White Knight, Grey Queen
8 - Finishing
By Jeconais
Reviews
Hagrid posted a comment on Saturday 16th June 2007 6:35pm for 8 - Finishing
I've lost track of the number of times I've read this story, at least 5 I think, and I like as much now as the first time I read it. From the little things, like Dobby strutting around like Lurch, to a five year long prank by Pansy under a glamour to hide from Draco, you covered it all.
sblackfan posted a comment on Thursday 7th June 2007 12:16pm for 8 - Finishing
Fantastic story!! Now I need to go look for those short stories that you mentioned :)
morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 9:15am for 8 - Finishing
Brilliant story!
Everything was perfect - a lovely, believable romance, exciting action, a fabulous supporting cast, sparkling dialogue, a sprinkling of humor, spot-on characterizations - a wonderful whole.
Thank-you so much for such a wonderful read.
jasongill83 posted a comment on Monday 4th June 2007 10:32pm for 8 - Finishing
man! this is an awesome awesome story :D couldn't have been more glad to read it, one of the very best there is!
Nox posted a comment on Thursday 24th May 2007 2:24pm for 8 - Finishing
I was not expecting to but I absolutely loved this fic. Excellent job of taking a insane idea and making it work. This has to be one of my favorite fics now and I read a ton of HP fanfiction. I was rather disappointed at the ending as I wanted to see what would happen with the trio of Harry, Pansy and Ginny as well as the Wizarding World's reaction to their new leader. I sincerely hope there will be a sequel to this as you have more than enough to work with. Until then.
Nox
rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 6:38pm for 8 - Finishing
i almost did not read because of the ship howewver i am very glad i did. well writen and different another chapter or two would be great you have me hooked now i need more.
sejones posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 6:22am for 8 - Finishing
It took me a really long time to get around to reading this story. I just couldn't fathom a reasonably realistic relationship between Harry and Pansy, but you made it work. I really enjoyed this story. In your author notes you mentioned the likelyhood of several one-shot spinoffs from this story. Maybe I've missed it, but I think I've read everything else you've posted on this site, and from the descriptions of the stories that are finished but not yet posted, they aren't there either. Are you planning to continue in this universe, cause I'm really interested to find out what you have planned for Harry, Pansy and Ginny. Thanks for sharing your storys with the rest of us.
LoVeBiRd posted a comment on Friday 18th May 2007 12:30am for 8 - Finishing
I love it!! but I really dont think Hinny should be a part of the little romantic thing. I think Harry and Pansy are good together. Other than that it's really good! ciao, LoVeBiRd xx
Dargor posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 9:10am for 8 - Finishing
You know, this story is more than good- it's damn excellent- and I am serious. It was quite a while since any story owerwhelm me like this, and even longer since I so thoroughly enjoyed a fic on such a... twisted setting as a HP series. Thank You, good Author-san *bows*
Daily Prophet Reporting posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 12:12am for 8 - Finishing
I know it's a bit redundant when talking about your stories, but this was fun. You produce most excellent grand battle scenes, and this one was different enough from TMW that it was fresh and just as exciting. If fact, I think the elements came together better in this story.
And I think that all comes down to the muggle influence. Apaches? Granades in giants' socks? Cordite as the power Voldemort knows not? Those are not elements you're not going to see in two many fics, but in context they're absolutely hilarious and effective. But the first scene with Tonks transformer fighting was just as clever, and I love the idea of a silly-string cannon.
The greatest coup had to be how you got rid of Draco, though.
He did so love the symphony the blond sang to him as he stuck into his lunch
I bow down to you for coming up with that line. By far, that's the best performance I've seen from Aragog in any fic.
Elsewhere, I was right about your multi-shipping finish. I'm still not certain why you did it, though. You've come a very, very long way from where you were at the start of school when Harry was a moment from proposing and Ginny had accepted her fate. That's not to say you didn't take your time developing the threesome, and I like that it was Pansy who initiates virtually every step in the proccess. But it definitely leaves a cloud of mystery over the finish, and I'm finding myself a bit disappointed I don't know how it plays out because there are so many possibilities -- ranging from tragedy to serious smut.
But, you did show some restraint. For a while I thought you might be moving toward bringing Daphne, Hermione and possibly even Luna into the mix too. Not that I'm complaining about the quad kissing scene, though.
I was a bit disappointed that we couldn't see the election or Harry train the D.A. properly. But, like I said last time, I understand. The scale of this is pretty overwhelming as is (and I'm only reading, not writing), and I know anything else you would have taken on you wouldn't have done halfway. I can only guess how much work this (and your other stories) must have required, and I definitely appreciate it.
So, thanks again for another fun read. I've definitely got Hope high on my list of things to hit in the near future.
-KC
cutecess posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 12:41pm for 8 - Finishing
absolutly amazing! I like the humor that you put into all your fics (that i've read) and it was clearly in this one. I think my favourite part was that you thought about the OCs you had and how they would react - are you a writter?
Robin Hood posted a comment on Saturday 5th May 2007 7:15pm for 8 - Finishing
I don't think it is over until we hear about them working out their issues, especially considering a certain diamond ring Harry is still carrying around.
silverleafhp posted a comment on Thursday 26th April 2007 9:27pm for 8 - Finishing
Err...do you even realize what the title to this fic is? White Knight (Harry), Gray Queen (Pansy)? I mean where in the title does it say Spunky Red Head?
Sorry about being sorta flamish. But this could of been up there with some of the best HP fics of all times until it was ruined by this weird thing with Ginny. I mean you spent countless words giving Pansy a great fleshing out. Harry, falls in love with her and they become inseperable, they love each other.
Then bamm..out of nowhere the reader is forced to endure Ginny wedging herself inbetween them. I am not sure I will ever figure it out. I mean I know you have a thing for Ginny, since most of your fics have that ship, and I honestly don't mind it. However, you completly ruined this fic by adding Ginny as possible a second lover for Harry and Pansy.
Just not sure what you where thinking here. It makes no since whatsoever.
AnyaGrace posted a comment on Thursday 19th April 2007 3:15pm for 8 - Finishing
I absolutely loved your story! This is the FIRST Harry/Pansy that I have ever seen and I have to say that I enjoyed it greatly. Please keep writing in your life! It really shows that you enjoy wirting as much as many enjoy reading what you write! Thanks!
la13 posted a comment on Wednesday 18th April 2007 6:32pm for 8 - Finishing
Wow, this story is awesome. It's funny, fun, and believable. Umm, ok, believable in the sense that we're not considering the whole "people waving magic wands around" part. No, what I mean is, the story really came to life for me and I enjoyed it a lot.
Anubis Rex posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 10:53pm for 8 - Finishing
I have read, or attempted to read, every Harry/femaleSlytherin fanfic I have stumbled across. This is by far the most believable of those fics. Half the time Harry suddenly discovers he really should've been a Slytherin all along and falls for Bellatrix or someone similar; you took the time and effort to build a decent, believable relationship. Thank you.
A.R.
fairyp80 posted a comment on Thursday 12th April 2007 11:23am for 8 - Finishing
I love this story, as I do all your writing.
Will you ever be writing the follow up stories to this one?
noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th March 2007 6:07am for 8 - Finishing
Need more. Need the story of Harry and Pansy (sorry about the error in previous review) actually getting the WW into some sort of ethical shape. More more more
noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th March 2007 6:06am for 8 - Finishing
Need more. Need the story of Harry and Daphne actually getting the WW into some sort of ethical shape. More more more
Jannifer posted a comment on Tuesday 10th July 2007 11:01pm for 8 - Finishing