Nytefyre posted a comment on Monday 21st January 2013 6:08am for 8 - Finishing

I read this a while back and didn't get a chance to post how much I liked this story. Well written and plotted, and utilizing a diverse cast in a unique way that flowed organically from point to point as it built.

Bravo, and thanks for posting.

AragornII posted a comment on Monday 31st December 2012 5:28pm for 8 - Finishing

Have been a big fan of your other HP stories...but balked at the Pansy pairing. Finally saw a glowing reference on someone's 10 Best HP Stories. Congratulations on your wonderful transmutation of her.

Especially love your use of Ginny in this story. Very well done, indeed!

JShade posted a comment on Tuesday 6th November 2012 5:54am for 8 - Finishing

By far the most intense grey Harry I've ever read, and easily the best Harry/Pansy pairing, althugh I'm not too well-read on that pairing. Literally could not stop reading and it was worth all the work I now have to catch up on. Seriousy, I know its an older story but its still awesome, if a tad unrealistic at some points.

Araytigre posted a comment on Friday 26th October 2012 6:36am for 8 - Finishing

Soul Bonded, little did they realize, that when they shared Nott's magic (and Riddle's only re-enforced it) they bound their souls together. So, rather than they were a "Couple", now they are a "Trio", and somehow I don't think that it will be a problem for any of them. This was a brilliant story, very engaging, lots of action, with a dash of romance thrown in on the side. Harry and Pansy's love for each other may be complete, but they have found a place in their hearts for Ginny, and I can see a possibility for letting Hermione and maybe even Daphne in too, who knows, it could happen under the right circumstances. Thank You. TTFN

wileycoyote posted a comment on Monday 24th September 2012 5:35am for 8 - Finishing

Awesome! Just really awesome.

Thanks

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Tuesday 7th February 2012 6:18pm for 8 - Finishing

Great story and well worth reading. I like how well Pansy worked out along with her family to support Harry into making him what he needed to be to win a war. Thanks for sharing!

Pennywise posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2012 2:45pm for 8 - Finishing

Awesome story, someone from Fanfiction recommended this story while writting something and I'm glad I searched for it on google.

AbnormalPanda_242 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2012 10:41am for 8 - Finishing

Jeconais,
I am a very big fan of a lot of your work, first having been introduced to it through 'Hope' - which I originally read in French through FanFiction.Net. Wish I'd found this website earlier. Translation sucks.
'White Knight, Grey Queen' is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read, rated right up there with... wait... a lot of your other work, including 'Happily Ever After', 'Hope' and 'This Means War'.
I was particularly impressed with the way that you made Pansy likeable, though she was slightly too creepily cold for me. I loved your Ginny, though, and your Malcolm and Gruoch. I even liked the way you had Molly-the-prankster (which I've always believed in, myself) and slightly-mature-Ron. Remus is a great Minister for Magic - I've never seen that before - and I loved the description of Tonks in battle mode. ("My Lord!" "Nott?" "A spy!" "Where?" "Right here!")
One of the only things that I disliked about this was the coldness that became a part of Harry. I can see how it would be neccessary, though, and inevitable after a long period spent with a small amount of people for the sake of learning how to kill people.
That said - thank you for simply being around! You're a great point to bring up when a certain friend of mine is particularly sceptical about the quality of fanfiction.
Maybe you will do another epic-length piece, again? I do love them, though attempts to write them myself have failed. Miserably. Oneshots are all that I seem to have commitment enough to stick with.
Well, back to real books I suppose ;)

GinnyLover posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2011 6:43pm for 8 - Finishing

There is a lot of loose ends you need to tie up. Plz write another chapter.

Krsi posted a comment on Thursday 13th October 2011 4:52am for 8 - Finishing

I've read this many times now and always love it, but what happened to the end? I remember some out takes (Dumbledore and McGonagall taking out a giant, etc...)
I personally really like the way you slowly transitioned adding Ginny as a "mate", and would love a sequel.
Thanks
~Krsi

lwj2 posted a comment on Thursday 29th September 2011 3:16am for 8 - Finishing

Excellent story, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

One item I noticed: The Ruger Redhawk does not have a safety, the Webley-Fosbery Automatic Revolver is the only one of which I know that does have a safety.

ref.: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Webley-Fosbery_Automatic_Revolver

http://www.thegunzone.com/webley-fosbery.html

Addlcove posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2011 6:23pm for 8 - Finishing

just re-read this for the third or forth time, still makes me react to all the emotions that you manage to put through your stories, I am in awe at your talents as a writer and hope you will never stop sharing your works with us.

Freakshow13 posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2011 1:52am for 8 - Finishing

I've read your story a few times now and i love it just as much as the first time i read it. I would love to know where it goes from the cliffy. Even a oneshot would be welcome. And in closing just wanted to say that i think that you are a wonderful writer and cant wait to see what you come out with in the future. Thanks again Travis

omnscient0 posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 2:11am for 8 - Finishing

I was liking this story until you got to the whole Ginny situation. Which felt really out of place and really out of character. That sort of ruined what otherwise a really good story.

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 6:23am for 8 - Finishing

I really enjoyed this a lot :) I guess you could tell LOL

Serph Black posted a comment on Tuesday 15th March 2011 6:19am for 8 - Finishing

Masterful! A truely great work that i will enjoy for years to come!

Sweetdoggie posted a comment on Monday 7th March 2011 5:55am for 8 - Finishing

Just wanted you to know I really enjoyed this story and the unusual pairing was quite refreshing. You handled the wrap-up nicely. I liked the way Bellatrix met her end, Draco too for that matter. It was a nice read. Thanks for sharing.

keichan2 posted a comment on Sunday 20th February 2011 7:44pm for 8 - Finishing

This is a nice story!
I liked the initial ideas (both Pansy hiding herself -- and I now remember Lucifael doing the same in Futures Insight 01: Futures Insight -- and her family looking for Harry to make an alliance) and the way you went through the story.
There were some interesting ideas (like the Elf Council) and I did find it interesting that you made the wizarding shields stopping bullets (most authors prefer to make them either not able to, or just useful for one bullet)

And the ending was funny :-D

Thanks for sharing.

DeeZeno posted a comment on Tuesday 15th February 2011 4:57pm for 8 - Finishing

I sorta want a sequel to this story... It is REALLY good!!!

nikkole posted a comment on Sunday 30th January 2011 7:22am for 8 - Finishing

best story ever. It was a [u]delight[/u] to read.