White Knight, Grey Queen
7 - Consequences
By Jeconais
Reviews
Maxennce posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 12:15am for 7 - Consequences
Great chapter, love your ideas and how Ginny's been accepted into the family and how Harry refused to step down in the wake of the Weasley parent temper. Loved the 'finite incantiuem' for that howler, it was great. Keep up the great work, looking forward to your next chapter Tim
Cheers
Max
CK2 posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 11:48pm for 7 - Consequences
An excellent addition to a great story.
Keep up the good work.
Bill posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 10:27pm for 7 - Consequences
WOOOHOOOOO! Taking Nott's magic? AWSOME! There is one thing, though... Ginny's place between Pansy and Harry. I don't know how to put it, other than bluntly - It looks (from this chapter) that its going to turn into a threesome. Ginny kissing Pansy, her constant presense between the couple when they sit, her sharing of power when Harry stole Nott's strength... the list goes on. Was it your intention to come across like this? Good chapter none-the-less. I look forward to the 8th (and final, I believe?) chapter.
Elle posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 9:25pm for 7 - Consequences
This story is simply amazing. I know you're putting out bits at a time but..arg!! i wish i could wait to read it all at once. it's like someone handing you all but the last two chapters of HalfBlood Prince! hehe. seriously though, wonderful work. more please!!
Aimee posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:52pm for 7 - Consequences
This is an amazing story. I have never read a Harry Pansy story before, and I am loving it. You are an amazing writer, and I love reading your stories
Kim posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:47pm for 7 - Consequences
Wow! This was just great!!! You truly have a gift for writing. I have to say I enjoyed this much more than HBP. When can we expect the next chapter??? Do you plan to begin writing your own novel someday?
Goyana posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:46pm for 7 - Consequences
Yay a new chapter. I love this story. The best part of this whole thing is when you made Dumbledore ask to follow Harry. That is very interesting. I hope the next update is a day or 2 earlier then this one.
mmb posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:30pm for 7 - Consequences
Brilliant. After reading the HBP, it's
refreshing to have something decent to look forward to reading.
Well done.
bill posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:57pm for 7 - Consequences
your story rocks
thegimp posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:53pm for 7 - Consequences
i love your stories. it was great. i saw only a few minor errors in this chapter but they weren't anything that detracted from the story and i forgot where they were once i finished. anyways, great job man and i can't wait for the final chapter(i mean it, please hurry).
ps: you have the pefect setup for Ginny and Daphne to become mistresses to Harry and Pansy :D.
jaques posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:27pm for 7 - Consequences
great chapter. can't w8 for the finale.
The Silent Legend posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:04pm for 7 - Consequences
Excellent. You manage to capture the characters so well, while advancing the plot at the same time. Brilliant work. I eagerly await the next chapter, and am impressed at the level of detail you use in writing this. And everything else you write. Nice work.
Samantha posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:53pm for 7 - Consequences
Once again another wonderful chapter. I don't think I've ever see a fan fic where Remus is given a chance to make a real difference so I can't wait to see what he gets up to when he's Minister of Magic.
Meredith posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:50pm for 7 - Consequences
Don't leave us hanging. It was wonderful, although a little weird and hard to read after reading HBP. I love the fact that you have Ron, who is by far the most black and white of the characters having the most difficulty with the changes, even more so than Molly and Arthur. Thank you for another worderful update.
Adam Call posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:42pm for 7 - Consequences
Awesome! Hell of a chapter! Your details are simply amazing, and your ideas are brilliant! I cannot wait for your next chapter to be posted. Keep up the great and wonderful work, that is your story!
Darcie posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:19pm for 7 - Consequences
This story is wonderful. And let me tell you after reading HBP this story was like a breath of fresh air, this is how is should be.
Keep up the brilliant writing and I will be waiting for the next chapter, which I hope that you can post soon.
JLH posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:10pm for 7 - Consequences
Wow. Love the chapter. The ending especially. Hurry with the next. I need some more Harry Potter.. While HBP was a great book.. it just seemed to leave such an open ending.
brad posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 5:58pm for 7 - Consequences
wow and excellent chapter and the twist at the end was awesome tim. keep up the great wiork cant wait for the last chapter! man am i tired back to sleep for 2 hours then off to work on the graveyard shift! thank you for another wonderful reading experience Tim!
Philipe posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 5:48pm for 7 - Consequences
You known, i've seen people tell you that this chapter was the best, then say that the next one is better.. In my opinion, chpter cannot be consider individual pieces of a stories, they pieces of a puzzle, that when brought together, it creates (in your case) a masterpiece.. That being said, hell of chapter, really envolving, could stop reading to go to the bathroom, a fact that added to your incredible long chapter (noted that i'm in no way, shape or form sayind i don't like, au contrair) creates a certain problem..
I like Moody's reaction, it looked like what i thought he'd do... Ron's foot misplacement problem seem a little extrem, i'll bye the drunk thinghy.. Molly's reaction to Harry explanation i didn't really see the reason for it, but i trust your judgement.. If i can think of anything else i'll review again.. Ah!! Just love a sarcastic Dobby, one of my favorites scenes.. Had me laughing for a long time..
See ya Tim.
Philipe
"Post Scriptum"
Eowyn23 posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 1:05am for 7 - Consequences