Kalen Darkmoon posted a comment on Thursday 7th September 2006 9:20pm for 8 - Finishing

Good show! You have a real knack for romance fics.

Rake posted a comment on Saturday 2nd September 2006 12:05pm for 8 - Finishing

OK.....great story...i think that this is the first independent!Harry story that has a totally unic and original plot...no Harry suddenly realises he needs training and runs away from the Dursley's...no super Harry...no Harry rants at friends and headmaster...i congratulate you for a verry good fic...

CaptainG posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 10:45am for 8 - Finishing

Love the story, any chance of you writing the chat between ginny harry and pansy? I'm kinda intrigued as to what you have in mind for it. Not a full blown sequel, just a small one-shot. Thanks

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 25th August 2006 9:06am for 8 - Finishing

I enjoyed this story a great deal. I would love to read some of the side stories; should you be so inspired as to write them.

djo posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 1:12am for 8 - Finishing

Congrats to a really great story!

Janeth posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 3:41pm for 8 - Finishing

Did you make any short stories to go with this one? I would like to read them if you did. I really enjoyed the story.

Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 1:09pm for 8 - Finishing

I really like this story.I have read it several times. Please continue this. Will Pansy Harry and Ginny work out their issues while in France. Iam looking forward to you continuing what you started. This story is very enjoyable and should be continued. Will Harry Pansy and Ginny stay together and raise a family? Enquiring minds want to know. I think that those three would be great together and should remain so. They all love each other, so what's the problem?

HitAndRun posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 4:03am for 8 - Finishing

Wow, that was soooooo cool! I've really enjoyed the read, and it's left a kind of special feeling in my chest... I can't believe it's over! I want it to go on!

Nice work on the Harry/Pansy/Ginny relationship. That's what it's like, most of the time, in threeways... they just... come into life, of their own.

You've also made Ginny a respectable character, and for me who regulary don't like her... well... You've made me wonder! Well done, indeed!

Cheers, and I'm almost wanting a one shot to see what happened later... but... it would kind of ruin it at the same time.

Cheers and congrats to writing one hell of a fic!

Grukal posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2006 11:07am for 8 - Finishing

You know, i think this is one of the very best fan fics i have ever read. It ´s bloody fantastic, and it is inspiring as well. Keep up the great work!

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 3:50pm for 8 - Finishing

Love the idea of Harry as a Dr Doolittle. That’s so cute. Caught the Carry On reference too. I’m such a big fan of Mad-Eye now, who is in turn a fan of Harry so everyone’s happy. Had to laugh at Mata Hari having better legs than Draco. The Harry’s brass balls line had me giggling my head off. Love your use of the marines. Love the idea of Molly being a prankster too. I’m guessing the statue part of the battle was a Winter’s Tale reference. The battle was magnificent and I liked the openendedness of Harry, Ginny & Pansy's issues. Wonderful story.

Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Friday 23rd June 2006 7:30am for 8 - Finishing

I love this story. Is there going to be anyother chapters to this story? Harry and pansy make a good couple.

Dustin

goddessa39 posted a comment on Tuesday 20th June 2006 9:38am for 8 - Finishing

LOL! I loved this. But you should put just one last small chappie or maybe a sepreate one-shot telling what happened afterwards. :)

CoyoteScion posted a comment on Tuesday 6th June 2006 1:37pm for 8 - Finishing

Damn..... the only thing that I can say is that was excellent and the only thing I might add would be another chapter dealing with Pansy, Harry and Ginny. Overall very good read and provided hours of diversion while I should have been working. Thank you.

Lionsgate posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 9:47am for 8 - Finishing

Read your story 3 times : always better : you can't leave us in the cold abouth the future : you promised follow ups : there is story left for more than a 100.000 words : so start writing you .... !!!!! PLEASE !. One more thing : i would rate this story and HOPE by the top 10 on the net. : so give us more ....

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 3:03am for 8 - Finishing

WOW!, I was not sure about a Harry and Pansy fic but after reading it, what a great story. But its has left to many unanswered questions. You have got to add to this or at least tell us what happened in the future.

MPF

ojiushadow posted a comment on Tuesday 16th May 2006 7:10pm for 8 - Finishing

dude this story is amazin wow imean wow.....

i read this story the 3 time and i want to read more.....

i read your stories and i usualy dont review...

but ur stories are like wow...

you the best author of harry potter i have read...
i have read some other good ones but u have the most amazin stories....


peace
<:) Ram

Cass posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 4:16pm for 8 - Finishing

I loved this story from the beginning. I thought your romance was developed over a reasonable period of time and believable because of all the changes both both Harry and Pansy went through, and I adored both of Pansy's parents.

It's so hard to find a good fiction where Harry is strong, smart, and determined that is well-written and plotted, and also doesn't short-staff any characters. (I get so tired of evil!Ron and a weakling Hermione who run away from Harry once the going gets tough, when they never have before.) This piece is very impressive.

I must admit, I didn't like Ginny apparent romantic integration into the fic. I don't usually mind Harry Harem fics or Harry with multiple partners, but I felt a bit shortchanged by Ginny's addition. The fic was set up from the beginning as an H/P romance and it was wonderfully done. Did you change your mind halfway through? That was the impression I got.

The romance written between Harry and Pansy was definitely was one of the best Harry Potter romances I've ever read. Their relationship seemed so genuine, and the pair's mutual admiration and committment was very touching. Ginny arriving on the scene as a romantic prospect seemed to all that had been set up between the main couple, and honestly, it made me sad more than anything.

That aside, I loved all of your little touches - you didn't just focus on one aspect of the Harry Potter world, like many writers do. You covered the elves, the goblins, the different sects of the government, and the Hogwarts staff, and each take was refreshingly original and believable. Kudos!

Cass posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 4:15pm for 8 - Finishing

I loved this story from the beginning. I thought your romance was developed over a reasonable period of time and believable because of all the changes both both Harry and Pansy went through, and I adored both of Harry's parents.

It's so hard to find a good fiction where Harry is strong, smart, and determined that is well-written and plotted, and also doesn't short-staff any characters. (I get so tired of evil!Ron and a weakling Hermione who run away from Harry once the going gets tough, when they never have before.) This piece is very impressive.

I must admit, I didn't like Ginny apparent romantic integration into the fic. I don't usually mind Harry Harem fics or Harry with multiple partners, but I felt a bit shortchanged by Ginny's addition. The fic was set up from the beginning as an H/P romance and it was wonderfully done. Did you change your mind halfway through? That was the impression I got.

The romance written between Harry and Pansy was definitely was one of the best Harry Potter romances I've ever read. Their relationship seemed so genuine, and the pair's mutual admiration and committment was very touching. Ginny arriving on the scene as a romantic prospect seemed to all that had been set up between the main couple, and honestly, it made me sad more than anything.

That aside, I loved all of your little touches - you didn't just focus on one aspect of the Harry Potter world, like many writers do. You covered the elves, the goblins, the different sects of the government, and the Hogwarts staff, and each take was refreshingly original and believable. Kudos!

Rogue posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 7:26pm for 8 - Finishing

Awesome, awesome, awesome!

I was skeptical at first because I've never seen anyone do a Pansy/Harry pairing well... You blew it straight out of the water.

I only had two issues with the story. One was a technical thing - I don't believe that the SBS (Or any other British military force) uses the M16, but I could well be wrong. Either way, I can't be bothered to look it up right now.

THe second qualm I had was cutting it off so quickly right at the end. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO THEM! Hopefully there'll be something reasonably soon to explain it all.

johnej posted a comment on Tuesday 9th May 2006 3:18pm for 8 - Finishing

great story