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John W. Conner posted a comment on Thursday 26th May 2005 4:18pm for 2 - Understanding

An excellent chapter.  More than lives up to the promise of the first chapter as well as the quality of your other work I've read.  It is my sincere hope that you won't keep us waiting to much longer before you let us see the rest of this.  That being said I will school myself to patience as I'd rather see a finaly crafted piece that took a while rather than a rushed out piece of junk.  :)  Keep up the excellent writting.

Flora posted a comment on Thursday 26th May 2005 2:18pm for 2 - Understanding

I really like this! I never like Dumbledore being portrayed as a fool, but I do think that this story works. When I first heard of it, my reaction was one of incredulity at the Harry/Pansy pairing, but then I read it, and it is very good. My favourite of all your stories is This Means War but this is competing for second place, definitely!

Sorry if this review makes no sense, I wrote it at 11:30pm...

Fash1986 posted a comment on Thursday 26th May 2005 12:50pm for 2 - Understanding

That´s really cool!!

Regards

Gwion Bach posted a comment on Thursday 26th May 2005 6:23am for 2 - Understanding

Pansy grinned.  “True.  It gives a whole new meaning to cause and effect.  We’re doing something because we know we did it because we didn’t see the outcome of us not doing it.”

Lines like these show how wonderfully written your stories are. They are well thought out and elegent in there own way. I enjoy your writting alot.

Maxennce posted a comment on Thursday 26th May 2005 5:09am for 2 - Understanding

P.S Happy Birthday Tim

Maxennce posted a comment on Thursday 26th May 2005 5:04am for 2 - Understanding

Great chapter, love your ideas with Pansy and Harry.  And with Ginny saying things like that, despite the fact that she is a teenager, she should be left to wallow in her misery.  I mean shit, if your going to say something like that to someone you want to be a potential boyfriend, expect him to look for someone else thinking that you don't want him.  So, loved your chapter, really am looking forward to the next one.  Keep up the great work

Cheers

Max

Daenin posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 5:15pm for 2 - Understanding

Wow!  I'm always impressed how you make each story unique.  I like the way you're handling the Harry falling for Pansy instead of Ginny.  It makes sense.  I love Malcolm as a character!   hmm... Harry's character and personallity are slightly different in this one, but then it's a different path he's taking, so .... I thank you for an  intriguing story, that's very well done!   :-)  

cronenus posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 9:59am for 2 - Understanding

thank you, thank you, thank you for part 2. I enjoy reading all your story's and ever sense I read the first part of this one I've been biting my nails waiting for the next parts to come out, hope the others are to come soon because I'm running out of nails to bite. ^_^

vic posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 9:48am for 2 - Understanding

i'm kinda thnakful that you sent that msg out by mistake, cos i really wanted to catch up with any updates you might have uploaded. anyway, great story, really loved it, and pls include me in your update list. cheers!

John posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 8:42am for 2 - Understanding

Wow Tim... you make me want to hate you. Now I have to wait a whole week for the next one. You suck man. Chapter was excellent though.

sonicdale posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 5:13am for 2 - Understanding

Samantha posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 2:08am for 2 - Understanding

You have a wonderful gift for writing Tim. It is rare to find a fan fiction writer who has enough faith in his words to give his readers just enough information to explain the story yet leaves them room to use their own imagination to fill in the gaps.  Good writing, whether it be fiction or non-fiction is meant to stimulate your mind and raise questions. It draws one into the story and leaves you thirsting for more even as you strive to fill in the gaps within your own mind. Too many fan fiction writers get caught up in showing off their own cleverness and fail to allow their readers that pleasure. Once again you've captured my imagination with your words. Thank you.

beney posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 9:13pm for 2 - Understanding

wow.you really are a great writer. you make every ships you write seems to work.

Crystal posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 8:49pm for 2 - Understanding

ah man. I'm so in love with this story! I want to have it's babies!

My first Harry/Pansy story and I can't wait for more!

Fanfictionfanatic posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 8:15pm for 2 - Understanding

I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your story. There just isn't enough good Harry/Pansy stories out there. Saying that, I must say that this is the best one I have ever read.  I like the Pansy you have created, she is smart, tough, and has a good heart.  Harry, is very well written as well. He is evolving and growing from a boy to man in a wonderful way. The interactions between Harry & Pansy have been great. Loved Pansy teaching him to ride a horse, and can't wait until Harry gets Pansy back up on a broom. I look forward to reading more of this amazing story.

Malaskor posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 8:10pm for 2 - Understanding

Excellent story. I simply love it :)
I have only one nit-pick about the first chapter, there were a couple of scene changes where (due to a POV change) 2 consecutive scenes started in way so close to identical (imho) that I had to check if I had somehow scrolled wrong - it distracted a bit from the chapter. The 2nd one was way better, also because that problem didn't show up.

Very interesting how Dumbledore is manipulating all around him with his changing the topic on Tonk's questioning to what Dobby meant...

I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out - I see several interesting possibilities in my immagination, now I'm curious if I come close.

Keep up the great job and thanks for sharing

Greg J posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 7:55pm for 2 - Understanding

This is a good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next chapter! Keep up the good work and update again soon. :)

Jack posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 6:29pm for 2 - Understanding

Outstanding as ever!  Man... I am dying to see what happens when Tonks goes to dinner. 

I do have a question.  In chap 1 you mention that two years after they start dating, the Parkinsons got married, in a wedding attended by Lily and James Potter (which implies that Lily and James were already married, but doesn't have to mean that).  In this chapter, Gruoch mentions that she started dating Malcom in their 5th year.  Are the dates right?  In which case they got married in seventh year or fairly shortly thereafter.  Also, were Lily and James in the same year?

I really like Harry here, as well as Pansy.  Your other characters work well, and I am particularly interested in this version of Tonks.  Still, for me the stand-out character so far is Dobby!  Got to see more of that elf!  Standing up to both Snape and Albus... too cool. 

I am a little sad at the way things are going for Ginny, being as I started as a H/G fan, but such is often the way with teen romance. 

Looking forward to more!

neely61 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 3:46pm for 2 - Understanding

Ok, thought I'd read all of your stuff.  Didn't even know of this site.  Like the story so far.  Haven't ever read anything quite like it.  Is it going to be Harry/Pansy or Harry/Ginny?  Are there cat fights in the making?  Can't wait.  How do I get updates for this story?  It's not loke Pheonix or ff.net.

pamr6 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 11:01am for 2 - Understanding