ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 6:27am for Chapter 13

Again, a very captivating chapter and those 14,000 words just seemed to fly by. I thank you for all the hard work and I really enjoy reading your fiction.

joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:48am for Chapter 13

Oops! Now Harry's soul is tainted forever by the AK. Dawn will have to turn him into a pillar of salt. ;)

Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:48am for Chapter 13

Excellent chapter please, continue again soon, can ´t wait to read the next one to see how that new mess he is in turn out, as well as to see more of Natalia and where you will go with her and the others you have said will come after. Although I will admit I ´m not looking forward to Kate ´s apparent been taken form the story for the foresable future.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:29am for Chapter 13

Fine chapter. That is quite a twist at the end. Thanks for writing. W.

Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 5:11am for Chapter 13

Ok, definitely taking some turns I wasn't expecting.

Good part, even with the evil cliffie.

Silo posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 4:05am for Chapter 13

good to see a n update finaly

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 2:51am for Chapter 13

Nicely done.

Thanks so much for writing :D

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 2:44am for Chapter 13

once again thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put in to this story please continue to update as life allows

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 2:38am for Chapter 13

Now that's a most itneresting cliffie and 'twill be most fascinating to see what evolves from it. Meanwhile, 'twill be most fascinating to see the various on-going reactions as he becomes more exposed. Poor Megan is going to feel all sorts of pressure and if his bosses come down on her father, it could become exceedingly educational for her (exceedingly painful, but equally educational in the way the world really works).

Michael10 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 1:59am for Chapter 13

cool.

enjoy the break and thanks for the hard work. looking forward to when you resume

Zaxxon posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 1:57am for Chapter 13

Wow.... a very intense chapter...

I do wonder what will happen next. And hope we will not have to wait too long to find out. :)

This story is among my top ten favorite stories.

Commando987 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 1:09am for Chapter 13

I so love how much you have been updating but I can understand it's a pain. I was actually thinking you were going for a Natalia Romanova vibe (the black widow). I'll be interested to see what happens with getting arrested.

mwinter posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 1:08am for Chapter 13

That took a turn that I wasn't expecting. So I have to ask,...WHAT THE HELL? Awaiting more.

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 12:52am for Chapter 13

So is this Scotland Yard, or is someone at the Ministry trying to make a name for themselves for taking down Lord Potter for using an Unforgivable?

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 12:25am for Chapter 13

Damn! That's a hell of a cliffie! I'm glad you are already writing the next chapter, I really want to know what happens next!

Nice job shooting Megan down and it's always fun to see Annie again. Sorry to see Kate attracting the wrong sort of attention, but I'm looking forward to seeing where you take that plot thread.

See you next time

Red