Sterling posted a comment on Saturday 6th October 2018 6:07pm for Chapter 13

This is a great story. I really hope you can write more on it some day. It would be a shame to leave this unfinished. In any case, thanks for sharing this with us. It is my favorite of mine.

Silo posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2018 5:21am for Chapter 13

dont no if u know but some one posted this on fanfiction dot net saying thay had your permision and i would like to see updates to this and to perfict sytharns soon as well man

karazi posted a comment on Sunday 25th February 2018 5:58pm for Chapter 13

That's a great story.

Maha1959 posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2018 4:24pm for Chapter 13

hello , an error and my review was sent !!! i said i was very pleased with this story. i wonder what Harry will think (and do) when he will know about all these new people around him !!! i look forwards to the next chapter. and when is the third part of the tournament ? to read you soon.

Mrreading posted a comment on Thursday 17th November 2016 4:32am for Chapter 13

how the enxt update coming?

OriksGaming posted a comment on Wednesday 24th June 2015 3:48pm for Chapter 13

Well, that was a surprising ending. I mean, leading up to it, I kind of expected it when he first came across the boy, due to his conversation in a past chapter, but I wasn't sure if he'd actually do it. I'm not that happy that he did, but the rest of the chapter was up to par. Great work and keep it up!

patrik svensson posted a comment on Saturday 31st January 2015 3:45am for Chapter 13

[quote] Natalia Anastasia Tiemerovna is the first of the Mata Hari's (well, tehcnically a spy) [/quote] shouldn't that be "Swallow"? [url=http://moderndirections.com/26.htm]http://moderndirections.com/26.htm[/url] [url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clandestine_HUMINT_asset_recruiting]en.wikipedia.org/Clandestine_HUMINT_asset_recruiting[/url]

akasanta posted a comment on Wednesday 24th December 2014 6:37pm for Chapter 13

Awesome story! Hope for a new chapter soon. :D

Cheers!

AKASANTA :D

Soresina posted a comment on Monday 22nd December 2014 2:02pm for Chapter 13

This is getting more interesting now as it seems the UK police have discovered Harry's existence. Does this mean he is going to be taking over their law enforcement and single-handedly bringing downs the street gangs. I look forward to finding out.

IcySneasel posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2014 9:22pm for Chapter 13

Great story Got my complete attention and thats a huge cliff hanger I hope you update soon.

Lumos posted a comment on Monday 8th December 2014 3:58am for Chapter 13

I have been reading your stories, here and there, now and then, for two or three years now, and they are almost always wonderfully enjoyable. This one and Blue Steel have been the most recent, along with several rereads of White Knight Gray Queen, which has got to be one of my favorite fan fics of all time. Just wanted to take the time to thank you for the wonderful stories, and ask one question about the site ... is there any way within the site to get notifications of updates?

Again, some absolutely fabulous stories!

Tenchifew posted a comment on Sunday 7th December 2014 7:11pm for Chapter 13

Glad to see a new chapter of this great story!

Very interesting developments.

Thank you for writing.

darklightuk posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd December 2014 9:08pm for Chapter 13

Very nice story flow. Your characterisations are very appealling and I can't wait to read more.

Just need to figure out if this site has 'Story Alerts' :p

sq33kl337 posted a comment on Monday 1st December 2014 8:56pm for Chapter 13

Absolutely loving it!!!! I always emjoy a new update :D:D:D:D:D

samsas posted a comment on Monday 1st December 2014 6:06pm for Chapter 13

Wonderful story!

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 29th November 2014 10:13am for Chapter 13

This is amazing. Of course Harry has aged himself studying ahead in the ROR. He is doing amazing things for a lot of people though. He has probably ruined Megan's father. She really needs to be reigned in. I love the way that Aurora just assumed the role of Harry's girlfriend. That worked really well except with Annie. She could tell the truth. I'm glad Harry is backing the show. Annie will do very well. Now he has tried to help someone that was attacked and he is getting arrested for "looking guilty". Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. Write when you can. I will wait. I love your stories. p

The Seeker posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 7:44pm for Chapter 13

Fantastic chapter until the ending. Random 1 name captured my feelings much better than I could convey, so I'll just point to his/her comments and say, 'me too.' As you stated in your comments, this story is now operating on the international level, as opposed to being Hogwarts-centric, with the introduction of the Mata Hari, Natalia. From the looks of it, she will replace Kate, which is disappointing. The end also takes us in an entirely new direction, one, I hope, which doesn't ruin the story for me. For what it's worth, this is the first time I've been disappointed in anything you've written, so I strongly hope the next chapter makes it more paleaable.

epsilon posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 7:28pm for Chapter 13

I'm really happy to see this fic back. I really love it. But I think you may have forgotten some of the stuff you wrote earlier in this fic. For one, Harry was absolutely railing against the notion that the AK could be used in a positive manner; that it's anything but totally evil staining your soul forever magic. That he would use it now, when spells like the stunner would do the same, is incomprehensible. In addition I'm not sure why Harry would consider the boy beyond saving. He can apparate directly to Poppy - or even Dumbledore. A few spells to keep him alive and then apparate back and run into a hospital, and he wouldn't even need to know about magic. The death comes across as one of this computer game scenes where assassins kill the king and despite the fact that the main character has resurrection available, the king can't be saved. The Russians... rumors about Harry's reaction to betrayal will leave Hogwarts soon. I do wonder if they'll adjust the plan or are going to go down burning. On the other hand once Harry stops procrastinating I'm not sure he'll give her any time. Of course I wouldn't be surprised if Jonathan had contacts in Russia that warn him about the gamble because they realize just how badly it will backfire.

random1name posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 8:39am for Chapter 13

That ending made no sense and was frankly terrible. Stasis spells have been used in this story, and the wounded boy was harmed without magic, so it would have either been easy to heal him or simple to stabilise him and take him to a healer.

Aside from that, you have vaunted Harry's people reading skills to a very high level, he would have picked up on certain things.

And on top of that, this scenario fits too well with the earlier hypothetical, the one where Harry flat out said the killing curse was wrong and damaged the caster. There are other ways to ease suffering, simple ways, that aren't Unforgiveable and aren't fuelled by hatred. Heck, a stunner would have worked! Instant unconsciousness. Or a sleeping charm, or any manner of magic you have already used in this story.

This is a wonderful, unique story and, personally, I feel it deserves better than that. It broke character, in-verse rules and possibilities, and added a pointless level of angst and stupidity to a situation that could have had nearly the same level of drama without the Killing Curse. That is, if it was crucial to the plot. And if that is the case I am afraid the plot probably needs reworking.

The situation at the end there felt contrived and painfully so, a stark contrast to the rest of the story which flowed far better and did not include such things. Have the spy able to pass his tests, ramp up the drama and betrayal there if you must, and torture us so wonderfully with his love life until it hurts, but please change that last situation so that it wasn't so forced.

Just my opinion, think nothing of it if you like. I love and adore this story and can't wait to see where you take it next. Your writing is wonderful and your characters compelling. I beg you though to please change that curse, if nothing else about that situation.

adafrog posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 4:26am for Chapter 13

Uh oh.

Very good.