Lon Huey posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 6:49pm for Best Man

So, I re-read this today and enjoyed it more the second time. Just like every other story you write, they're better once you go back and pick up the nuances. Very well done. Just what we needed waiting for number 7.

I know you don't want us to bad mouth JKR, and I most certainly won't. I have to confess, however, that I enjoy your work more. Please, no matter what we find out in 7, please continue to play in this sand box. I feel I speak for others when I say I would even pay (gasp) for works of this quality. They are really good.

Cheers.

Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 6:47pm for Best Man

Great work.

Manatheron posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 5:29pm for Best Man

I know that you probably aren't interesting in doing so, but would you consider continuing this story? In all honesty I hope it doesn't contain smut. You've done an excellent job of setting up the premise for the horcrux hunt, and you have a believable way to Involve Fluer, and since Ron and harry are probably not really on speaking terms you could even throw in a scene with Ron ready to read harry the riot act for not stopping Fluer, only to nearly miss the train when he never shows up.

Bethany posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 4:32pm for Best Man

loved it. Thank you.

Essedyss posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 4:28pm for Best Man

Great story!! I hope you continue with this particular story or eventually write a whole other Harry/Fleur fic. Keep up the great work!

curalium lacrimo posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 2:54pm for Best Man

Very interesting. I like that Harry has grown up!

Please update again soon

TomokiG posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 2:19pm for Best Man

I think this story does not have the same level than your other stories. The pairing is pressed by too many stupid mistakes and slight bashing of unwanted partners so that the story itself becomes unrealistic and forced.
Personally I don't see any future for this story.

°TomokiG °

Tero Alanne posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 2:06pm for Best Man

Well.. To tell you the truth, I would very much like to read more of this. So if you have some strange urge to write a fleur/harry fic then by all means do so :)

It's a bit hard for me to read your stuff because I tend to be a bit of a Harry/Ginny guy, yet you manage to make so much sense of pretty much all the ships you decide to write. And I have to say that it would seem very natural, to take this kind of build up and create a Harry/Fleur story out of it. In fact, that particular ship right now makes most sense to me. So..I'll be waiting for when that day comes.

parakletos posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 1:43pm for Best Man

I don't read much of your stuff these days and having read this first thing, I thought I'd wait before reviewing to see if my feeling changed towards it. They haven't.

Unlike everyone else who has reviewed I thought it was a bad fic. I thought the device you used to show the Weasley's in a bad light was very cheap and very cliché. After that I lost interest. I don't know if you read reviews these days , but if you do, I want to say thank you for the stuff that is on PS, but I can't see myself reading anything else in future. To coin a phrase, so long and thanks for the fics.

Jeffrey1 posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 12:34pm for Best Man

very nice.i would love to read more about the (new) golden trio's adventures.harry is obviously smitten with both women,at least thats the way i saw it.
again,you written another enjoyable fic.congratulations.

thumper posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 12:30pm for Best Man

Outstanding Fic I realy enoyed it. And This would be a great start to a Harry/Fluer Fic

DizzyG posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 12:04pm for Best Man

Excellent story. Well worth a postive review.
I admit I felt some disappointment with this story - how dare it end so quickly, I was just getting into it ;)
Eagerly awaiting your next efforts.

Tildessmoo posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 11:58am for Best Man

Quite impressed with this work, really. It seems that at least four times you went off and did something I really wasn't expecting, and all of it done quite well. This seems quite possible in canon, and is also an impressive departure from your usual, often fairy-tale-ish, style of HP fics (which is not to say I don't like those as well!). You even managed to use all the right French words in the right places, something I've noticed many authors have a lot of trouble with.

You still might want to have a beta who knows French on fics like this in the future, though.

Corrections:
Feminine of "putain" is "putaine." "Avalé" is a past participle; the first person singular present is "avale" (no accent). "N'est pas" should be "n'est-ce pas" (think "Is that not it?" rather than "Is not?").

Points of Interest:
"Salope," as I'm sure you've gathered, is a more vulgar word for the same concept (often translated as "bitch"; I think of them as "prostitute" vs. "whore"); the masculine, in case you're interested, is "salaud." "Fumer" is an infinitive (first person is "fume"), but I can see both infinitive and first person as being usable in that instance.

uberwald posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 11:44am for Best Man

love it.

wertyo posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 11:42am for Best Man

Another great fic!

Illusia posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 11:33am for Best Man

I like this story, even if it isn't updated yet :) I've received three notices at my e-mail about "update: Best Man" Latest just this morning (20th of july)
But I really do hope you'll decide to work further with this story. This is already very delicious and I can't help but loving noble Harry :)

CoyoteScion posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 10:36am for Best Man

excellent one shot might be a second chapter in there. but if not it was a good read anyway. thanks for writing. lets see more soon

GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 9:39am for Best Man

A nice little one shot, you should right more Harry/Fleur's, knowing how good your other fics are it would be a guaranteed brilliant story.

Keep writing

GuardianOfLight

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 8:38am for Best Man

This was a nice piece. I disagree with your take on Hermione's "brotherly" feelings (I think there has been more than enough evidence that she has, or had, romantic feelings for him), but that is neither here nor there. I do feel like you were brow-beating the reader into thinking that way about Harry & Hermione, however. At any rate, it'd be nice to see a follow-up to this sometime in the future. Oh, and didn't Harry tell R & Hr the full prophecy in HBP?

amysds posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 7:49am for Best Man

I loved this fic! I would have like it if you continued it more (are you?) and showed the reaction of Mrs. Weasley when she finds out how much people took advantage of Harry's generosity. Cause that's just wrong. You would think that they would pinch pennies even more if it's NOT their money. But I can see Ron feeling entitled or something and his brothers taking a cue from him. Not Fred and George though. I guess I would just like to see the developing relationship with Fleur and Love the sister Hermione over jerk Ron.