis the gift of a great story teller to be able to take an idea that sounds utterly unrealistic (Hope) or absurd (WK,GQ) and make it plausible--let alone--probable.

Keep it rolling, Tim.