This is really good. Thank you and I enjoy reading this a lot. Would really like to see a second chapter of it and see the relationship turn to H/F. But this open ending is quite well too. Thank you.
"The setup to this fic – the delayed wedding at the Black Summer Mansion, is from “The Greatest Trick”, a Harry/Lavender fic that I will start posting after Happily Ever After– so when you see it, understand that I used that idea in here, not the other way around."
I'd like to see this fic.Is it posted anywhere?
BTW and apropos of nothing, in the credits at the bottom of the page, you're missing an 'r' from the word 'vampire'.
Very good story and I am now wishing it had some addiditional chapters. Here's to praying you continue this in the future!
Another question though; who is Wednesday from your Perfect Syltherin fic? At first I assumed she was an OC but she has her own shipping section so...
One of the things that I like about your writing is that you really get into the characters' heads and show how they are thinking and feeling and everything else flows naturally from your characterization. Another great story.
Thanks for posting!
Best Man indeed! Great story. Nicely written.
Love this Fic..well love them all. Hope is the story that got me hooked on FanFic. The realistic give and take of the characters is outstanding in all of your stories. Like everyone else I wish there was more. I am curious as to what ever became of "The Greatest Trick" you said you would post?
Oh thank you for such a lovely story. I really like how you show Harry and Hermione friendship. I felt so sorry for Fleur discover what Bill did. Will there be a follow up to this story?
I hope you have some more H/F stories coming up. I really like the mature tone of this pairing.
mate you should a full length Harry/Fleur fic. ur writing is awesome.
Very enjoyable story, good concept and quite believable, would love to read a second chapter or a follow up.
One minor point though, you mentioned that Ginny arranged for Bill, Ron and Remus to be left alone, and also Harry. Then Harry leaves, Remus escapes and, possibly due to a prank, Charlie is ignored in favor of Bill due to the hair switch. I see no mention of why Ron wasn't ignored. Not complaining, was just curious really.
i've enjoyed everything you have on this sight. this story i would love to have seen taken further. Just wondering why if as you claim in the A/N at the end that harry/fleur is your favourite pairing that you haven't written any.
This is an excellent piece. I enjoyed the heartfelt nature of the story and liked all the characterizations. Of particular note I liked the portrayal of Remus' and Hermione's loyalty to their partners and friends (respectively). One could say that Harry is a bit OOC here, as he's more dedicated to self-improvement than he generally is in the books. However, my story is that JKR herself started writing Harry OOC in HBP and beyond. And I'm sticking to it, thank you very much.
Thank you for writing this, and it's definitely going in my Read-It-Again folder.
i like it... probably have been a good series if serialized
This is awesome! I wish that you would write a sequel or even an epilogue to give the reader closure. Harry/Fleur is my pairing of choice for non-crossover HP fics, but it is tied with Harry/Gabrielle because of Hope and Happily Ever After.
you kno i am still waiting for the greatest trick lol. But I would love to see a novel length harry/fluer fic. I mean you did it with one of my fav stories of yours with hope. and I agree that harry/fluer is one of my fav pairins as well. along with well written harry/hermione, harry/gabrielle, harry/tonks and most unusual pairings like harry/daphne or pansy, harry/rosemerta. and even harry/lily evans
Brilliant. Your writing is easy to read, and lacks the common grammaratical or spelling mistakes that all too often turns a good story into a steaming pile of crap.
this is the first of yours that I've read, but I sincerely hope you retain this standard throughout the rest. Cuz that's be epic.
I liked this very much. I always enjoy stories in which Harry grows up. I'm looking forward to The Greatest Trick which you mention in the notes. Thanks so much for sharing.
This will always be one of my favorite stories by you.
Mildly upset... I can't get to potters place because i don't turn 18 for another month...