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Janax posted a comment on Thursday 23rd August 2007 11:14am for Best Man

Excellently written (par for the course for you). I would really love it if you found yourself able to continue this story. You've given it a wonderful start and though it makes some assumptions about the stupidity of Bill doing this in the first place, could easily turn into the full story.

It's great to see H/F written so well - it's hard to resolve their age differences back during GoF, but then later in the canon plotline, of course, they only have minimal interaction. So it's been hard for most, I think, to have a H/F pairing believable.

Thanks for sharing your writing, and hope to see more in the near future!

Muad'Dib posted a comment on Tuesday 21st August 2007 8:04am for Best Man

A wonderful story, simply amazing. It's a shame you will probably leave this a one-shot, because I would have loved to see this progress into something more.

Yayness posted a comment on Monday 20th August 2007 12:47am for Best Man

I like it. Harry has so much character...

kjd posted a comment on Thursday 16th August 2007 7:22am for Best Man

good story
i agree with you about the marriage contract fics

but this fic could probably expand into a full fic, final battle and all, and i think you'd probably manage to do a wonderful job of it considering the rest of your fics, not may i haven' read on your page.

But what ever you do keep up the good work its always helps me destress after a hard days work to read a good story.

phoenixgirl posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 1:18am for Best Man

I really enjoyed this story. I'm glad you didn't stick to the details of the challenge. Your story was much better without them. I loved the interaction between Fleur and Harry. Very well done. I was surprised that she was only drinking juice and trying to test him, clever plan actually...I agree that being drunk is no excuse.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 10:35am for Best Man

I'm looking forward to more great stuff from you and I can't wait to see the updates.

rblack posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 4:31am for Best Man

wow, I love it great work.

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Saturday 4th August 2007 9:05pm for Best Man

This was pretty good...Are you gonna right a sequel....I know you can't be forced but i hope you do. On that is it just me that finds it funny that some people think they can FORCE J.K Rowling to write a HP 8?

scribbler posted a comment on Saturday 4th August 2007 7:58pm for Best Man

I love your work. A LOT. It is incredibly powerful and I think that you are a far, far better writer than JKR. You've got a load of talent and it's amazing to read your descriptions. You must be an english major or at least someone who works with words alot.

As for the smut..oy. I wish you would write some. The Harry/Gabrielle story screamed out for at least *some*.

Please...don't stop writing!


Edmond G Bertrand
a/k/a the_scribbler

jasongill83 posted a comment on Friday 3rd August 2007 9:31pm for Best Man

awesome story! just like all other stories you have written :)

Tyler_A posted a comment on Friday 3rd August 2007 7:26pm for Best Man

I believe you should continue this one and see where it goes. I like how it's set up so far and I haven't read many Harry/Fleur settings. The only other one that I read hasn't been finished yet and it doesn't look like it will, although it was going well. This one has potential.

stmurashige posted a comment on Wednesday 1st August 2007 1:33am for Best Man

Thank you for yet another fantastic story. I really liked all the Harry/Fleur interaction, but thought that the Harry/Hermione scene in Harry's bedroom topped even that. You were able to express all the complexities of their relationship in a very small amount of space. Just wanted to say bravo, job well done!

Thanks again for this and all your other stories. You are without a doubt one of my favorite writers.

la13 posted a comment on Tuesday 31st July 2007 3:08pm for Best Man

This was really fun story to read. I liked the idea of Fleur and Harry actually turning out to be friends.

Steven Augart posted a comment on Thursday 26th July 2007 11:05am for Best Man

Some minor typos and here are my suggestions for fixing them:

You write:

she had just spent to much time working there for it to be a considered a decent holiday destination

Instead of to, you want too .

I look forward to reading the rest of this story, but I have to log out right now.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Thursday 26th July 2007 7:51am for Best Man

Accented speach is ok in small quantities. I hated reading Huck Finn because of it. Good call.

Nice story. Would be interesting if it continues. Who would Hermione get hooked up with, though? Neville?

Thanks for creating this.

Tom A.

The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 25th July 2007 5:50am for Best Man

An involved story with a beautiful ending. I was deeply affected by Bill's infidelity, Harry's integrity, the relationship between Harry and Hermione, etc. So much impact in a one-shot. Your writing always evokes an emotional response when I read it. A truly great ability in an author. I eagerly await the next chapter to any of your stories/your next story/etc. Thank you for sharing your ideas with the rest of us.

nesparatu posted a comment on Wednesday 25th July 2007 3:23am for Best Man

Another excellent story. I absolutely love all of your stories, and I consider you a wonderful writer. Please post Happily Ever After or whatever story you plan to post next as soon as possible (the hints for "The greatest trick" make it sound intriguing). Can't wait to read your next work.

Ben10 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 8:27pm for Best Man

I definitely like the Harry/Fleur pairing myself, so this was a nice fic to read. I also liked the use of french (Finally, after years of study . . .), even if la langue de l'amour was primarily utilized for just swearing.


Greatputt posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 6:20pm for Best Man

Amazing chapter. I loved the way Fleur handled the cheating and hope you will continue this soon.

Praetor posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 3:11pm for Best Man

And Fleur telling Hermione something what Harry told her in confidence? A big No-No. So Fleur has lost her right to judge others to.

Childish little girl, my ass, look in a mirror.