Tommy posted a comment on Sunday 19th February 2006 2:19pm for 8 - Finishing

Erhm... what DID he write on the ruined portrait of Mrs. Black? - I can't remember reading that...

- Great story of course; among the best I've ever read. I'd be interesting with a sequel or something... or at least an epilogue, telling us what happened further; did Remus become Minister (which I guess he did), what happened to the houseelfs? - and what choices will Harry continue with? - will he go on a long crusade for the sake of knowledge and fun around the world, or will he join a quidditch team? Or perhaps settle down? - My curiousity is overwhelming, I know, but I'd appreciate a reply, if only to turn it down.. :)

May The Words Be With You

Tommy L.
aka
fanfix

fanfix(a)start.no

PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 8:04pm for 8 - Finishing

I have waited quite a while to read this fic partially because I couldn't see how you could possibly but a positive spin on Pansy. I should have known that if anyone could do it you could. I really enjoyed this fic. Your spin on Harry and Pansy's relationship with Ginny was very unexpectedly enjoyed. I hope you will someday take us into the resolution of their relationship. Untill then I will only ponder the possibilities. Thank you once again!

PA

psychmarci posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 1:42pm for 8 - Finishing

I absolultly loved this story. I have had this story recommended too me many times and I am so glad that I was finally able to get through it. I am looking forward to some epilogue/outtake companion pieces. I have never really been a fan of Harry/Pansy stories but after this I am a believer!! I look forward to reading more of your wonderful work. Marci

wraithwolfe posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2006 3:15pm for 8 - Finishing

I enjoyed this story very much. I was well written, flowed well and had a good plot. Thanks for writting and posting it. I look forward to others that you may write.

squiddy posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 7:37pm for 8 - Finishing

That was a wonderfully written story. I didn't expect to be hooked on it from the first chapter but I was and can't be happier now that I've read through the whole thing.

Thanks for a great story and I really do hope you keep writing more stuff like this. It's been extremely entertaining =)

Maybe you can do all of us a favor too and write a "closure" chapter ont he relationship between H/G/P. You know what I mean ;)

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 11:27am for 8 - Finishing

Final - - An absolutely brilliant final battle. The best incorporation of Muggle technology I have seen yet.

Fine battle dialogue between Harry and Voldemort. Excellent end for Draco, Peter, and Bellatrix.

Thoroughly enjoyable.

altbisc posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 12:38am for 8 - Finishing

Hmm, I did enjoy the story. However, the inclusion of Ginny into Harry and Pansy's relationship really detracted from this story for me.

Overall though, a very enjoyable read. :)

sundays posted a comment on Wednesday 25th January 2006 9:03pm for 8 - Finishing

Absolutely stunning, all of it.
I wandered over on a rec from restrictedsection.org, and was immediately hooked. I tried to parse it out and make the reading last, but in the end, I just inhaled the whole bloody thing.

I'm off to read everything else you've written.

potterhead posted a comment on Wednesday 25th January 2006 12:21pm for 8 - Finishing

well, Tim. this story was awesome!
as is just about everything else on this site that I've read so far.

a good slythrin...or grey if you insist. I absolutely love that.
you really do have some skill with the quill, and you use it. and turning evil wizards into squibs? perfect punishment!
too bad ron and hermy didn't work out...I love that pair together.
but as ron says, "you can't have everything in life."
I was very entertained, keep up the good work.

daxi posted a comment on Tuesday 24th January 2006 3:57pm for 8 - Finishing

Just wanted to say thanks for writing this story, because i really enjoyed it. It was wicked and you really are a most talanted writer! Now i'm just reeeeaaaaally looking forward to that quidditch game with Dobby as beater! ;)

LP posted a comment on Sunday 22nd January 2006 6:49am for 8 - Finishing

I must say, you are a great writer! I have read most of your stories and I have yet to be disappointed. In regards to this story, I finally found a good HP/Pansy, very well writen and very interesting.

Congratulations and Thank you

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Friday 20th January 2006 2:55pm for 8 - Finishing

I read a praise another fanfic author gave you, saying you're one of the best. And I agree whole hearted. Everything you wrote are great, entertaining and keep me wishing for more. Keep us happy and thank you!

Amy B. posted a comment on Wednesday 18th January 2006 10:44am for 8 - Finishing

This was a great read! I loved the political intrigue. I like that even when Harry woke up and smelled the coffee and realized that Dumbledore wasn't going to get the job done, you didn't make Dumbledore ravingly evil or a complete idiot, just very, very flawed (much more realistic). I love Pansy's glamor, and her very Slytherin approach to everything- what a great "reveal" of her true self, both physical and personality-wise. This is an unusual pairing, but you've done a great job at explaining how this unlikely couple would get together and do it so quickly.

My only disappointment was that there was no big proposal scene- or wedding! I hope you will write more of this story at some time, at least an epilogue. Maybe I'm too much of a sap!

Cheers,
Amy

jacwil02 posted a comment on Thursday 12th January 2006 6:19am for 8 - Finishing

This was an absolutely fantastic story. Grammar was great, characters thought out, and had an awesome plot that everything tied into. The only thing I can say even slightly negative about it is that I wish you had an epilogue of some kind, showing how Harry and co. finished their revolution. Anyway, great story. I didn't think anyone could possibly make a even a decent HP/PP story. Great job and thank you for letting us join you on your ride.......

Tobang posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 6:40pm for 8 - Finishing

Great work, thanks for writeing it.

~Tobang

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 2:31am for 8 - Finishing

I have been a bit sceptical about a Harry/Pansy story.
You made it more than worth wile. great plot, very logical and intriging. And As I am a firm Harry/Ginny shipper I raly appreciated the final outcome.
Over all this is a story I would rate within the top of all ff I read so far.

Joseph posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 9:50pm for 8 - Finishing

Wow! Really good story... just finished reading this and I have one peeve: please please don't let this end up with a threeway between Ginny, Pansy, and Harry. I thought that you continually made references to Harry being completely faithful to Pansy and he was raised on Christian Principles (which means he's monogamous) so please... no ginny. Find her someone else ok? Only significant 'pet peeve' (alright so it is significantly more than a 'pet peeve', something like an extremely annoying itch) is this Ginny situation. You've even charactered the story under the pairing of just Harry and Pansy (NOT including Ginny) so... yeah I may be a little repetitive but I wouldn't have read this if Harry ended up with Ginny in any romantic way (unless she becomes an 'ex')


Joseph


Sorry if I appear to be rude but this isn't a flame and I'm signing my name and email so you can email me about your qualms. Good night!

sammie posted a comment on Wednesday 21st December 2005 6:45am for 8 - Finishing

it was a enchanting story, with so many interesting and totally indepth characters. i realli loved your story, this means war, too. hope you would complete it. was a great great story.

thanks for a beautiful story.
and sleepless nights.
(:

Jack B Nimble posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2005 6:15pm for 8 - Finishing

Just realized that I read this offline, but I never reviewed after I finished. I always figured I would make up for it when you wrote the epilog which seemed to be implied, but I should have written sooner in any case.

So, I REALLY liked it. I agree that the extra scenes might have been too much, but being a Remus fan, I might have included him. Tough decision on who to trade out, though. Good action sequences, and some nice justice handed out.

The relationship was a bit of a surprise, but only in how they finally included Ginny. I kept waiting to see where they would draw the line, and they never did! Unexpected, perhaps, but nicely handled.

Now, we just need to know more! What happens next?

Imazi posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 5:26pm for 8 - Finishing

I must say awesome writing, I started reading this for something different and the length once I started I didnt want to leave the computer even for work although I had to.