White Knight, Grey Queen
8 - Finishing
By Jeconais
Reviews
Peregrine829 posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 1:33am for 8 - Finishing
Just out of curiosity, do you plan on writing the epilogue to this? There's a handful of things which were never addressed like the Harry/Pansy/Ginny threesome you (rather heavily) hinted at, Remus' election campaign, the house-elves, etc.
Markus Gabler posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 2:49am for 8 - Finishing
Aloah,
I think I've read this story now for the 4th or 5th time and every time again it leaves me searching for the promised sequel and I quote:
"But, this is not the end of this universe. There are lots of little stories to tell — everything from Harry, Pansy, and Ginny finally having a talk about their issues..."
Please tell me, that there are out there thoose storys for us to read.....
Kind Regards
Markus
Joseph Fritz posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2008 8:34am for 8 - Finishing
Excellent! Would really like to see at least an epilogue!
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 22nd May 2008 11:01pm for 8 - Finishing
Every time I run across this story I keep rereading it! It's addicting! Brilliant work.
motherjenjen posted a comment on Saturday 10th May 2008 10:28pm for 8 - Finishing
hi i love this story well i actually love all the stories you write
are you going to write a sequil to this???? i would be a fantastic harry/pansy/ginny
i never thought that i would approve of that pairing till i read this story
REALLY LOVE IT
JEN
DrgnMstr posted a comment on Friday 9th May 2008 10:31am for 8 - Finishing
This is one of my favorite Harry/Pansy pieces. I am really happy with the way you ended this, save for the fact that it should have at the very least an epilogue so that the final loose ends (most of which you commented the author notes) can be tied up. Even though it is obvious where some of them are going, it would be good to have your take on it. And perhaps a bit of showing where Harry's vision of a unified Muggle/Magical world starts? Otherwise, very, very good.
sleep when your dead posted a comment on Tuesday 6th May 2008 6:56pm for 8 - Finishing
love this story are you going to do another harry/pansy because this has been the best one i have read so far
AutumnKatie posted a comment on Sunday 27th April 2008 10:01pm for 8 - Finishing
I just finished reading this story and it was awesome. I have to commend you on your writing and your beta and the rest of your team. I see you are considering a sequel which I'm all for. I've really begun to like the Harry/Pansy pairing because it's so much more interesting than Harry/Ginny and you definitely wrote a great Harry/Pansy story. I will patiently wait for your update.
Kathleen posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 9:52pm for 8 - Finishing
Great story! I would never have thought anyone could make a believable Parkinson-Harry match, but I'm learning that anything you write is not only believable, but so believable you can't imagine the story playing out any other way. Thanks for sharing it.
blainny posted a comment on Monday 31st March 2008 3:21pm for 8 - Finishing
The story is one of the best i've read. Please let me know when you have Posted the sequel to this story i would like to see everything that happens with the issues, election, ministry post election,school & the future of the group.
darthme1011 posted a comment on Saturday 29th March 2008 8:21pm for 8 - Finishing
Is there Still a sequel in the works or at least slightly planed out.. this i one of my all time favorite HP stories
archdog77 posted a comment on Monday 17th March 2008 12:42pm for 8 - Finishing
excellently done. I hope to see those sequels soon.
elementalmoon posted a comment on Thursday 6th March 2008 10:57am for 8 - Finishing
I love this fic, and really hope that you write a sequel that ties up the Harry/Pansy/Ginny issue. That and seeing Remus get elected and the House Elves freed would be awesome! Great job!
Vilkath posted a comment on Saturday 16th February 2008 7:00pm for 8 - Finishing
Great story, great battle great every thing. Like I said before you put more effort into your Pansy/Harry romance then even the orginal author did any the orginal books. I was glad you eventualy included Ginny but bit sad Daphine sort fadded out of importance. You made her seem like a decent match for Harry, truely interseting and a real friend to Pansy but in the end she got left behind.
The final battle was nice, many stories try to include a lot of people in the fight against Voldemort, having everything from goblins to cenaturs. But this is one the first stories that actualy took the effort to work out the logistics of what every one would do, especialy how far you were going to take the muggle involvement. And ofcourse you had Tonks actualy fight like she was worth something, loved your take on her shape shifting skills to fight better. Most stories paint her out to be a clumbsy goof who is more then likely only tolerated for her spying skills and can't walk 5 feet without tripping. Nice to see a story where she can truely fight.
dingo75 posted a comment on Wednesday 13th February 2008 12:45pm for 8 - Finishing
Not sure if you're still reading reviews after two years, but that was a great story. Probably a bit much to hope for any additions to this universe, but what the hell, it stands up well on its own. Thanks!
wotmania505 posted a comment on Thursday 31st January 2008 10:11pm for 8 - Finishing
Absolutely amazing story. I honestly had never bothered to look you up as an author, until recently when I saw you and this story mentioned by Regulus on FF.N. I am truly impressed.
Anyways, thank you for writing such an excellent story. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
Aelita posted a comment on Tuesday 29th January 2008 7:50pm for 8 - Finishing
Thank you, now can you tell me when the short stories are coming out, please!
Aberbadger posted a comment on Saturday 12th January 2008 2:06am for 8 - Finishing
Sorry about thedouble posting. Was on my phone and tried a shortcut that didn't work.
what I was trying to say for the second one was; I take it the "sins of the student" doctrine is something along the lines of, the sins of the student being the responsibility of the master - In Harry's and Daphne's case ,their family friend, in Snape's case, Dumbledore is responsible for all of Snape's indiscressions and, according to the council, must be held accountable for them?
Aberbadger posted a comment on Friday 11th January 2008 9:25pm for 8 - Finishing
when are you going to start posting the wkgq vignettes?
Ceres posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 8:51am for 8 - Finishing