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m4r13 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 10:53am for 2 - Understanding

I totally forgot... sorry : Happy Birthday Tim !

Marie

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 10:28am for 2 - Understanding

You know, I'm actually looking forward to when you write a bad story, just to see if you're human....and you say you don't write professsionally?  maybe channeling JRT???lol

Sarah posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 8:17am for 2 - Understanding

As usual, you give good story.  Since begging and pleading for more looks tacky (and is probably useless) I will refrain.

Thanks for the update and happy belated birthday

m4r13 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 8:03am for 2 - Understanding

I really like the kind of relationship they share. Like brother-sister. Kinda funny when you see the princess Slytherin wanting him so much. You're dealing with all the little things of OotP, the Quidditch ban, the occlumency with Rogue, etc. You gave us some answers. I love the Harry riding part. I love horses, and you can sometimes spot some people who are just natural with them. they don't need a lot of explanation, they're doing the right thing at the right time. Margret Tierow is strange though. She's new, no dinstinctive feature at all. Like a ghost passing through a wall in Hogwarts, too normal.

Good job to not explain all the Time turner story, how it works and all. We don't really need the explanation, just the goal and how he does it. The rape part seems a little rude. Snape hate Potter. Potter hate Snape. Even if he is "teaching" occlumency, something seems not right. Something miss. I love the Hedwig fly away immediatly. The break in the relationship with Mrs Weasley. In HP books she is the mother-figure for harry, but with his new family, he has Gruoch, kind of a mother for him. She seems to care for him. Like the other the Ron-Hermione go out just because Harry said so is to fast. Ginny is back to her 12 years old. But girls are so strange, isn't it ? :p

Dobby is equal to himself (can we say this in english ?). Abolutely nutters. I love him a lot, Hp without Dobby isn't Hp after all. Good argument with the Order btw. The eye surgery seems interesting. I will probably do it too this year, so... 8-)
The doctor reminds me of a scottish friend of mine, a little bit evil sometimes, but a great friend !

This chapter is really amazing. Hope to see the others soon !

Marie
#Crazy lazy frenchy girl#

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 6:03am for 2 - Understanding

I do not know what you are feeding your Muse but please do continue to do so if it gets great results like these. I cannot wait to see what legal actions will be taken against Snape due to the mental damage he delt Harry.

Rogue1615 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 5:44am for 2 - Understanding

Well this was a surprise.  Nice one though.

If this is how the rest of the series is going to be I cannot wait.

I am liking how you are putting a different perspective on things.  Interesting to see how ginny lost her chance just because of a comment meant to get bact at her brother.

Till later,
Rogue

Fay posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 5:38am for 2 - Understanding

Tim - a brilliant next chapter in what is turning out to be one of my favourite stories, and it's hardly even started yet. It is really great to see how well Harry gets on with Pansy's parents and I love the way that Pansy isn't perfect - it makes her that much more believable. Many thanks, you've really made my day! Fay

Mystwolf posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 5:37am for 2 - Understanding

Wow! That was definately worth the wait! I'm particularly pleased at the slowness of the relationship building with Harry and Pansy. It makes it much more believable. I also like how your characters are using 'Muggle' solutions to some problems, instead of going for wizard-only solutions. That has never really made sense to me in canon.

Anyway, keep up the good work! Here's yet another fan eagerly awaiting the next chapter, but no hurry. I know that creativity can't be rushed.

Mystwolf.

Gawl posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 4:18am for 2 - Understanding

I've always liked stories where Harry is independent from Dumbledore, but this is one of the best I've seen yet. I hope Snape gets whats coming to him soon.

Shaun posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 3:12am for 2 - Understanding

Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome.

Can't wait for chapter three, keep up the good work, ith is my favorite Harry/Pansy story, and seems to be more of a possibility than the other story's out there.

John posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 2:08am for 2 - Understanding

Hello Jeconais,

      I just wanted to wish you  a happy belated birthday, and I'm a little sorry that your not posting the next part next week.  Oh Well, I suppose I can wait for it.  I think the part that I liked most about this chapter was Dobby, and his protection of harry, not to mention the idea that the parkinsons came up with in regards to a central house elf place were they would be safe and protected from evil, cruel masters.

      My other favorite part is going to be/is the Harry/Ginny reaction when they find out that Ginny and Dean are not really dating, she just said that to bother her brother.  Tonks reaction will probably be a little humurous when we see her at the dinner in the next chapter.  Oh well, hope to see the next part soon.

John

Fasor posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 1:55am for 2 - Understanding

great, just great :)

Brad Crawford posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 1:02am for 2 - Understanding

WOW   An excellent couple chapters i cant wait to see more thank you tim! 

lizzy posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 12:09am for 2 - Understanding

Oooh I think I really like this fic.  I can see how the Parkinsons directness would be attractive to Harry.  He always wants to know what's going on around him and finding people who are allies, who he can work with and  mutually benefit from, is a blessing.

I love the bits about Ginny and how she's probably lost herself Harry.  If it was meant to be, it would come about.  I think your Pansy fits Harry much better then Ginny.  The fics I like that are Harry/Ginny have her much stronger then in canon I think.  Your Pansy will be a partner.  I like how your showing the direct efforts on the part of the Parkinsons to play matchmaker.  I bet Harry sees it and isn't too adverse at the moment either.  He knows they're strongly pureblood and if her parents are giving approval to a relationship then there's somethere for him to consider.  As said in the story, Harry doesn't play with people's hearts.

I can't wait to see what happens with the house elves and the goblins.  Heck, Harry will probably be making other alliances as well.  I also look forward to dinner with Tonks and, well, everything.  Good luck and happy writing!

Mickey posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 12:07am for 2 - Understanding

Vv

kensai posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 11:23pm for 2 - Understanding

Jeconais:

I state that it is us the readers, and not you who got a spectaculer present.  I hope your birthday was as good as the chapter 'flawless'!  On the other hand, I am distressed that this chapter is nothing but a tease, which leaves me quandering when I can look forward to six weeks of updates on this story.  Thank you for all the work you put into this and all the other Harry Potter works that you bless us with.

Ham posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 11:16pm for 2 - Understanding

Ok that was amazing!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I think this is one of the most unique pieces of Fanfiction on fandom and i cannot wait to read more.

Ham

Hilary posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 10:24pm for 2 - Understanding

This story is a very interesting take on the Slytherine!Harry/Independant!Harry plot line.  I'm especially amused by your take on Pansy.  What would a Slytherine girl who not necessarily dark and who wants to hide in plain sight do?  She'd be Pansy.

zaito1985 posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 10:15pm for 2 - Understanding

I like this series. So far it has a lot of things going for it... seldom used pairing, downplays the abuse (but captures the seriousness/extent of it), defiance against Dumbledore, amongst other things.  Has great detail, fun dialogue, and no (i havnt seen any) irritating grammer, spelling, misc mistakes. Between WN, GQ and Hope - you have produced some quality entertainment.

~Bill

Paul posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 9:54pm for 2 - Understanding

Wonderful i absolutely love this story and hate you at this moment. i think i'm going to die from the anticaipationover the next chapter.      

a few spelling errors were the only mistakes i noticed pansy says in the hospital scene "make up grow up" instead of make us