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thetaxzombie posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 11:18pm for Chapter 13

That was one hell of a chapter. A truly grand chapter. Intense, compelling.

A gutwrencher of an end.

Well done!

Lisagrace posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 8:45pm for Chapter 13

Great chapter. Very intense.

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 8:06pm for Chapter 13

I'm really happy that you updated! I'm NOT happy that now it will be a very long time till the next chapter AND you left this at a cliffhanger! Gah! Anyway, great chapter. I really liked the Megan situation and hope that you follow that up somehow. I know its not important by it feels, err, incomplete not knowing what repercussions await her. And these "Mata Hari" OC's...WOW! I've completely forgotten about them! So interesting!

Crys posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 6:41pm for Chapter 13

Oh, that whole scene with Megan was just too perfect. Bravo, sir.

So, gave a pass on Sally. His reasoning makes sense. And also shows he doesn't snap up every person who is recommended to him.

Nice to catch up with Annie again.

Hmm. Sounds like Harry's talking about seriously dating Aurora, at least after this school year.

Meeting Natalia seemed too contrived. That masking thing they were talking about will help her, but it'll be fun to watch where that goes.

Excellent story as always. Looking forward to more.

Bombbareir posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 3:49pm for Chapter 13

Holy man that was a tough ending i forgot how good you are with your writing its good to see you are writing again man.

Ole Joe posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 11:08am for Chapter 13

5 A.M.

It's 5 A.M., and I owe you an apology Jeconais. I read the first chapter of Dawn about six months ago. Hated it. Thought it was a caricature of a previous greatness, TMW.

Cue today. Extreme boredom, looking for something well written to keep me entertained, anything. So I pull up Dawn. And I'm sorry. Cause it is 5 A.M. and I have just read all thirteen chapters in one sitting, and am going to work in an hour and a half. I could pick this apart, gush over why I couldn't put it down, but really I think the clock says it all.

Liquid Night posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 9:02am for Chapter 13

A fantastic chapter. I'm glad that you didn't rush the coming confrontation.

On the other hand it will be sad for Kate to be leaving, despite the profession, she is definitely the female I enjoy the most in this story.

Thank you very much for your hard work and enjoy your holiday,

Yours Sincerely

A Fan

diavoloduchessa posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 7:42am for Chapter 13

That last bit wow just wow... I always look forward to updates from you and they never disappoint... Natalia: I can't decide if I want her to become a 'good guy' or be discovered by someone as a spy and 'dealt with'...

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 7:22am for Chapter 13

You have to wonder if Harry has an inkling of the type of attention he's attracting, especially from the internationals. The whole Russian Spy thing sounds like it may be a bit much, but I'm willing to see how it plays out. What boggles the mind is Harry's possible reactions if he finds out Kate is not on a legitimate (for her profession) "business trip."

As advanced as Harry is in the use and understanding of magic, he really is still 14 in some ways. His training was during altered time, but most of that was solo. Kate was a fantastic teacher, and Harry a natural talent, but he still hasn't had the years of adult-level interaction that would leave him able to think of everything a naturally aged 24 year old would be able to.

GBTtown posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 3:40am for Chapter 13

Wow, just Wow! Great update to a very good story.

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 1:55am for Chapter 13

Aurora is a deep character and I'm glad you brought her in more for this one. Looking forward to the next update and I hope you have a good holiday season. TLC

Pennywise posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 11:09pm for Chapter 13

Awesome chapter.

MaMoKe posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 10:16pm for Chapter 13

I want to say thank you for posting 10 weeks straight ;) but I kind of also want to say GDM for that ending! haha loved the chapter especialy the dance scene somehow spoke to me, but that ending! :)

keichan2 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 9:49pm for Chapter 13

A spy? And to think that the martini had me thinking about James Bond…

“Our agent in Hogwarts” Oh? I would guess that it is someone that came with Durmstrang, but it may be too easy…

“you’re under arrest.” Well… I saw this one coming…

I get the feeling that his new justice troubles may be harder to get out of that the magical ones…

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!

Torrey posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 8:37pm for Chapter 13

What a horrible terrible evil place for a cliffhanger! :) Been enjoying this and blue steel, but I think this one is slightly better. Thanks for writing so much for us to enjoy reading!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 8:35pm for Chapter 13

I don't buy the ending to this chapter. He could have knocked the kid out easy and it would have been just as effective and I'm sure he knew plenty of spells for that, plus the police showing up and saying he was under arrest without even bothering to find out what was going on while he's holding an injured boy and obviously trying to help him doesn't work, sorry.

LuxEterna posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 8:30pm for Chapter 13

thanks for posting it was great

Renzo7 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 7:31pm for Chapter 13

Hello, Tim. I hope you're well. This was a nice chapter, but that ending was just mean. Quite a cliffhanger, you evil mastermind! I particularly enjoyed the dance scene woth Annie, and the interactions with Aurora. I hope inspiration sticks with you these days, because that cliffhanger was just plain evil and we need to see what's coming next.

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 7:26pm for Chapter 13

Thanks.

Absolutely stellar. The exhibition scene was very nice, the restaurant with Aurora was breathtaking in its simple elegance and the show segment with Annie hinted quite clearly that the world is watching him. The involvement of agent Tiemerovna struck it home; If you're larger than life, people might just notice. The closing part was extremely intriguing. It shouldn't be too difficult to clear up. On the other hand, if that is so, what's Chekov's gun doing there? How willl he identify himself with the whole age thing?

I've already told my computer to scream loudly when the next installmment appears. I'll still be checking every day, but you do write after your schedule, not mine so take your time. No point in rushing it.

Also, for the first time, i have some CRITICISM! Lately, you've been confusing "too" and "to". It's a recent development and it makes some sentences difficult to read, as the mind stutters at this kind of typo. The kind that doesn't show up on a spell check are not easy to catch, but please think about it. That's it. The first minor mistake i've ever found and i do believe I've read everything you've written.

Thanks.

g

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 7:10pm for Chapter 13

I hope Harry has a brain. I HATE Russian spies and hope Harry has already "sensed" her.